darkluster4 Posted July 12, 2016 Share Posted July 12, 2016 Before a certain point in my life, I would have said no. I would have taken the time to at least send farewells and settled my affairs, and by that time I would probably reconsider. Now, I would say yes in a heart beat. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warlock Posted July 13, 2016 Share Posted July 13, 2016 Loved the story, just went so fast. I wish that last paragraph was at least half as long as the rest of the story. I would want to see him grow. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevertoobig Posted July 13, 2016 Share Posted July 13, 2016 If I got the this chance, I'd take it immediately. It has been my dream for years 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanugumo Posted July 13, 2016 Share Posted July 13, 2016 To be honest. I would have probably NOT taken the strongest one. Unless the guy would make the "make dumber to animalistic levels"; "memory loss"; "loss of identity" parts are out of the formula. I would like to still be me, remember everything that happened in my life & would still like to keep my intelligence, thank you very much. ^^;; 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thebiggerthebetter Posted July 26, 2016 Share Posted July 26, 2016 PERFECT STORY! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MatMtl Posted August 3, 2016 Share Posted August 3, 2016 I would totally do it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NinjaAlchemist Posted September 7, 2016 Share Posted September 7, 2016 Aw... Super disappointed that there's no part 2 to this. Is it planned? Otherwise this story is just kinda sad lol. But regardless, great writing and originality. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
musclehintz Posted September 9, 2016 Share Posted September 9, 2016 On 7/11/2016 at 5:34 AM, BigBullTrainer said: I am glad my story is being enjoyed so. I wrote it in a single session on a whim after talking to a friend. That's wonderful! I really enjoyed reading your story, and it's awesome to hear you wrote it all in one session! I guess when you get that lightning-strike inspiration to write something, well, you can really make something great! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigBullTrainer Posted October 18, 2016 Author Share Posted October 18, 2016 On 9/7/2016 at 4:18 PM, NinjaAlchemist said: Aw... Super disappointed that there's no part 2 to this. Is it planned? Otherwise this story is just kinda sad lol. But regardless, great writing and originality. There is a part two under the title "Out of Control" part one is already written part two of the same story started taking on a life of its own and is still being written. There are more characters, character development, and the environment that it all takes place in is being flushed out a lot. When I say its taking on a life of its own, I mean that somewhere in the writing I ended up accidentally world building around a city that revolves around exponential muscular growth. I will either end up cutting the story into smaller chunks, create a setting I use for multiple different stories or really flesh things out and let the community have at it and have their own adventures in my creation 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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