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I'm with Arpeejay - well executed, well written with vibrant descriptions and an interesting scernario!   The level of detail is just enough to sustain and increase our interest without overwhelming the action!

 

I'm heading to the beach and looking for a dolphin! 

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38 minutes ago, Mdlftr said:

I'm with Arpeejay - well executed, well written with vibrant descriptions and an interesting scernario!   The level of detail is just enough to sustain and increase our interest without overwhelming the action!

 

I'm heading to the beach and looking for a dolphin! 

Silly billy! Dolphins are not fish! I will be interested to find out what kind of Fish the Grow Fish is!

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Thanks @arpeejay and @Mdlftr!

The characters and detail are what pushed this one into more than I expected it to be... When I started writing it just before midnight, I didn't realize all of that would devolop as it did. Crazy how it just flows once you start writing it down!

dammit now I have to research fish?! I was just going to half ass that part lol.

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