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This is awesome! I hope we see more! I'm hoping Jonas was just a hint of a more in-depth growth story to be told. Something 3-4 times longer that showcases the mental descent and physical ascent of the narrator.

Keep it up! This is almost exactly my main wish/fetish right here.

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Hehehe, this is even more evidence that Eric is Jonas' master. >;P Though gotta say that the protagonist is pretty clueless about it, i mean: We can see it clear as day. But I guess he is too distracted in his mind to really see it as well. x3

I am looking forwards to the next part.^^ <3

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Garrix, I just came across this story.  This is your FIRSTone?  impressive!

 

Your gift for description and dialog are really spot on.  You obviously understand how to describe workouts and what is (reasonably) a realistic growth process.

 

Thank you for contributing such a sexy, well written story!

 

It makes super growth super sexy!

 

Thumbs up!
 

Mdlftr

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