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Parent's Weekend with Dad


erinbbby

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I don't know where this is going but I am intrigued. My heart goes out to the protagonist though.

I look forward to reading more of this.

*Edit: My one critique is that 5'8" and 130 is nowhere NEAR 'total shrimp' level speaking as someone who is 5'9" & 160 lbs.

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It could be his mindset as a character, he is constantly comparing himself to his father so to him 5'8 130# does seem small, even though realistically it is just the lower end of average.

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Please tell me that the protagonist will be the bigger one at the end of the weekend. But not too different in personality. <='(I hate it when good people are overshadowed by their cocky dads and humiliated because of it. <='(

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