Popular Post SoupBacons Posted March 16, 2015 Popular Post Share Posted March 16, 2015 Well, Growth Powder title is the best I could come up with for now - I'm aware that it's quite a generic title, or at least one that might have been taken before. I've done a bit of searching and haven't found a story called this, but if there is one please tell me so I can change the title, just to avoid any confusion/conflict/whatever. ///// It was a hot afternoon, and Max was out – riding on his bike, up on a hill near the place he lived. It was summer, and the Sun was hot – Max stopped and placed his right foot on the ground, squinting, he looked over the suburbs. He took off his shirt and took a few glugs of his water from a water bottle he brought with him. He was breathing heavily – his legs hurt from all the pedaling, he rubbed his left thigh with his hand, letting the sun hit his skin. Sweat was pouring off him, now – he was an athletic young man, playing soccer for the school team, but even for him, this ride was a bit hard. His thighs and calves burned, so he got off his bike, and sat down on the grass near him, just to rest. He leaned back on his elbows, laying down, stretching his legs. His chest was still going up and down, the pectoral muscles clearly visible on it, below them was a clearly cut six-pack, that showed just how in shape Max was. Still, even though his legs were strong and large, the bike ride up had taken its toll. ‘My God, that was fun.’ Thought Max, as he relaxed in the summer sun. He then looked around, and near him, he noticed something sticking out of the ground. He got up, standing up – all 6’1’’ of him – and slowly headed towards the thing, whipping off some dirt off his butt. ‘What’s this?’ He thought, as he got down on one knee – the pain started to go away slowly, and was replaced by a very nice pump – that was visible, as his muscles on his legs bunched up, clearly differentiated and fairly big. ‘Oh, it’s… it’s a fridge. That’s weird.’ He opened what seemed like a lid of a portable, small fridge – and he peeked inside. “Well, hello.” He said as he took out a jar filled with green powder – he read the label and raised his brows. ‘Oh my God – I know what this is.’ He stood up, looking at the jar, a bit confused. ‘This is a drink of some sort. I remember the commercials on TV. You like, dissolve it in water and drink it – at least that was the idea until the product was canceled some years back, before even reaching the shelves. Hm, I wonder if…’ He looked for the expiration date, and found that it was still ok to drink. He opened the lid and put his finger inside. He took a bit of the green powder and licked it off his finger. ‘Mmm… tastes like lime.’ He thought, closing the lid. ‘I wonder how this got here, actually I wonder why they never released this. Actually, the whole company kind of closed after that. No, wait – they rebranded. What were they called…? Oh, wait – they went into making bodybuilding supplies after that, weird turn. Wonder what happened, who knows… I’ll just take it home – hell, why not.’ Max strapped the jar onto his bike, quickly forgetting the few other jars of the stuff in different colors still left in the portable fridge behind him. *** He reached his house, and got in, after putting the bike into the garage. He put the jar on the table in the kitchen and went to get a shower. The shower felt great after a whole day of biking, though he was glad he got to exercise. After he got out of the shower, he looked at the scale near him. He stepped on it – it showed 190 lbs, Max nodded, satisfied – knowing that it was 190 pounds of pure, lean muscle. This got him thinking, how big was he now, he hadn’t measured himself in a while. So he took the tape measure from the cupboard, and started. ‘Hmmm…. Height… 6’1’’, that hasn’t changed hm?’ He thought, as he wrapped the tape around his biceps. ‘Yup, 15 inches – nice. And chest…’ He had a bit of trouble with this one, but he managed. ’48…. Waist…’ He slid the tape around his waist ‘…25 inches.’ He flexed his bicep to himself in the bathroom mirror and smiled – looking at his lean, tall self. ‘I like this.’ He thought. Then, he put on his clothes and went to get something to eat – he was starving. Then, he noticed the jar on his kitchen table. ‘Oh right, I forgot about this.’ He quickly took one spoon and mixed it in with some water, as he got some food from the fridge. He went over to the TV, sat down on the couch and drank the whole thing at once. ‘Wow, I was thirsty.’ He thought, as he began to eat. ‘Hm, what day is it tomorrow? Oh, right – Monday. Ugh, oh well, can’t wait to see the guys at school I guess.’ [but, what this 18 year old did not see at that moment was what was happening inside his body. There was a reason why the product was cancelled – and it was because of the… interesting side effects it had. Inside, the powder instantly became absorbed into his bloodstream, carrying almost magical nutrients to his muscles. The dose he took wasn’t that big, so he didn’t even notice the changes that were occurring. Underneath his clothes, his pumped thighs grew ever so slightly, gaining more strength, as he laughed at the cheesy jokes, his abs contracted, yet – they too were bigger, like his pecs and arms, in fact he whole had grown a bit – then after a few minutes – it stopped. He would probably attribute it to the pump, but either way – now he was a bit stronger, and a bit bigger.] ///// Well, here's a new story, this is all just a short set up, I'm hoping to make this one longer, more varied and interesting with more characters than before. He's just found the powder, but there's still a whole lot left in the fridge, and who knows what will happen if he decides to share this at school. Anyway - hope you like it. 5 32 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
synthex Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 pretty well-written, but short and simple. you at least got my attention, i'll keep reading~ thanks for sharing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dae Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 good start, im intrigued to see where this goes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoupBacons Posted March 17, 2015 Author Share Posted March 17, 2015 pretty well-written, but short and simple. you at least got my attention, i'll keep reading~ thanks for sharing Thanks, I guess the length varies from story to story doesn't it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theseventhwave Posted March 17, 2015 Share Posted March 17, 2015 Great start! I am definitely looking forward to more. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayakitayama Posted March 18, 2015 Share Posted March 18, 2015 Next part please!:-) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goremeridian Posted March 21, 2015 Share Posted March 21, 2015 Well you've already established a sexy protagonist, not to mention a potentially massive supply of muscle growth catalyst, and so I for one will definitely keep reading! A really good start, SoupBacons! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoupBacons Posted March 21, 2015 Author Share Posted March 21, 2015 Great start! I am definitely looking forward to more. Thanks! Next part please!:-) Thank you, and there will be more. Don't worry. Part two on... Monday. Well you've already established a sexy protagonist, not to mention a potentially massive supply of muscle growth catalyst, and so I for one will definitely keep reading! A really good start, SoupBacons! Also, thank you and everyone else as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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