ThePecman Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 And that's very good writing, too. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 I don't remotely get it, myself - it's Transformers gone Muscle Gigantism, which is a blank for me - but there is no question but that it is intelligent, and skillfully written. Way above the bar. It's just me. I don't get Transformers, either. I guess you had to be part of that generation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goremeridian Posted December 19, 2015 Author Share Posted December 19, 2015 Ha ha, Transformers? I would never have cited that as an influence, but who knows? I really appreciate the feedback, guys. Crafting stories is fun, and I really try to write as well as I can. Thank you for everything you say to me, positive or negative. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarado28sp Posted December 21, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2015 When is the next chapter coming ???!?!?!? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mario2007 Posted January 20, 2016 Share Posted January 20, 2016 Gotta bump this. An AWESOME story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
convolution Posted January 22, 2016 Share Posted January 22, 2016 Great job Huge scope, lots of interesting characters, and giant hot men! I want to see the movie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarado28sp Posted January 27, 2016 Share Posted January 27, 2016 When id the next chapter coming??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gogr2 Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 Happy 1st anniversary! When will we see more chapters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sssska Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 How about the idea that the alpha males are the wrong direction of human evolution, Lewis helps Adam becoming the real musclegod and defeats the alpha, saves mankind? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bear Posted March 15, 2016 Share Posted March 15, 2016 Really great. Thank you for writing this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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