m/m Superhot story. This is not a story I wrote. The author is Adoroimuscoli, who has also a Deviantart account...

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... It was too long for me to translate, so I used an online translator. I hope the translation is understoodable or at least the meaning of the sentences is deducible. I don't know if Adoroimuscoli wouldn't have wanted me to post his story here, but, as you can find it online, I think there are no problems. Here you go:

EYES OF ICE

Be the alpha male of the entire town was really high.

At school and in the gym I knew everyone. And everyone knew what was

my place and especially what their place. At school I dettavo

the rules, simply. Trying to decide who should play every day my

homework, who I had to sit next to in class for

performing them for me, leaving her practically white, and who

had to give me a daily protein and nutritious snack. In addition

with many of the professors, stabilivo myself question vows,

and without that not even they could get the minimum question ben. Not that

I was stupid, or that I was not able to do the tasks alone:

modestly I had better things to do than bother with those useless

school commitments. My passion was the cult of muscles and the

My Kingdom was the gym. In the gym, when I was training I, i.e. each

afternoon for at least five hours, others knew that they had to

give me space and leave me the tools with the highest posted loads,

so that their insignificant workouts were slowed and me

tray get in my session.

But being the dominant male of the entire town was well

other. For example, you can choose the best girls of all

aware that would inevitably fall at my feet, despite

the rumors put about by my previous prey, had informed

all of them, what kind of profiteer bastard I am. All girls

the area it knew very well by now that they're coming with me,

I would use with no regard, wildly scopandomele

an entire night, that is currently practised by all their vital energy and then leave them

battered in body and spirit, devastated, unable to fall in love with

any other guy for the rest of their lives. But despite this,

I knew that none would have dared refuse to try that experience

shocking, dreaded as sought. They could not in fact escape

to my charisma, abducted as they were from my muscular physique and powerful, from

My manly face that made them tremble the knees at every my gaze, and

from my equipment which had become legendary among all my

acquaintances, and not only.

But as if not enough girls, there were also the frocetti, i.e.

every male I went to pose look, virtually every

Guy who I came to genius of bend to my will. Some yielded

immediately, it was enough to just flettergli in front of a bicep, that often,

view my top height, went to print directly on their

face, well impressed before their trembling eyes. Others dare to

resist a minimum in front of my desires. But nevertheless it was while

always enough that the firm I held both arms with my

single hand by squeezing the elbows, and that with the other started to

gently, without schiaffeggiarli have split the cheekbones as you

would be deserved, to start them crying like girls getting

so the more obedient and schiavetti subject of

early. Only in one case I had to push over, or with the

the former coach of the gym, which initially did not

tolerate my ways of doing in the weight room. But he had to change his mind soon

When once with a punch I did pass out severing his nose and

especially when found crying while the violently sodomizzavo

without any lubrication. The day I came to know that had changed

gym and in its place came a new much more instructor

compliant.

All this was fantastic. Be ME was fantastic.

I was thinking all these things while I was absentmindedly watching

the football match on television, when my thoughts were

suddenly interrupted by the sound of some subdued coughing

from between my legs. The boy that I had chosen today

to make a long and relaxing pump during the match, which could

to see only a tuft of blond hair between my quads, you

was revealing indeed a disappointment. I took a bit of muscles

legs, and immediately heard him thrashing around trying to moan from the pain,

then stretch your thighs, and he broke away from my cock that was

barely swallow the Chapel, starting to wheeze with

his face red like a paonazzo pepper. I bent down and took it from the neck

lifting effortless while I get up on your feet: "you really are a

Shery insignificant dear friend mine, you'd better come back behind the

McDonald's counter where I found, and the next I come to take

something, don't try to ask me to pay the Bill would otherwise not

I'll be so courteous and ... What a fucking be needless are? Almost trthirty

years can you even do a pump as it should in a eighteen years old! " AND

Having said this the scaraventai way; He even touched the ground,

collecting all his miserable forces, ran away in less than no

say between groans and moans.

At that point, however, the desire to see the game I had passed. Was the

right then for an evening workout extra fitness facility. But what

Yet I did not know, was that that night at the gym I met

person that I would forever changed his life.

That night, the gymnasium was half-deserted, and this allowed me to train

for a couple of hours in maximum concentration. Evitai to observe the

shellfish I pacing around, that as usual they

pathetically fake train for estasiarsi instead on my big

muscles Flex, because fortunately most of them

was stationed in the Department of cardio while I was now only

the hard-core of the weight room.

After the first exercises for your arms, I stood at the mirror ammirarmi

huge masses of biceps, deltoids, of venting as snowballs

Cannon from tiny and slim canottierina, those with sleeveless

two fillets instead of straps. Mirror at Pulcheria deltoids and

seeing harnesses, spark of lightning reflexes become shiny from sweat

that dripped copiously to the flanks or dripped onto the floor. Then

taken to push loads, that no one had ever even remotely

raised in this as in other gym in town.

Then I did squats with a barbell weight almost curved discs of

cast iron, loaded on their shoulders, while I watched the quadriceps explode and

slabbrare definitely the black lycra shorts. The separation between

the two muscle along the thigh extension was

clearly visible, deep and straight, up to the knee, even when

I felt the muscles relax, to become a grand canyon to each

contraction. It was as if each leg had two narrow thighs one

side by side! And so it was also the time of the pectorals, for

which made many exercises to the bench, with slowness and precision,

feeling for each repetition the big muscles expand, creating a real and

their wall of flesh across my chest, often inches and

centimeters. This rate also pushed her nipples now inevitably

erect and hard to pull those threads of the tank at scontrarcisi

continuously, deformandone the path and forcing the poor

t-shirt to get stuck in the crack that formed between the pectorals

to all my single movement. But when stufai me of that disorder, with a

I grabbed his hand and I tore away shirts, that sfibrò along the

my back very wide and was off as it were tissue paper,

and I threw in a corner of the weight room. I was so bare-chested and with

wearing only tiny lycra shorts that haltingly contained

in front of my cock, which had almost total control, in

how I avoided at that moment of excite him too much not to disintegrate the

shorts, followed immediately by my big balls like

lemons. Also on behind my buttocks, a shed of strong muscles

and beautiful to see, balloon-shaped protruding out,

along with quadriceps put a strain on there too, resistance

of the material.

I turned toward the mirror and made a Most Muscular and ... a celebration of

I parried muscles before, it seemed that deltoids, biceps, pectorals,

and even your ABS, those eight large and square blocks that

extra training that evening I had overlooked, well it seemed that

all those muscles were to race to go at one another, and come to

evidence, declaring each to be as inflated as

developed, the most powerful, but did not manage to win this

competition between excellence, because my whole body was

simply divine!

I could declare myself satisfied for the moment, and so I started in

dressing room. My entry was characterized as always by the roar of the door

that to my boost went crashing toward the wall. It was my way

"gentile" to warn that no one was to be found in showers, even

because I was going to squash the wall any inferior beings

that they were found by accident in the shower with me, given my

dimensions. And in fact, I noticed that a guy guizzò out hastily

from the box, although still soaped, going to sit

his stuff for cleaning, without ever turn their gaze, even according to

head down as to excuse his presence.

I went then in showers, opening all taps to a maximum of

and temperature, thus causing a cloud of steam, which ben

It was soon extended to the dressing room. In fact I loved the hot shower

After training, was the best way to relax tense muscles, which

Despite that treatment remained hard as steel anyway, but

However loose and ready to new efforts, if I had yet

desire. I began then to insaponarmi amid the steam and hot

making me caressing your muscles by several bursts of water. And while a

He sprayed me onion boiling water on his back, another on

face and another on the thighs I began to touch my nipples,

letting the blood flow, I felt this and copious in each

muscle group, the cock'd roll, which is already remarkable in

in its size and in its thickness, immediately taken to harden

becoming the beast that many girls and some guy in

the city had helped make famous. I continued to play with

nipples, defying the force of my chest with one of my

biceps and triceps. And I started to become pinched, to squeeze all the

every pectoral muscle with a force that would have disintegrated bones

a normal person but that only gave me even more

excitement. Seguitai so, until I let go up to

feel that powerful and liberating quiver that always accompanied with a

inhuman roar, and that marked my orgasm post workout, the only

concedessi me alone, in the privacy of my muscles and my

self contemplation. I looked around, and through the steam I observed

that, as usual, the vast array of jets of cum went crashing

against the tiled walls of the shower area, complete project for many

tiles. And while everything was already seeping towards the floor, the

recent sketches continued to embellish the walls, becoming more

weak early, but everyone always much more powerful than an entire

cumshot by a normal person.

I still managed to relax a few seconds and then went out, going towards my

bench in the locker room, where I left my stuff in the

workouts-of course I had some need to close my things in

a locker, since nobody would ever dream of taking them to ME!

But when I approached the bench that I had marked as mine and

that was left free of all even in my absence, I noticed

the impossible. For a moment I thought to have lost the orientation due to

all that steam, although the locker room wasn't so great, and

in fact it was not so: that was precisely my bench, only that he was

happening something unacceptable and simply

inconceivable. Someone, someone who wasn't me, someone who was not the

subscribed, occupying my place!

It was distinguished for the steam, and as I was still

a few meters away, but was clearly a person who, after

covered, it was reorganising things to leave. Probably you

was one of the worms that had come to the gym, so whilst

for the duration of his pathetic training to loiter in the room

cardio. I felt a mixture of anger and adrenaline in salirmi veins

see that template using my personal bench as if it were a thing

ordinary. But then ragionai a second. The person would certainly be

new, and none of the workers had warned of the situation. Yes,

It was the only plausible explanation. However both the person in

question, and the Assistant on duty at the gym, went punished, if

nothing else to show to everyone else, that the rules placed by me

they were made to be respected and that ignorance of the same does not

would never be accepted as an excuse for those who sgarrava. Probably

would enough exemplary punishment, I told myself, but significant, a

humiliation in front of the few others present, provided that this novice

He could survive at the sight of my body that towered

my face crossed by a fiery expression to ominous.

With such intentions in mind I approached him, took a few steps

that was my bench. Now I had a more complete view of

character: a young boy, of medium stature, so much more

below me, at that moment I gave her back, being bent to

the bench in an effort to recap his duffle bag. He was dressed only with

a shirt that came out two arms muscular but not tonic,

completely glabrous, while under she was wearing a baggy jeans from and

of athletic shoes. Their backs were sufficiently large,

though not powerful, and slender neck, but not without some small

muscle groups around the base of the head so

harmonious. In particular had the smooth but uncombed hair,

characterized by an extraordinary red, a shade

extremely vivid and turned on, and that clear complexion contrasted

sharply with the perennial natural Tan of my skin

olive. Overall it was a guy I could define by physicist

normal, no more than a few years older than me and nothing

well-muscled, but with some traits that could arouse

attention. Mentally I got listed among possible guys from

turn at the first opportunity in adoring frocetti, but for the moment I

I would have had to devote to punish him for his wrongdoing, perhaps unaware

but still deserving of punishment.

I approached again until almost orchestral ritornello behind and to voice

high said, ' boy, this is my bench, and you have taken

abusively, how the fuck did you leave? ". He turned towards me

While you gather from the bench, and in doing so found himself with his face

before my pectorals, which after the pinches and massages that I had

filled in shower, it had swollen, and the most of them

shine even more than usual. I was watching the scene from above

of my stature higher, expecting the typical reaction that everyone

have in front of my naked and pumped physique: the usual amazing urletto

mixed with fright, the elegant retreat, eyes that

shells with an expression of terror, and the arms moving in

How to make a shield, as if they could something against the force of

my muscles. But none of this happened. Strangely the guy who

I had not before seemed astonished to see what he had in front,

the huge masses of my pectorals, in the midst of what I

able at that time to sink all of his aquiline nose. Not

It seemed neither surprised nor scared, or at least was very

bravo to not let him understand.

In fact, after a few moments where she just stopped, looked up

then his gaze toward me, as long as the thick mane of fire of his

no hair left me crossing his eyes. And in that instant,

in the moment when my eyes crossed her and our

looks met, something happened. It was as if my heart

stop for a moment and something I kept suspended in midair, unable

to breathe, to move, to act or think. Her eyes were

intense, huge, insightful, beautiful, but at the same time, a tremendous

just darker color white, furrowed by celestial knurls, so

Don't miss special way to stop them. In addition, at the

same time that look communicated a depth of character and a

non safety feared nothing, as forged from suffering and from

fatigue of a young life but intense. A confidence that sent

immediately an idea of indestructibility. I was lost in that

vision, intent to see those eyes so amazing to the point of

I realize the words that I was addressing, in an accent that

betrayed its origins in the North East of Italy. Was responding to my

little joke before, with a simple: "I'm sorry, I didn't know that

they were awarded ". And that said, walked away with the

shoulder bag. I was stuck for several seconds after he walked

via. Then, slowly, resumed control of myself. I realized I

have the half-open mouth, much to the astonishment of the situation and a little

for the trouble that I was breathing. Yes, the thing that I realized

immediately after was the pain, because my heart was beating madly in

chest without mentioning to stop. Then, immediately after, I felt

an erection frightening stiffen my cock to levels never seen before,

almost at the threshold of physical pain. The shaft of my cock was bulging as

If we had pumped in gallons of blood, dominated by

naked Chapel and viola, frighteningly large as a fist

person.

It was as if my body was reacting only visual contact with the

boy, even before my brain itself if they would mind

all: I had indeed found someone that I had immediately granted,

I wasn't able to capture virtually effortlessly. AND

This incredible challenge was for myself, for my whole being,

a source of excitement and lust like never before. I focused on

my cock, starting at masturbarmelo with both hands, first

slowly, then slowly increasing the pace, then so furious. A

totally new thing for me because since I was a teenager just

developed, I had always had a girl or a boy available

If you take care of, and exactly when trying to decide not to cum I,

as I did a few minutes before leaving me to drive only

from the excitement of car muscle worship. But this time, for the first

time in my life, my Dick did not respond to my mental commands

not wanting to read low. And certainly not because I had come shortly

first shower, in fact I knew well that I would be able to come

dozens of times, even a few minutes without

practically the quantity of cum shots to fall for anything. After

several attempts I lose because fuck persisted to remain

always in a terrible, eccitantissima, mighty, purple erection and without

to some of the final orgasm and liberating. I began

even hurt, it was then that an animalistic ROAR and emisi

gave a violent punch to the flamboyantly deformandone metal bench

structure. There was only one way to get something off my chest and I knew what it was. I had to have

that guy, make it my own, own it and make him scream in pain and

from Ecstasy, under the mighty fury of my cock, which would

destroyed shot after shot in the body and soul, making him a

put in my worm orders, like the rest of my acquaintances. It was the only

so. It was the only option. Put me in haste, struggling

don't just let the cock and balls in the pants and briefs

overalls, so much so that it seemed I had slipped a large bottle under the suit

between my legs, but I do not care anything. I started then exit,

and came to the reception of the gym, I grabbed him by the neck man

He was on duty as Secretary, and the weight I lifted from the Chair "sellout:

"Give me the address of the guy who is just out, shit!" Strabuzzò

his eyes began to tremble and stammered shortly thereafter, as soon as you made

What I asked: "it was ... just ... today ... its

first day. Did the inscription and ... still I

remember ... the address: Via dei Platani... "50 number. I threw him to the ground,

without treating yourself of anything, and I rushed to the car,

idle speed heading toward that that address not far from

gym. In the heat not even asked the boy's name, which would be

been a problem not knowing to whom the entry phone, but not wanted for anything else

time to go back to ask. I realized soon when

I arrived, the House was a single, detached house. I Parked

with an erection between her legs, intact or even more

violent than before, now that I knew that I would have reviewed shortly. Mi

went over and played the front door of the House.

After a few moments the door opened with a click, I drove and

I walked in. The House was warm, very luxurious, but he wasn't there

track, nor anyone else. While I was just wondering who lived here

with him, I heard a voice coming from a hallway connected to

entrance hall: "come to my room!". The voice was his, evidently

had to wait for someone, I thought, and then I had a surprise

deadly for him! I went forth towards the direction from which came his voice, and

at the end of the long corridor semibuio, enriched by paintings of all kinds,

I went into what was a large richly decorated bedroom and

much more enlightened than the hallway. My eyes there was a

bit to get used to the powerful and intense light, but immediately after I noticed that

He was standing by the bed, completely naked and with our eyes

facing me. I should seize it by surprise and was still

Once he astonish me: everything, in fact, his reaction was

cold while I was instead taken on the counterattack. Soffermai look at me

sometime while he approached me. His physique was not anything

exceptional, as well as his cock, but her figure transmitted

harmony, security and elegance. Her skin was clear and

perfect, without or abrasions, liscissima and glabrous, almost artificial,

with just a tuft of red hair around the pubic bone. His body was

slender, almost Ethereal, but not too thin, and the overall impression

resulting was a beauty of yesteryear.

And then I met his gaze again, back in perdendomici,

While he was now just inches from me. I missed

strength to react, I knew that I had come to subdue me, but I

didn't realize also that those eyes were admired and not

countered. He raised a hand to me and touched a nipple

through the vest, gently squeezing it, while continuing to

staring at me intensely. The shock of pleasure and the thrill that departed from

my nipple was a wave that devastated the entire body, crossing

each muscle fiber, up to focus intensely on my whole

cock. Schizzai immediately, how come I had squirted in my life, in

the slip, unintentionally, unknowingly and without understanding a cock, filling

within seconds the sweatpants from my thick liquid and

viscous. I was in a new and different way than usual, with a vehemence that I

poured into a wild pleasure and moan with a vehemence that I

left without energy for several seconds, forcing me to bend over for

Earth sostenendomi with a knee while I breathed with difficulty. All

This while I fix it, or rather he kept staring at me,

even now, half-kneeling, were my eyes to watch

upwards to meet her and not the other way around. Soon after, with the

the same hand that had made me explode with just a touch, I took

Chin, gently, with a gentleness with firmness, and disruptive

He said: "you came to fuck, right? And what are you doing still dressed? ". No,

I thought, I didn't come here to get laid, but to subdue me, for

to become a my adoring servant, to conquer it and master it

under the force of my huge muscles and my huge Dick and powerful ...

No, it wasn't so that had to go, but those eyes and deep

I communicated more, that maybe after all, I still enjoyed

more if I had gone along with it, if I were entrusted to that soul

mysterious and unholy, which dwelled behind that look. And so I

stripped her naked, quickly, without making stories, noticing my pants

tracksuit zuppi still leaking sperm and my panties now

torn from an erection and an orgasm, that I had failed to

check. I was sure, however, to be able to conquer it soon

He saw what was able my cock; Perhaps, I thought, is not a

who Drools for muscles, but my cock certainly owes him pleasure as

wants to fuck, and thanks to my Stallion cock will remain without

breath ... I thought of this while I did lead to large and Latvian

handy while I did place lying on it, and while the

I looked around me fly above me with his legs astride on

My muscular abdomen. I felt the cock swell, become

hard and erect, driven not by my will but from what look you

charmed me, and from his hands that were palparmi the muscles of

chest and arms, without which I was able to react because

the excitement that I did overpower.

For a few minutes continued to overburden all my nerve centres

with skillful massage to stimulate your my erogenous zones

more sensitive and more delicate, pursuing to look at me with those eyes

streganti, then backed away, bringing her abdomen in line with my

Dick, until they arrived with the anus on the tip of my

Member. What did after incredible seemed almost to the limit of

Super-human, yet happened... Began to immerse herself on my cock,

slowly, opening his anus very narrow and perfect, without any

lubrication, up down, down, down on me without stopping,

until inghiottirmelo everything and touch my life with his

buttocks and. .. All over my cock, huge, was caught between the walls of his

anus, which for him seemed to be the most natural thing in the world,

Judging by his firm and resolute expression! I opened my mouth

in an attempt to form a groan of pleasure and wonder, even though I was

practically gasping for air, while all my muscles were contracts for

the spasm of pleasure I was receiving from my Dick. With eyes

shelled was going to issue a cry animalistic, but was preceded by him

I walked up a finger to his mouth as if to zittirmi, saying with a

toothy mentioned: "This is nothing ... Wait! ". And with this

shooting to move rhythmically, dancing on my cock, squeezing it and

dropping it, snudandolo for ricalarcisi immediately above, all while

even his, slowly, in a controlled manner, began to swell,

without becoming very large, but perfect showing and straight.

I was in Ecstasy, I had never tried anything like that. A person who

not only was able to take all of my Dick, but even there

play so casually as if it were the most natural thing in the

world ... Spasms of pleasure and pleasure I inondavano body, each

muscle fletteva yourself. Inspecting anything, not for long

locked myself moments his eyes unable to bear the situation and without

being able to do anything, then find myself always in the ocean of his

look every time riaprivo them to ... I was on the point of no return,

He played for several minutes, arching the back more and more,

groaning with pleasure, vibrating with each muscle fiber as a aims

violin string, standing with her arms clinging to the side of the bands

read and almost deformandone wrought iron structure, while shake

his fists from excitement to ... Until he told me, don't press me even

more than before the cock with her anus, "Behold, now come!", and for me it was

the absolute ecstasy. I began to blare and scream as I had never done before,

letting go of everything I had in the body, spouting litres

cum inside him, were soon pouring out of her anus and flood

My quadriceps and the underlying bed, while my muscles of

chest, abdomen, leg, and my whole being, were prey to

seizures and frightening and incredible gasps, led by a pleasure and

a pleasure never experienced before.

After minutes and minutes of that unsettling pleasure, I found that it was

removed from my cock and as I held her with one hand, with the other post

spoon-shaped at the top of the Chapel, carefully collected the last

fiotti di sperma. Then he brought his hand to his mouth and did indeed "taste somewhat

This excerpt of my masculinity, followed this

an expression of pleasure and a smile of appreciation. Always staying

sitting astride on my huge chest, supporting its weight without

fatigue, despite I was exhausted and still panting from tits more

sensation of my life, came to my face, and told me with a

voice barely noticeable but I printed in the brain and with one

look even more penetrating and intense than usual: "You taste good,

I think I'll keep it here with others ... "

Didn't understand what she meant, I was exhausted and couldn't think well,

my brain had trouble processing the intense pleasure I had just

tried, but inside I felt a deep bond with this

ice-eyed boy and fire-haired, that I had

given the most amazing experience of my life ... I did not understand anything

but when I came out even more, bringing his cock near

to my mouth, at first I was a bit puzzled, because I had never

had the Member of a guy so close to my face. In fact I was

What penetrated and transformed into frocetti even the guys more

masculine, and now here I was the cock of a guy near the

mouth, and I was strangely attracted to, I didn't know why but it seemed

that every thing that guy was worthy of attention ... Although my

brain refused the idea, my body was seduced by that!

Nice and straight, that was now sticking between my lips and

muscular, starting to fuck the mouth ...

It was only when I caught his eyes again and I noticed that I also

I was back in full erection just because of the feeling of his

cock between her lips, it was only then that I realized it was just

so that a guy who could give me as much pleasure had

every right on me, and that if I wanted to be happy and enjoy

like a fool, I should always and only do what he

wanted ... And with these thoughts in mind, I started to pump his cock

with greater conviction, with greater care. Inarcavo my lips to

tighten it gently into my mouth in such a way as to be able to

contain it all; I realized that I wasn't good, but I knew that I

I would put in efforts to improve and to enjoy at least one

infinitesimally small part than he did enjoy me. While I thought

all these things, I realized they already become his slave,

his succubus huge and muscle-bound, and his meat puppet and muscles

ready to run any command, won by my own pleasure, that he

had managed to blow up inside me. And it was at this thought

a tear ran down my cheeks and it was this that he

perceived, as well as had perceived all of me since the first time,

and immediately after observing his satisfied smirk, I felt his

hot semen fill up ears mouth and down along my

throat and. ..

[Hanugumo]

I wish you had proof read this story before posting, because it is a complete classic translate site translation and even though I usually love stories like these, I was to annoyed at the bad translation and the words I did not know what they meant. ^^;; That was all kind of off putting to be honest.

[muscle16a]

"Dettavo" - means "Dictate" (first person indicative) in Italian.  Seeing that word in the first paragraph explained the odd grammar and sentence structure in the entire story.

 

Fortunately, it did NOT take away from the enjoyment of reading the story!  All I felt was a bit guilty for being a typical monolingual American who speaks only English.  (However, having grown up in New Jersey, I know some Italian . . . which is a residency requirement in New Jersey!)

[oneplainguy]

I am the author of this story in italian language. It was published in my yahoo group called "adoro i muscoli" that means "I worship muscles"... hope you enjoyed it even with in this very bad translation

[Ro20316]

you know what you can do make it more understandable, you should take it and clean the mistakes, the translation from sites is really poor and it's better if after that you proof read it.

[Guest]

Barely understoodable, but I bet it was incredible in the original Italian.