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Great start. We haven’t had a story like this in the forum for a while now.
 

Love the premise. You can do so much with it. Will be interesting to see if Ivan accepts his new identity and becoming comfortable with it - getting used to the endless submission and to asserting his authority. He doesn’t necessarily needs to be a jerk but it can be a nice character development (that can yield hot scenes....) if this is the direction you wanna go with the story. In any case, looking forward to see what you’re doing with it. Hoping you will stick with it - this is a very promising concept. Thank you. 

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