cutlerfan Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 [Spoiler Alert] Wow! An incredible tale of growth and giving in to the lust for size. A happy ending after they came to the brink of disaster. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cutlerfan Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 [Spoiler Alert] I honestly can't say I blame Danny for growing his husband so huge. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinevenson42 Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 Awesome story, there is not enough out there about couples and muscle growth, so this actually gives me ideas! Plus, your ability to craft characters and add such erotic detail is something everyone should take note of. Thanks! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toro Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 I would have liked him to become a fucking alpha and ram that huge cock up his husband ass. He did not; unfortunately Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadDog Posted July 30, 2020 Share Posted July 30, 2020 A wonderful story chock full of muscle, eroticism, and the darker corners of our size-obsessed minds. You really put all the right elements together to create a story I have to keep reading until the very end. Kudos! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thiccmuscle Posted July 30, 2020 Share Posted July 30, 2020 Amazing writing! Mixed feelings about the story, but I think I enjoyed it overall. The theme of unwilling behavior/body modification filled me with dread, especially when RT was so against it. On the other hand, the descriptions of his growth all around were impeccable, and intensely erotic. The complications between RT and Danny's relationship, Danny's work relationships, and work culture were well written. And glad that it tied up in a "happy ending", even if it might be a little rushed. A darker fantasy definitely worth revisiting, thank you for your work! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikeytron Posted July 31, 2020 Share Posted July 31, 2020 I am so glad this has a happy ending. What a fantastic piece of writing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted August 1, 2020 Share Posted August 1, 2020 im slowly reading this and im on chapter 8. WHat they guys did was awfull wtf is wrong with them. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ogun Posted August 2, 2020 Share Posted August 2, 2020 I skimmed this rapidly. Some parts are exciting. Some parts are terrifying and enraging. [Spoiler Alert] Dan's very lucky he stopped when he did, and that RT gave him a chance. There are things more important than muscle. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TQuintA Posted August 4, 2020 Author Share Posted August 4, 2020 I’m glad people are responding to the ending the way they are—I’ve gotten a lot of positive feedback about it. I've also gotten feedback that read me dead to rights: the ending is rushed. However, the ending I posted was not the original ending. I wrote a whole different ending, scrapping the original for a variety of reasons, most notably that I think it’s the weaker of the two endings. This past week, I’ve been hemming and hawing about whether or not to post the original ending. I decided to go ahead and post it. People can decide for themselves which ending they like better. As the original ending includes Chapter 14 up to a specific point (I call it “the splice”), I’m also including the page leading up to the splice in an attempt to give it some flow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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