gameboy487

A Not-So-Subtle Nudge in the Right Direction

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miniace2009

Wow! Love these guided retroactive change stories.  Very good!!

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londonboy

And now Ben has the device. What a great ending!  Thanks for a great story!

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lsosuke

*¬* UFFFFFF I LOVE IT, I would have liked more details about the sex between these titans

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Desato

I think you did a great job. The pace felt great. If you want to take it slower, you could always write it out in a longer sequence with Ben.

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goremeridian

A hot story and a really original idea. Nice one, mate!

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Bear

That was REALLY good!  Nice short & fun!

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scot158f

Incredible story - I LOVE the time-alteration aspect and reality growth!  Great writing!

 

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Austinevenson42

Only just getting to your story but it really is creative fun! Love the summer theme too!

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Kymuscleboy

Awesome story! I really need one of those machines.

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