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Who Am I? - Chapter 6 (final ?) - posted June 28


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Man, this is INTENSE writing!  Good build up from stage to stage in the narrator's mind - like it, want it, need it - gotta have it!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Yes!  Awesome.  Love the realistic approach of the story.  I'm sure many of us lifters can relate.  I know I can.  It

always seems like such a big step admitting that we want to become MUSCLE FREAKS.  Now that Chad has fully embraced that fact, he's going to GROW. 

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Well written with realist characters, and that's from a non-lifters perspective.  Personally, I can definitely relate to the muscle-heaven trance of the admirer in the very hot written first paragraph.

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