Sjdmuscle Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 3 hours ago, MrLashout said: Did you need a shower after writing this MA? Impressive as always! Well I sure did! I was hot, sweaty, and oh so sticky! MA, thank you for the much-needed "fix"! I was jonesing bad! Loving Deano's metamorphosis! Can't wait for more! In the mouth on Deano senior!Β The winner of the awardΒ for the most twat faced father goes to.............Β !!!! PS. MA, I never commented to you on chapter 15. Thank you for the best three way I ever had in my life! PPS looking forward for additional stops for the tour! 4 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lefty Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 If I were as good a writer as you are MA, Iβd be able find a word better than WOW! Β What a hot chapter! Β I felt like I was not only in Deanoβs head, but his body as well. I could practically feel what he was feeling - your writing is the closest thing to experiencing virtual reality! Β 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 Wow - I didn't expect THAT finish! Whoah! I wonder how much Dean Sr. suspects/knows --- deep down?Β He's more perceptive and tuned in to Deano Jr.'s thoughts than he lets on!Β Β There's a LOT happening in Brighton this summer!! 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sjdmuscle Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 3 hours ago, Mdlftr said: Wow - I didn't expect THAT finish! Whoah! I wonder how much Dean Sr. suspects/knows --- deep down?Β He's more perceptive and tuned in to Deano Jr.'s thoughts than he lets on!Β Β There's a LOT happening in Brighton this summer!! Exactly ! In Ryan's words, "Hmmm, You don't fool me DEANO WATKINS JUNIOR!" How long is it going to be before pertains to both Deano and Ryan! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted July 27, 2020 Author Share Posted July 27, 2020 I'm loving all the reactions to that last chapter!Β Β It's not always easy to predict what people will think but I was fairly confident people would like this one!Β Β The next one is a bit of a favourite of mine. 9 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxwm Posted July 27, 2020 Share Posted July 27, 2020 WOW! WOW! WOW! About the hottest thing Iβve ever read!!! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzNLA Posted July 28, 2020 Share Posted July 28, 2020 6 hours ago, muscleaddict said: I'm loving all the reactions to that last chapter!Β Β It's not always easy to predict what people will think but I was fairly confident people would like this one!Β Β The next one is a bit of a favourite of mine. The last three chapters of the story are the mostΒ exciting, for me at least,Β that you wrote Mate. As always a superb bonerΒ inducing, exciting, romantic chapters with real characters. I wonder howΒ many of your readers want to trade places with Deano, Ryan or both?? I know I do!!!! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawn1978 Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 Wow! I certainly wasn't expecting that to happen this soon!Β It am I ever glad it did. Now Deano is beginning to understand what Woody and Luke have together and now he's getting to have what they have. He now has his own handsome muscle stud who only has eyes for him. But one thing is for sure: When Deano goes back to MU, for his second year he'll be going back a changed man. Well, as changed as he can be while still having "twatface" tendencies' meaning he'll still have those moments, but we'll understand him alot more and will know that there's a reason behind them, rather than painting him as the villain. Can't wait to see what is next for Deano and Ryan. Maybe their own spin-off story "Deano and Ryan?" I could see this happening after Deano has graduated Muscle University. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silverfox Posted July 29, 2020 Share Posted July 29, 2020 Β the chapter was a very hot read Β indeed,Β but Β i find myself being extremely intriguedΒ aboutΒ the meeting between deano, ryan and deanos mum. Will there be drama withΒ revelations or will it be a sweet experience which will bring Deano closer to his mum? orΒ maybe both?Β anyway i am pumped to see the event unfold. Also @MdlftrΒ mentioned Deano Sr knowing/ sensingΒ more than he lets on...I am curious about that as well. Him suggesting that Ryan partake of the event seems to me like he hasΒ a keenΒ sense of what his son needs ... Β 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted July 29, 2020 Author Share Posted July 29, 2020 9 hours ago, Shawn1978 said: Wow! I certainly wasn't expecting that to happen this soon!Β It am I ever glad it did. Now Deano is beginning to understand what Woody and Luke have together and now he's getting to have what they have. He now has his own handsome muscle stud who only has eyes for him. But one thing is for sure: When Deano goes back to MU, for his second year he'll be going back a changed man. Well, as changed as he can be while still having "twatface" tendencies' meaning he'll still have those moments, but we'll understand him alot more and will know that there's a reason behind them, rather than painting him as the villain. Can't wait to see what is next for Deano and Ryan. Maybe their own spin-off story "Deano and Ryan?" I could see this happening after Deano has graduated Muscle University. More Muscle University stories after this one are definitely a possibility! I haven't really thought that far aheadΒ though yet.Β 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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