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I loved how this story was unfolding but unfortunately part 3 was written in what looks like - to me- invisible ink!  Can that be changed?

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5 hours ago, Lefty said:

I loved how this story was unfolding but unfortunately part 3 was written in what looks like - to me- invisible ink!  Can that be changed?

In most browsers if you highlight the text (as if you were going to copy and paste) it will show up. Unfortunately, authors who use font colors other than the default aren't doing their readers any favors.

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Part 3 is EXACTLY what I like to see in a story! Detailed descriptions of lifts and poundages and muscle growth rendered in pounds and inches! Thanks so muchl

 

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The Wall, part 4, "The Locker"

“The Locker,” as it was called, was the firm’s smallest Manhattan overnight accommodation, an efficiency studio on Nassau Street, just three blocks from the office. At my interview 17 years before, I remember thinking how awesome it was that the firm had a few apartments scattered around the financial district so that employees in the executive training program could spend a night or two close to the office when work social functions kept us out too late (or too drunk) to make getting home and back before work the next morning implausible. As a trainee, I learned that some of my hardcore colleagues used the apartments to work nearly 24 hours a day, staying late every night to impress the managing partners and shunning their home lives, eventually finding themselves burned out, divorced and in therapy and or simply so unpleasant and two dimensional that they were passed over when it came time for promotions. I was definitely not one of them

Another cohort of “apartment dwellers” were partners who liked to entertain secret lovers and even prostitutes in town while explaining to their girlfriends and wives that they were working late and needed to stay at the office for the night.

The Locker was used most frequently by the hardcore trainee cohort and occasionally by a more senior executive who just got stuck late at work. It was much smaller and more basic that the other overnight digs, and few would consider it the best place to entertain a paramour, save for two redeeming features. First, it had a large very shower, an amenity most of the other apartments lacked. Second, it had two mirrored walls and a mirrored ceiling, supposedly because it was otherwise so small that it would feel like a prison cell without them but more likely because some of the partners found it arousing to watch themselves having sex and had had the mirrors installed for that purpose.

Whatever the reason, The Locker was available that night, and I had an agenda. It was more curiosity than vanity, well, maybe a little of both in truth. I really needed to reexamine my reflection to see if the changes I had noticed at the gym were real or just a fantasy.

Pup had never seen or used The Locker before, and when we entered with the firm’s key code and entered, he laughed with surprise and delight to find the array of funhouse mirrors in such a tiny space. With the mirrors on the ceiling and opposite walls, there was an infinity effect, that made the small space seem like it went on forever, and Pup and I were replicated thousands of times in increasingly smaller dimensions to the edge of the universe. 

On our walk from the gym we had ordered delivery from D’Angelo’s that should soon arrive at  The Locker – two D’Angelo steaks and one porterhouse. We were both starving, even after the protein shakes; so we had ordered an extra entre, assuming it would get eaten as well.

Delivery arrived while I washing my hands. The delivery boy was a cute, young Italian guy with big arms and a big basket who had noticed the small table with two glasses, and he was teasing Pup that there was no way two people could eat all the food we had ordered. When I emerged from the bathroom, however, he scanned me down and up and then muttered, “Uhm… maybe I was wrong.”

Pup was looking at this guy like a kid looks at candy. He was quite the young stud, and I wanted to see if there was more to that body than just a big set of guns. To boot, that basket was distracting in the best possible way, and it looked like it was starting to swell. So I took the initiative. “No, no… you are correct. We can’t possibly eat all this food ourselves. Why don’t you stay and help us?”

Delivery boy (“AJ” on his nametag) said, “Well, I am free after this delivery, and I haven’t eaten all shift, and something in here smells so delicious to me. Only, there is no way all three of us are going to fit in this tiny place.”

Pup playfully chuckled that with all the mirrors, it seemed that there were at least 9 men in the room already, and the decision was made. “Besides, I know what you mean about that smell. It’s incredible, like it makes me feel like I’m horny for beef.” AJ and I just laughed and rolled our eyes. “Pup, it’s a good thing you’re an accountant because you’d never make it writing scripts for porn. Knock that shit off, and let’s eat.”

The food was delicious, and before we knew it, everything was gone. Pup pushed the table and chairs back in the corner, and I carted the empty takeout containers to the tiny kitchenette. When I returned, Pup was already taking the lead. AJ’s shirt was raised over his head while Pup took a long brush stroke with his tongue from just above AJ’s navel up to his left nipple.

When he got to the nipple, AJ sucked in a gasp, and Pup knew he had hit pay dirt. He ground his tongue into it roughly and started to gnaw gently with his teeth. AJ moaned loudly. When the shirt came all the way off, and he brought his arms down, AJ’s chest and his shoulders were quite impressive. Although not quite matching the size of his disproportionately large arms, his pecs and shoulders were still full and well-shaped, and his nipples were large and brown, pointing slightly downward along the curve of his chest.

Pup’s tongue was still at work, devouring the young man whose skin was so shiny and smooth and a little bit moist with perspiration that I would later discover was both salty and sweet. AJ was simply delicious, and Pup seemed intent on tasting every part of him, licking first the from the hollow at the base of his neck to the up the pulsing veins to the line of his jaw and then to his chin and his full lips and finally to his salivating mouth.

AJ was hard. I am guessing he couldn’t get much harder, and  he  was  big. The dick in his pants looked like club pointing toward his left hip bone and threatening to push right through the fabric of his pocket. A wet spot was forming (a testament to Pups talents), and Pup continued his oral assault, now slathering the young Italian god’s collar bone, deltoid and arm. AJ continued to moan as Pup unhooked his belt and his pants and unzipped the fly. When Pup pulled down his pants, nine thick, hard inches were release from confinement and slapped up against the AJ’s tight abs.

In a flash, Pup was on it like a man starving for months. Copious amount of saliva covered the pole as Pup bobbed up and down, sucking and licking and jacking and then licking his sac and fondling the big balls, sucking gently as he continued to lightly stroke the giant cock.

Up until now AJ’s eyes had been closed, and his head had been thrown back in ecstasy.  The scene was almost to hot to witness, and I let out a moan. AJ’s eye flew wide open and locked onto me. He was nearly cocked and loaded, and he wanted me in on the action as well.

 My dick was hard, too, and tenting my pants. I could feel my heart beating heavy in my chest and pumping blood to my cock and my body and my imagination. As Pup sucked on the huge cock, AJ fondled his own arms and big pecs, flexing and bouncing in self-admiration while staring and me and taunting me to join in the show. 

With him staring at me, I mirrored his moves, rubbing my shoulders and massaging my pes through my shirt.  AJ mimed removing a shirt, and I complied by unbuttoning slowly, first the cuffs, then the collar and then down the placket. The shirt spread wide open, my pecs and abs now exposed enough for him to appreciate as Pup continued sucking and teasing his cock. AJ started to moan, and I was afraid he would cum too soon, so I wave my hand “No,” and AJ pushed Pup off his dick to postpone the inevitable if he could.

As I pushed my shirt from my shoulders, the sleeves hung up on my arms, bunching up over my biceps and triceps. I struggled and strained a bit to free my arms from my sleeves, and Pup started licking and sucking  Now standing shirtless, I was a sight to behold. I glanced to the left, catching my reflection in a mirrored wall and was again shocked by the site of myself. Bigger. Definitely bigger. No change since the gym, but bigger and much more muscular than I had been early this morning.

I returned my attention to AJ and Pup. AJ was moaning again, and Pup had developed a rhythm that I knew would send AJ over the brink. AJ stared at me and used his left hand to rub his right arm, bending the elbow and flexing the biceps at his side. I mirrored the move, my flex bigger than his, and he let out a moan. Then he lifted both arms straight over his head and pulled his fists into a double biceps that displayed all the work he had put into those oversized arms. He nodded to me as Pup increased his speed, now sucking and jacking with both hands and his mouth. In very slow motion, I mirrored the boy, first raising my arms straight up and then pulling them down slowly into a massive double biceps pose. AJ was whimpering and starting to buck. As I flexed harder and harder, my biceps continued to rise, seeming to form peak upon peak. As I increased the effort, I could feel the flex all the way down to my dick.  The site was too much for AJ to hold off any longer, and he started to roar as Pup swallowed his massive load and brought himself off in his hand as he pleasured himself. 

Still flexing as hard as I could, my muscles grew larger, and the connection between my flexed biceps and my dick overwhelmed me. My dick ripped through my pants and sprayed volley after volley across the floor, spraying the boys who also started cumming again. The harder I flexed, the harder I came.

Finally spent, I lowered my arms, and my dick began to soften. With a slight chuckle, I collapsed on the bed, completely and utterly satisfied… for now.

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Part 4: More awesomeness!

Also: A continuity error. In about the 5th paragraph you refer to Pup as AJ (in Chapter 3 he was introduced as Tom), clearly anticipating AJ's introduction a little further down. (I also write on the fly and make these errors routinely, hence my pointing them out!)

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