m/f The Entity - Prologue

[niko777]

Quick note: it's been years since I wrote a story here. English is not my mother tongue, but it's a language I really like and enjoy. I hope I didn't make too many mistakes while typing this. It's a prologue of sorts to a much bigger story I have been thinking about for a while now. As always, your comments are always appreciated. (And if you do see some mistakes, please don't be too harsh on me, I really did my best. ) This part has some violence in it, so if it's not your cup of tea, don't read it.

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THE ENTITY - PROLOGUE

 

Today, I will see the Entity in action for the first time. Dr. Thomas, who is in charge of the facility where I work and who took me under his wing a few months ago, finally said I was ready. I have to admit that I’m both excited and scared.

To me, the Entity is a vague concept; I know it is supposed to save mankind, but I don’t know what it is exactly and have never witnessed it in action. You see, Dr. Thomas is very hesitant to share any information regarding his experiments with anyone. In other words, it’s a real honour to assist him today, and I know some of my colleagues are very jealous right now.

We are standing side by side in front a huge glass wall. On the other side, there is only darkness. To be honest, I have no idea what form this experiment will take, what it entails.

“Get ready, William,” says Dr. Thomas while looking at the expensive watch on his wrist.

Bracing myself, I can’t help but wonder what will be revealed once the lights are on. A few more seconds pass in complete silence, and suddenly, I’m blinded by a sharp and intense light.

“Showtime,” simply says my mentor before laughing.

Once my eyes get used to the light, I see a young man on the ground, in a corner of the room. He is only wearing white briefs and is not moving.

“Hum … is he OK?” I ask Dr. Thomas.

“Don’t worry. He’ll wake up any time, now. We had to dose him a little to bring him here.”

I look at him, dumbfounded.

“Dose him? What do you mean?”

“Shh … he’s waking up. Look.”

I turn my head to see the young man waking up. Slowly, he rises from the ground. And rises. And rises.

Holy crap, how tall is he? I ask myself.

“Impressive, no?” asks Dr. Thomas. “Hard to believe he’s only 18 years old.”

I approach the glass to watch the young man more closely as he is looking around, in shock. He looks like he’s at least 6’5”. But that’s not all; he’s built like a brick wall! Wide shoulders, incredible traps, thick neck, heavy pecs covered by a fine coat of dark hair, huge arms and forearms, defined abs leading to a treasure trail… As I lower my eyes, I can see he has huge and powerful legs, but also a cock and balls that are so big that the flimsy white briefs he’s wearing have trouble covering them.

His dick isn’t even hard, and it’s bigger than mine at full mast!

Finally, I look up, realizing I haven’t even paid attention to his face. He’s incredibly handsome: square jaw, dark stubble, piercing green eyes and dark, curly hair… He’s basically a live version of a Greek god.

“Matthew Lane, 18 years old, from Pennsylvania. A few months ago, he was an active but otherwise ordinary young man who had just finished high school,” says Dr. Thomas as he reads his profile on a notepad. “When the … changes started, he was 6 feet tall and weighed 175 pounds. He is now 6’6” and weighs 254 pounds. I think he is our best candidate so far.”

I can see Matthew yelling on the other side of the glass, but I can’t hear him; apparently, it’s completely soundproof. As he’s looking around and moving, I can see his muscles involuntarily flexing.

“Sir, how did this change happen if he was this ordinary high school kid?” I ask.

With a satisfied grin, Dr. Thomas says: “We made it happen, of course. We released a small quantity of the Entity in municipal water treatment systems all over the country. Only susceptible male specimens react to such a small dose and experience a mutation. For some reason, they need to be near the end of their teenage years, so they are all between 17 and 21.”

With my eyes wide open, I ask:

“You mean there were more? All over the country?”

“Of course! And there will be a lot more in the years to come…”

I’m really starting to get worried here, and I think it’s showing on my face. Putting some weird stuff in the water people drink, kidnapping “specimens”…

“William, what do you know about the Entity?” my mentor asks.

“Only what you told me about it, sir. It’s supposed to save humanity, but you never told me from what.”

He looks at me, smiling.

“From extinction. It will save us from complete extinction, of course.”

Before I can add anything, Dr. Thomas takes a remote out of one of his pockets and shows it to me.

“Want to do the honours?”

“Hum… sure?”

The remote only has one big red button on it.

Does anything good ever come from pushing a sketchy red button? I ask myself.

“Go on, William. We don’t have all day,” he says.

Not wanting to disappoint the doctor, I press the button a few seconds later. At first, nothing happens. Is the damn thing broken? But Dr. Thomas looks as confident as always, looking straight at the young man. Then, a sinister grin appears on his face.

“Look, William. Look what you have done.”

On the other side of the glass wall, I can see some kind of green gas being released from vents on the ceiling. At first, Matthew doesn’t really react; I’m not even sure he’s aware of what is happening.

And then, something incredible happens. It’s like every muscle fibre of Matthew’s body is flexing, growing a little bigger every passing moment. He looks like he’s in some kind of trance. His cock and balls are also growing at an alarming rate; soon enough, his dick is about as long and big as my forearm and his testicles remind me of grapefruits! Before I can ask anything, Dr. Thomas says:

“You’re not imagining things, William. This is really happening. He’s absorbing the Entity.”

A few second pass, and Matthew keeps growing, not only larger, but taller. It's almost like he's pulsating with power. 

“OK, now push the button again. He’s had enough,” says Dr. Thomas, looking at his watch again.

I immediately do as he asks, and the gas stops coming from the vents. Matthew stays in a daze for a few seconds, but then he becomes very agitated. I turn my attention to Dr. Thomas, who takes his cell phone and looks at some kind of data sheet.  

“William, our friend is now 7’4” tall and weighs a whopping 372 pounds!”

He quickly dials a phone number and says only 3 words before hanging up:

“Let her in.”

Almost instantly, a hidden door opens on the other side of the glass wall, and a woman comes out. She looks like a giant version of Barbie. I’d say she has to be at least as tall as he was before he grew in front of our eyes. She’s very muscular, but not in a masculine way; if Matthew is a Greed god, she’s definitely a goddess.

As soon as he sees here, our specimen approaches her, his eyes devouring her. She seems to like the attention and looks back at him the same way. His dick is pointing straight ahead, swinging and slapping on his incredibly thick abs as he walks towards her. Without wasting a second, he puts his giant hands under her ass, lifts her up in the air and penetrates her. Immediately, she starts moaning; it’s like I’m watching a porn videos featuring two divinities having crazy sex. Then he takes her off of his dick, holds her parallel to the ground and penetrates her from behind.

At first, Dr. Thomas keeps smiling, nodding to show his approval of the whole thing, but after a while, I notice something in his eyes. Worry? Fear?

I look back at the two gods fucking like wild animals and I see something weird happening. Much like earlier, Matthew is growing bigger again. At first, it’s barely noticeable, but after a minute, he looks like he’s almost 8 feet tall and still getting larger and taller by the second. Soon enough, he's so big that the tall woman seems small in comparison. She looks distressed, in pain. What the hell is happening?

Matthew is still fucking her like there is no tomorrow. And then, I see his dick: it’s now so big that I wonder how he is not destroying her insides by penetrating her so violently. That’s when it dawns on me: that’s exactly what he’s doing.

“Dr. Thomas, this has to stop!” I yell. “He’s killing her!”

He looks at me with disappointment.

“No, son; he already killed her.”

He’s right: Matthew, who is still growing bigger and bigger, is plowing her dead body, not even aware that something changed. He's just a beast fucking something to feel good.

My mentor sighs and dials a number on his cell phone once again.

“This is Dr. Thomas. Put an end to experiment E-063. He passed the point of no return.”

Immediately, I see metallic tubes come out from the walls on the other side. A few seconds later, flames fill the room. I hit the wall with my fist over and over, and each time, I can feel the heat permeating the glass. I can’t hear Matthew yelling, but I know he is.

“What have you done?!” I ask with clenched fists when I turn around to look at the cruel man I used to trust.

“My poor William, I simply put an end to a failed experiment. An experiment, I might add, that YOU started.”

And then, right there, I understand: Dr. Thomas never wanted a protégé; he wanted an accomplice.

 

 

[arpeejay]

Great writing, intriguing premise.

[baralover101]

Great work! Where can we find your other stories?!

[niko777]

1 hour ago, baralover101 said:

Great work! Where can we find your other stories?!

Thanks! As for my other stories, I have absolutely no idea. Maybe in the archive? It's been years, so I'm not even sure about the titles. Sorry. I'll try to find them.

[asianman2410]

Very interesting indeed. I wonder where the next chapter will lead. Love the cliffhanger. Definitely begs for another chapter to explain the backstory. 

[jujumusclelover717]

Good start so far. Can't wait to read more!

[niko777]

23 hours ago, Justinriv717 said:

Good start so far. Can't wait to read more!

Thanks!

[Kymuscleboy]

I loved it! Very interesting so far. It is sad that the scientist so callously "eliminated" his failed experiment, but adds depth to the characters. The growth scenes were fantastic!

[gentlemanbear]

A very nice read! You write better than many people for whom English is their primary language! Kudos!! 

Looking forward to seeing more!

[Droz]

Interesting idea. Curious to  see  more. 

One thing I would suggest to  think more about. Heights and weights. 

A six foot tall guy weighing 250 pounds would be pretty impressive. At 6'6" and 254 pounds (as you  described) he would be pretty skinny. The same for the 7'4" 372 pounds.  While an impressive height,  the mass would be spead out and more than likely to  be more bone and organ mass  than muscle mass.

For an example, look up Noah Steere,  he's 6'6" and at  his biggest weighed 350lbs.  Without anything around him for reference he looks  more to be a middleweight bodybuilder.