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This story remains wildly entertaining and creative, with all kinds of unexpected turns! While I won't demand it, I can't wait for the next chapter, that is unless demanding it will make it appear sooner. 😀

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Greetings everyone from cold London!!!  I'm so glad so many of you are enjoying this story as much as I am writing it.  It has changed so much from what I had first evisioned, but I guess that is the exciting part about writing.  It's funny how autobiographical the entire story is, and I have a great time playing with people that I already know!!!  If you're free, come to London and work out with me and meet them!!!

Here you go:  Chapter Five!!  

THINK IT: A WRITER'S TOOL

CHAPTER FIVE - The Fifth Story

Quinn struggled to free himself from the steel-like arms of the rubber-man.  The ring floated in mid air, away from him, and landed in Jacob’s open palm.

I believe it’s you we need to thank for this interesting trinket.  Very nice… and so handy. Are there more where this came from?

No… not that I'm aware.  Vince didn’t mention any others.

Why did you hold onto it?  Why didn’t you make your wish?

I was waiting… for the right moment.

Perhaps that moment is now.

Perhaps…

But, perhaps not for you.  Have you met Oli in your travels around Soho, Quinn?

I don’t believe so…

Even if you had… you probably wouldn’t remember him.  He’s not very memorable… is he?

Quinn looked at the owner of the porn shop and sadly had to agree with Jacob.  It wasn’t that Oli was unattractive… he was cute in his own goatee wearing, too old to be dressing like a hipster way… but even if Quinn had fucked him,there was no doubt he wouldn’t  have remembered him. Oli was, sadly, one of those people who faded into the background and always went unnoticed

 Oli here has a very interesting fetish, Quinn.  It all started when he was thirteen, and his mother put a video on for his little sister to watch on the TV.  It was, The Little Mermaid… wasn’t it, Oli? It was!! You remember… lying next to your sister… watching this classic animated film… until that scene… near the end… you’re prepubescent cock suddenly got hard… this was the first time that had ever happened, your mouth went dry, and you watched in awe and unexplainable lust as the immense form of Ursula rose out of the sea!!!

Quinn watched in shock as Jacob spoke, both of his arms began turning jet black.  Somehow, as if he were made of wax, his arms began to lengthen and slowly slide down his torso until they both sat on the side of his hips, his hands dragging on the floor.  Moments later, four thick black tentacles ripped from Jacob’s waist, growing longer and wider until they all hit the floor with a thud. His two legs transformed into massive tentacles as well until within a few minutes, half of the room was filled with twitching and slithering limbs.  Jacob’s massive cock went fully erect as he began to slither around the room, rising up taller, and looming over the other men in the room.

Such power!!!  Isn’t that what you thought as she burst out of the water?  SUCH POWER!!! Your sister cried and hid her eyes, but you couldn’t get enough!!!

Jacob slithered next to Oli, wrapping his tentacles around him in a tight embrace.  One of his tentacles moved up to Oli’s mouth and roughly forced its way between his lips.  Oli began to gag as the tentacle forced itself further and further into his mouth and down his throat.  Quinn watched as, moving it roughly in and out, Jacob began to fuck Oli’s face, forcing the thick limb further and further down his throat.  Quinn was horrified as he began to see the outline of the thick tentacle slithering around under the skin covering Oli’s stomach.

Both the Rubber-Man and the Tom of Finland clone began to jerk themselves off, watching their Master move his limb faster and rougher in and out of Oli’s wide opened mouth.  Quinn could see that even Oli himself was aroused, his cock leaking onto the floor.  

Not sure when it happened, as Quinn had been paying more attention to Oli than Jacob, but he realised that Jacob was once again standing on two human limbs, his arms back in their original positions, except one was down Oli’s throat all the way up to Jacob’s shoulder.

Fuck, Quinn thought.  I need to lure them away from here somehow… what if one of my neighbors hears?  Wait… no!!! What made me think that?? Fuck!! 

That’s right!!  Relax and take it all!!

Jacob was moving his arm back and forth in Oli’s mouth faster and faster until he finally stopped, letting out a loud moan, his whole body shuddering.  A few moments later, Jacob removed his arm from Oli’s mouth, and for the first time Quinn could see that it was not an arm at all but a long thick penis, still leaking cum! Grinning, Jacob licked the rest of the cum off of with his own tongue, while fingers began to grow from the head, until it was a human hand once again.

Shall we continue our story, Quinn?

He acts like this is all normal, Quinn thought, as if we were at a cocktail party discussing the latest West End Show!

This seed had taken root, and was growing within Oli.  He’d watch Beauty and the Beast, and wonder why he would ever want to lose all of that power to be human again.  He would get aroused watching any werewolf movie… any movie at all that had some sort of transformation in it where the average human became something more powerful than what he was.  Not too different from you, Quinn, still trying to do everything you can to become that massive warrior you once read about, but not having the guts to just submit and truly do it.

Jacob walked over to the bound Quinn and looked him directly in the eye.

Always writing and dreaming about men letting loose and becoming massive beasts of muscle… yet you are aren’t willing to take the next step!  You even had a ring that could have done it for you… yet you waited!!! That’s why you need me!! That is why the whole world needs me!! I’m going to free them all!!  Now, Oli, tell Quinn here what you hold secretly in your spank-bank.

All eyes went to Oli.  Not used to being the center of attention, his face reddened and he looked down to the ground.

I… I...ummm...yeah...see…

This could go on all night, and we don’t have all night… do we, Oli?

No…

Jafar.  That’s what really gets him going.  That is what turns him on. That’s his deep dark secret fetish.  

Quinn looked at Oli.  Really? A cartoon character was his secret fetish?

No, Quinn.  Not the character himself.  One particular moment. For his final wish, he asks the genie to make him the most powerful creature in the universe.  Just watching Jafar become this all powerful being… transformed into pure power had Oli in his bed jerking off… writing fan fiction… even going to see the new live action version to watch that one scene over and over again.

You want to be a genie, mate?

The metallic sounding voice coming from the gas mask startled Quinn for a moment.

  • That, my friend, is the interesting part, and what makes Oli such a fascinating character.  He doesn’t want to be a genie… he wants to worship at the feet of this all powerful creature…. He wants to be a slave to its powers… to serve it forever… but most of all, he wants to watch and be a witness to the birth of this being… to witness the transformation of human to god firsthand.  That’s where I come in… isn’t it, Oli? Through Oli, I shall sacrifice myself to become this creature.

Oli opened his mouth to speak, but at that moment, a knocking sound came from Quinn’s front door.

What the hell is this, Quinn?  Expecting someone?

No… I… 

Quinn moved to answer the door, but the Rubber-Man forced him backward.

Can I answer my own front door, please!!??

They’ll go away.

Maybe they would go away if they all stayed quiet.   Who could it be? His neighbor, Ned, or...the thought had barely entered his head when the door slowly opened, and the face of a thin, mousey-brown haired man looked in.

FUCK!!!!  Why did he think about Ned??!!  FUCK!!!

Quinn has met Ned more than a year ago when he moved from the US and took up residence below him.  Scrolling through Scruff one horny night, Quinn saw that Ned was online. The two had barely spoken except a casual hello, but Quinn hadn’t even thought his neighbor was gay.  A few moments later a ‘Woof’ has come through from Ned. Not wanting to insult his neighbor by telling him that he wasn’t interested, Quinn quickly logged off. I’m such a fucking coward, he thought.  We could have talked. I’m sure he would have understood that he didn’t turn me on. Just because we’re neighbors doesn’t mean we need to fuck. The next night, Quinn went back online and was going to say hello, but Ned’s profile was gone.  Did he block me, Quinn wondered? The two never talked about it when they saw each other next, and overtime Quinn forgot about the whole incident. Now… here Ned was, his subconscious dragging him somehow into this nightmare of a story!! 

Hello!  Quinn? Everything alright in here?

Silence.  Go away, Quinn thought.  Go away!!

Quinn?

Jacob looked at Quinn and smiled like a cat enjoying the prey that was quietly walking in.

Hey, Ned!  I’m good. Sorry if I woke you.  Some people stopped over after the pub… and…

Oh.  Sorry.  Didn’t know you had friends over.

They’re not exactly friends, Ned… they’re… 

Come on in, friend of Quinn’s!!  We’re all just started having a good time.

After slowly entering the darkened hallway, Ned jumped when the front door slammed shut of its own accord.  His instincts warned him that everything may not be alright in Quinn’s flat, so he turned around and desperately tried to open the door, but the handle refused to budge.

As if on cue, an off-shoot from the torso of the Rubber-Man sped down the hallway, and wrapped itself around Ned’s legs, pulling him onto the floor.  As the thin man screamed and tried to grab the door, he was dragged into the living room.

When Ned was finally brought to Jacob’s feet, he went pale as he looked from the man standing in front of him with the immense penis, to the Tom of Finland clone, and then to the Rubber-Man.

What the fuck!!!  Quinn!! It’s like that movie… Hellraiser… what... 

The rubber-man fired two more wads of itself at Ned, hitting him directly in the face, and making it impossible for the skinny neighbor to see or breathe.  As he fought with the thick goo covering his eyes, nose, and mouth, trying to claw it off in order to get some air into his lungs, two more thick ribbons of goo shot out and wrapped tightly around Ned’s arms and legs.  Once the Rubber-Man felt Ned was properly subdued, the goo slithered by itself off of his face and back onto Quinn’s captor.

As Quinn watched Ned struggle, he tried to figure out ways to stop the story.  He knew his subconscious was writing the whole thing, but he couldn’t figure out how to make it go away.  Even thinking: they all decide to leave, didn’t work!! Looking at the app in the corner of his eye, he could see that in the space of five minutes he had already written 14 stories!!  Who else was out there that he knew or had once seen, now transformed into a sex fueled muscle beast. Was it that huge Scottish guy he saw at the gym the other day?

FUCK!!  15 stories!!!

What the fuck is going on, Quinn?  Let me go… please!!

Unfortunately that isn’t possible, Ned… But soon, once this is complete… I’ll release you just as I’m going to free the entire world.  Shall we continue?

Yes.

Excellent.  Now, where was I?  Oh yeah. What power I have been given… though strong, is limited in many ways.  But together… Oli and I will both be free. It’s time… isn’t it, Oli?  

Oli looked over at Quinn and then at Ned wishing someone could help him.  He was just so conflicted. On one hand he wanted to live to worship Jacob as his powers grew, but with him let loose on the entire globe… could he really set such a creature free?  He tried to stop his cock getting hard just thinking about it…

Jacob… come on, man… enough.  Please.

This world sucks, Quinn.  People can’t be who or what they want to be… they have to hide in the darkness like rats… but no more! I was set free, and soon, the whole globe will be.

But not everyone wants to live their fetishes 24 hours a day!!  Not everyone has fetishes!!

Then they will cease to exist.  

If you want this so bad, why don’t you wish it yourself?

Wish?  Who’s wishing?

You don’t understand, Quinn.  This isn’t for me. I need to set Oli free.  Once he makes his wish, he will live his life exactly as he wants to do… worshiping me.  But, you do have a point. Before Oli makes his wish, I may have one of my own.

Jacob moved closer to Quinn and slipped the ring on his own finger.

You could have had it all, Quinn, but you were too afraid.  But, I understand… and I also know your secret… and I need to be free of it.  You’ve done an incredible job creating me, but I need to be in control now. When I am, I can’t wait to set you free.  What you want deep down… FUCK… it’s incredible… but you’re just too afraid.  

Jacob looked at Quinn and then down at the ring.  With a smile he walked to the center of the room, his own immense cock starting to get hard.

Now.  Down to business.  I wish… that the strength of the next wish be multiplied by a googolplexianth amount!

Jacob turned the ring on his finger to the right, and as he did, it began to pulse with a burning white light.  Jacob grinned as he felt the power of his wish course through the ring.  

If this is any indication, Oli, what you will live to worship will be glorious!!

Moving swiftly over to Oli, Jacob grabbed his hand, and slid the ring on his finger, the smaller man screaming out as he felt the object start to burn into his skin.

Finally, Oli… the future you have prayed for us yours!!  Make your wish!!

I… I really don’t…

Jacob’s arm quickly reached out, his hand wrapping itself around Oli’s neck.

Do it!!

He doesn’t want to!  Why don’t you just let us go!

Quinn was surprised by Ned’s outburst… so willing to fight for the underdog even at the possibility of his own death.

So chivalrous, Ned, but laughable.  Don’t worry. You’ll be the first virus I stamp out of existence.

Ned struggled to free himself from his rubber binding, but felt them only grow tighter.  Smiling, Jacob strengthened the grip he had on Oli’s neck till he could barely breathe.

Are you ready now, Oli?

The man shook his head, yes; tears falling from his eyes.  Jacob loosened his grip on Oli’s neck, but didn’t let him go.

Do it!

I wish… urgh… I wish you were an all powerful God… greater than anything this universe can imagine!!

There was silence as everyone in the room stared at Jacob.  Quinn saw Oli pull the ring off of his finger and toss it onto the floor.  Grinning, Jacob slowly removed his hand from around Oli’s neck and waited for the power to take him.  The clock on the wall ticked loudly as everyone wondered what was to come next. Then… from the silence came a low soft moan, and the sound of choking, Everyone turned as they heard Ned fall back onto the sofa and begin to violently convulse, his entire body stiff as a board, his head hitting the arm of the sofa. 

Fuck!  He’s having a seizure!!  We need to call an ambulance.

Suddenly, without any warning, all movement and sound stopped.  Ned looking somewhat dazed and shocked by what had occurred, tried to sit up, but found it nearly impossible with his binds.  Struggling against what was holding him, Ned pulled his arms and his legs apart, tearing the rubber that had bound him as if it were cotton candy. The Rubber-Man screamed out as a part of him was torn apart, and he watched, in shock, as it quickly disintegrated on the floor.

Quinn could feel static electricity filling the room, as the electric lights flickered.  Quinn watched as Ned stared at his small hands, opening and closing them as if he had never seen them before.  Looking to both Jacob and Ned, he knew exactly what had happened… who Oli chose to worship for eternity. Softly, Ned began to speak.

An all… powerful… God… greater than anything… ugh…

Quinn could now see what Ned was staring at.  Electrical sparks were beginning to flicker and jump off of the end of his fingers.  With a moan escaping from Ned’s lips, Quinn saw the sparks growing stronger. Continuing to open a close his hands… Ned looked both terrified and confused by what was happening to him. 

… greater than anything the universe could imagine…. That’s what you said, Oli… right?

Oli moved his head in a nodding motion, his cock fully erect and leaking, imagining the power that was taking over Ned, growing stronger… a stranger, yet the only one in the room who seemed to care about him.

But first… YOU wished that the strength of his wish to be multiplied by a… URGH… this power... invading me… filling me up... I’ve never felt anything like it… no one has… and you wished for it… to get...FUCK… for the power… to be multiplied by… a… and that’s… exactly what’s happening… to...

Ned’s eyes grew wider as he found himself unable to speak, so overcome by what was occuring.  A pressure was building up within him, and when he thought he couldn’t take anymore, he screamed, shattering the windows of every building in a ten mile radius.  Bolts of energy burst from his mouth, and began to fire at the ceiling.

Oli fell onto his knees, worshiping the human he had chosen.

Master!!!  Your transformation from man into god… no…. You will become something even more powerful than that.  What I wished for you to be was something the world had never seen!!! Welcome it, Master! Take all of it in!!!  Soon you will be the epitome of ultimate power!! All the world will bow down to you!!!!!!

Jacob was watching all of this occur; angry that it wasn’t him, and scared to still be standing in the room where it was being born.  As Ned screamed again, and more energy began to shoot from both his eyes and mouth, Jacob wanted to run away, but it was becoming impossible not to watch.  What he and Oli had wished for… created together… this was a creature that was going to change the universe forever!

As if hearing what he was thinking, Ned lifted his head to look at Jacob.

You can only… imagine what is happening to me… altering me… so much power… and this is only a… miniscule amount of what… you gave me!!

Ned breathed several times in and out… an unimaginable amount of power welling up inside of him… 

...tearing through my body and altering every atom…

Quinn watched in awe as spasms rocked Ned’s body over and over again as the power intensified.  

Screaming out again, Ned began to convulse on the floor, unable to control his own limbs as he received more power than an infinite amount of Tsar Bombas.  

All of the lights went off in both the flat, and all over London.  Quinn felt as if the world was now bathed in supernatural darkness, his room only illuminated by a white glow coming from Ned’s body.  When he spoke next, his voice was filled with titanium.

You wished for a god… but I am becoming so much more!  God’s in their realms are trembling at the mere thought of what I am becoming.

Quinn watched Ned tried to stand, but he had difficulty controlling a body filling with so much power.  His entire body was throbbing… shifting… whatever energy was building up in his body was attempting to escape.  

What’s… happening… to… me???  My head… swirling with so… so much!!  Quinn?? Help me!!!

Ned looked to Quinn, but as he did, his whole body began to quake again.  Quinn watched as the onslaught of power got stronger by the second. Ned screamed again, and a stronger stream of energy shot from his mouth.  The Tom of Finland clone, having had enough and wanting to live to fuck some more, ran out of the flat and into the night.

I feel like my entire body is just one massive cock ready to explode!!!

Master!  Please! Look at me.

Ned looked up at Oli who had his hand out to steady him and help him stand.  As soon as Ned took Oli’s hand, the worshiper began to change. In an instant his shirt disintegrated from his body, and the years of bad lifestyle choices were replaced with a firm musculature.  A sleeve of intricate black tattoos were working their way up his left arm to his neck, and his hair, which had been short and balding before began to grow in thick and of a shiny silver tone. Chest hair also began to sprout over his newly muscular torso, coming in both thick and silver as well.

When the two locked eyes, Oli began to transform even quicker, the hands of time being washed away until he looked about 21 or 22.  A moan escaped his lips as he began to grow taller and add on more musculature.  

As he got taller, the sleeve began to lengthen onto his chest, over his left pec, and down his abs.  Quinn has no clue what the symbols were that made up the intricate design, but the entire image reminded him of what one might think infinity looked like.

Moaning even louder and deeper, Oli’s hands went to his crotch and began to vigorously massage it. Quinn watched as his penis proceeded to thicken, also beginning to be covered by the same tattoo pattern. 

I will serve you all of my days… forever…

Look upon me now for soon my form may be too much for you to handle… No… what am I saying… what am I becoming?

I envisioned you more than a god… your power endless… 

Yes… I can feel it.  The part of me that is still human is afraid… my time on this Earth as Ned is over and something new will take my place. 

You will become the mightiest of all energies.  Nothing will ever be more powerful than you

Ned’s body ceased fluctuating and tensed up, his back muscles beginning to cramp. His eyes opened wide, and he let out a scream that filled the entire flat. As he screamed, Quinn could see his back beginning to swell with muscle.  From a body that had always been rail thin, his back became larger and more defined, continuing to flex and grow. 

Quinn could hear Ned’s collarbone and scapula make loud, horrid cracking noises as they fractured and then expanded, growing wider… Ned’s arms moving further away from my body.  For what seemed like hours to Quinn, but was only minutes, Ned’s shoulders extended, becoming wider then any door, and showed no sign of slowing their growth. As the bones continued to stretch longer and thicker, his shoulder muscles began to join in the development of my traps.

Ned was determined to stand, but the orgasmic rush of growth proved too much for him and he fell to my knees.

 My shoulders... my delts getting so round and thick!!!  My whole upper body stretching wider and wider... my upper back... so filled with muscle and strength... my traps getting so concentrated... my... ARGH!!!!

His upper body and shoulders surged even wider.  There would be no possible way that he could ever walk through a normal door again, but then, would he have to?  His traps were riding higher and rounder on his shoulders giving him the look of a bull that Quinn himself had always longed for.

Looking at Ned, Quinn found himself getting hard.  This could have been me… but would I have been so daring as to wish for a body like this.., or would I have wished for something safer… more manageable. 

With a sudden eruption, Ned’s lats began to swell, pushing his arms even further from his body.  Quinn couldn’t get his head around the fact of how fast Ned’s shoulders, upper back, and traps had become mountainous, and far from the realm of human possibility.  He was beginning to look like someone had taken 7 bodybuilders to create his upper back, and he was still growing!!  

More!!!  Grow bigger!!!  Your body a monument the world will worship and fear!!

Ned cried out in orgasmic lust as his neck grew into a pillar of muscle.  Ned tried to lift his tiny hands to feel the bulk of his neck, but they were now too far away and too short to even reach it!

My neck… can barely move my head… it’s becoming so dense and muscle bound!

As his traps continued to rise up higher and higher and started to fuse with his neck, his lats continued to widen until, to Oli’s joy, his upper back resembled that of an immense morphed cobra head.  The horrific sound of cracking filled the room even louder than before as his arms and hands began to lengthen.  

Fuck!!!  Look at your arms??!! They’re getting longer then my legs!!!  How big are you gonna become, Master??!! 

The combination of both of your wishes is creating something new!  Soon… I shall be all of existence!

Yes!!! Grow for us!!!  Don’t ever stop growing!! Control us!!!  Let your reign begin!!

As if hearing Oli’s pleas, Ned’s legs and feet began to lengthen along with his arms and hands.  Although still too top heavy, Quinn realised that he could finally stand. Ned’s legs were so long and wobbly that he resembled a newborn pony.  

Standing for the first time, Quinn was shocked at how tall and imposing Ned was, yet he was even more surprised to see that his hands were dragging on the floor as his arms continued to lengthen.  The ceiling in the flat was around twelve feet high, and Quinn estimated tha tNed was already standing a little above nine feet tall.

From my new view of the world… I can see every atom of your body… every strand of your DNA… every piece that holds you together.  My mind… as I grow… my mind grows 30,000 times more! I am… becoming… the most powerful… being in existence!!! Look at me already… towering above you... towering above everything!!

As Ned continued to get taller, and closer to the ceiling, his inhumanly wide and muscular back began to resemble a flesh-like shell, it was so mountainous with peaks and valleys of muscle.  The thickness of his neck and traps made it virtually impossible for him to turn his head.

I find myself fearing what I am becoming!!!  My humanity slipping away from me… trying to hold on… yet I want more!!!  I want it all!!! I will be everything!!! I am God!!!!!

Ned began to laugh as he lifted up his growing hand and marvelled at the sheer size and power of it.  His palm, Quinn thought.... fuck... the palm of Ned’s hand was growing to become nearly as large as Quinn’s own chest!!!  

Lifting his immense hand up to the ceiling…  Ned grabbed onto it and pulled it as one would pull the wrapping off of a present.  The entire ceiling simply evaporated, and above them was the sheer expanse of space!!  Above the growing new god, a black maelstrom grew, swirling with dark clouds and hundreds of bolts of lightning.  As the black hole grew larger and stronger, it began sucking in nearby stars and shooting the acquired energy into Ned.  In shock, Quinn watched as entire sections of the universe were stripped to darkness, its power fueling it’s new master.

In all of the confusion, Quinn hadn’t seen Jacob, the Rubber-Man, or the Tom of Finland clone sneak out the door and into the night.  Still paying attention to Ned’s supernatural growth, and Oli speaking In odd tongues at his feet, Quinn went in search of the ring. He has seen Oli remove it and toss it onto the floor.  He needed to find it since it could still work or him. Stepping around the kneeling Oli, Quinn looked for the object that might be reflecting the massive beam of energy shooting into Ned.

Ned’s torso soon joined in with his arms and legs, and loudly began to elongate.  The snapping and pulling of his body was soon so excruciating that his own screams merged with the rumbling of energy being shot into him, and the chanting of his apostle.  Ned was transforming quicker now, and must have stood nearly twenty feet tall. The more his torso stretched, his arms, hands, feet, and legs began to look in proportion to his body... but still it all continued to grow out of control.  

Another explosion rocked Quinn’s flat, and he gasped as the walls ripped away to give the God more room to grow.  Like the view above, Quinn was now surrounded by the sheer expanse of space. There was no way to get away now since the door to the outside world had disappeared along with the walls.

Stumbling, Ned began to try and walk on his skinny legs, his enormous feet rocking the very foundation he stood upon.  Noting that he needed more room in which to do so, the wooden floor spread out in all directions until it looked to Quinn that it went on for infinity.

How tall am I now?!  Soon, I will reach out my arms and I will be able to touch suns… touch planets!!  Fuck!!!! Soon I will be suns and planets!! I will be infinity!!! 

Ned screamed out again while Quinn watched and heard his pecs explode with size.  Like two massive inflatable rafts attaching themselves to his body, his pectorals simply blossomed, quickly getting firmer and rounder.  It was obvious to Quinn that the sensation of feeling his blood engorged muscles grow was making Ned’s head spin. Looking down as much as his neck would allow, Ned could see the massive globes coming to life, taking over the top half of his chest.  Rubbing his hand over the right one, he cried out and stumbled as his hand brushed over his nipple.

My nipples… they were never sensitive before… I could never understand nipple play… but now… FUCK!!!  Now I can!!

With each loud beat of his heart, Ned’s pecs swelled larger and larger.  Using both of his hands, he grabbed his nipples and squeezed them. Oli cried out as he too now was sharing in the ecstasy his God was feeling.   Squeezing them and twisting them at the same time, both Ned and Oli released low moans from their throats

These are… the most… sensitive… things I have… ever felt!!

As if they were trying to enrapture him to play with them more, they both suddenly began to get larger and thicker, the areola getting wider and browner, and the nipple bursting with size until they both were nearly the length of a human finger.  

Ned’s pecs, fuelled by his intense nipple play grew even mightier, extending feet from from his chest.  He looked down at both Quinn and Oli, and smiled. He’s probably laughing at how small we look to him now, Quinn thought. 

Look at my pecs... getting so full... so heavy with muscle.  I can’t wait till my whole body feels this way... weighing trillions of pounds of muscle!!!

Trillions? Master!!!  That’s too small!! Thousands upon thousands upon thousands upon infinity of pounds!!  Your muscle mass makes the very universe tremble!!  

Oli’s words swam in Quinn’s head as he watched Ned’s pecs beginning to find more room to grow on his body, both rising up while being forced down by the weight and sheer size.  The gap between Ned’s pecs was so deep, but appeared to grow tighter as his pecs took up more and more space. Ned took his hand and shoved it down into the gap, and Quinn saw his pecs grow larger to press up against it.  

Fuck, Quinn thought, his hand is being smothered by those two massive globes!  

Soon you’ll be able to crumble planets between your pecs, Master… or splinter universes just from flexing them together.  Never have pecs been so mighty!!

Ned’s abs and lower back began to burst with muscle at the same time to prevent the mass of his upper body from collapsing down upon it.  His back, lats, and traps were still gaining mass, and his traps rose up to near his ears, giving him the guise of either having no neck at all or one so massive that it rose simply from his back.

Ned’s abs exploded one by one, but there was to be no simple six-pack for this body.  Quinn and Oli watched in awe as with his hands, Ned felt his growing abs since he couldn’t see anything below his pecs.

Your body… transforming and mutating beyond anything us mere humans can imagine!!!  

Quinn watched in awe as quickly Ned’s lower torso developed a twelve pac… then a sixteen pack… then eighteen!!  From this development, it was obvious that Ned’s body was no longer human as his abs continued to grow thicker and denser than anything Quinn could imagine.

As Ned continued to grow both taller and larger… now standing over fifteen feet tall, Quinn realised that his head had only grown a small amount with the rest of his body, tightly wrapped between his immense traps, which now rose mightily past his ears.  His neck, larger than his own massive waist, was barely visible, as his pecs and deltoids simply covered it up. Finally, as he continued to evolve, Ned’s undefinable lats caused his upper body to flare far away from his torso, but then taper severely back in.

How wide is he, Quinn wondered.  There was no way of knowing in inches or feet how massive he was, but at this size, it simply didn’t matter.  His upper body had to be larger and wider than a truck... and still he grew!!!

Standing next to his Master’s legs, Oli licked and kissed each inch, revelling in what Ned was becoming.

Your torso, Master!!  Your abs… saying it’s a brick wall doesn’t do it justice!!!  Each of your abs alone is a testimony to muscle… your body becoming a pure work of art and mastery!  

Each crevice in Ned’s wall of abs, along with his newly formed Adonis belt was so deep... so so dark.  His waist... no matter how thick, compared to the massiveness of his chest giving him the ultimate tight wasp waist.

The birth of a God… .

Only the beginning, Master!!  Only the beginning!!

Ned’s legs began to tremble and quake as his feet began to grow even longer and thicken with muscle.  Stretching upward, both his calf muscles began to take on mammoth proportions. They swelled up so thick that the diamond shape of the two heads began to expand outward on all sides and take up more room over his ankle until it appeared that his foot formed right from his calf.

Ned let out a long low growl as his calf muscles stretched upward toward his kneecaps, but it was the titanic rumbling sound announcing the birth of his new elephantine quads that made him really cry out.   Over and over again Oli cried out in exhilaration as each muscle simply erupted in size. Quinn could see Ned starting to drool over how massive his quads were becoming. The lateral and medial muscles of his quads immediately became so swollen that he had to widen his stance.  Each time he did, and created a little more room for his tiny balls not to be squished, his quads would quickly take up all available space. Quinn was hard and in lust watching the rectus emerge as two massive teardrops that dipped over Ned’s kneecaps and required him to go into a bow legged and crouched position for comfort.  Ned’ll have to be resigned that for the rest of his existence he’ll be forced to walk and stand that way. Fuck, Quinn thought… I’d love that for myself. 

As Ned loudly moaned and groaned, Oli looked over at Quinn and smiled.  Quinn was shocked to see that he had transformed even more, like his master.  He was much taller than he had been, towering over Quinn by a foot or more, and his body now had the musculature of a gymnast or a fitness model.  His silver hair flowed down over his shoulders, and his eyes… his eyes no longer had pupils… they were simply two large sapphire orbs that glowed with a light from within.  The tribal tattoos had continued to form on his body, traveling down his left leg and over his left foot. Most surprising of all was that his entire body, not counting his head, was completely hairless.

Quinn drew his eyes away from the beautiful and ethereal creature standing near him as he heard a loud snapping and cracking noise coming from above.  Ned has to be over 20 feet now, and he continued to spread his legs further and further as his quads grew, until his own body forced his pelvis to break in order to enlarge his stance. This caused his waist to broaden even further which only forced his upper body to grow more in order to keep his tapered form.

With each change… with each alteration of my mind and body… the more amazing it feels!!  I exist now in a constant orgasmic sensation. My mind… even my mind orgasms as I contemplate my own existence.

As Ned’s ass grew larger, both Oli and Ned cried out in ecstasy.  Ned moved his hands to try and feel his swelling ass since with his muscular neck he could barely turn his head, but with his ever widening lats, hr had difficulty moving his arms to even touch it.  Another wave of growth shuddered his entire body, and Ned cried out for all the universe to hear:

My body… this form… How did I ever live without this body!!!  I didn’t!!! Isn’t that right, Quinn.??!!

Quinn instantaneously felt all of the pain, all the sadness, and all of the despair Ned had felt over his entire life.  Images flooded his head of all of the men who had ghosted him, rejected him, bullied him, or disappointed him. It was as if a weight was pulling him down, and he found it nearly impossible to stand any longer.  Soon, Quinn fell to his knees, and then onto his hands and knees. Tears began to flow from his eyes, and all he could think of was that he should simply cease to exist. Looking down at his hands since it was becoming difficult to lift his head, Quinn noticed that he was beginning to be able to see right through them… his entire body and essence was ceasing you exist!!  With a voice barely above a whisper, Quinn called out.

Ned… Ned… please… I’m sorry!  Ned...

Never again shall I age!!  Never again shall I be sick… I shall exist for all eternity as pure power!!!!!

Ned clenched his jaw and gritted his teeth as he felt the agony of his pelvis bone breaking and growing again, extending his waist more and causing his stance to become far more unnaturally bowlegged.  The pain must have distracted Ned, as Quinn was suddenly released from the weight of despair that had overwhelmed him. Staggering to his feet, he took stock of himself and noted that he wasn’t fading from existence any longer.  I’m not sure Ned even knew what he was doing… his powers are growing so fast now… if he were to look down… how insignificant I’d be to him.   

Looking up, Quinn realised that Ned had to be over thirty feet tall now, and growing even faster than before. Ned’s deltoids had grown so dense with muscle that it wasn’t easy for him to lift his arms above his head, and his legs were now so muscle bound, so massive, and so engorged, that some might say they bordered on the grotesque, but Ned only cried out for more.  Every time he took a step now, the ground, space, and even time appeared to shake from his insurmountable weight.  His growth showed no sign of ever stopping, and soon all of the universe might come crashing down simply due to his very existence, but that only had Oli and Ned begging for more size and mass.

The swirling black storm above Ned fueling his growth only grew stronger as his arms began to shudder and flex of their own accord.  Soon, Ned’s upper arms were joining the rest of his body in its symphony of growth. Flexing his upper arm, Ned watched as it quickly bloated with power, his biceps and triceps becoming thick and dense as stone.  Ned screamed out again in ecstasy as his clavicle fractured and enlarged to create more room for upper body growth. The prominence of his upper arms made it difficult to bend his arms, forcing them to move down out of their flex.  

So much strength in these arms!  I could easily tear the earth apart with my bare hands, and my strength is only increasing!!!  Look at my forearms surging with size. My hands… fuck… the muscles of my hands… growing so massive… I’ll be able to crush entire planets into molecules!!!! I AM BECOMING A CREATURE OF  PURE MUSCLE!!!! LOOK AT ME!!!! SEE ME FOR WHAT I AM!!! I AM A NIGHTMARE!!! I AM A MUTANT OF MUSCLE!! I’M A FREAK!!! I AM A FUCKING GOD OF PURE STRENGTH AND POWER!!!!!!

Ned did a full body flex, and Quinn watch as his body surged even taller and his muscles became more grotesquly erotic as they took on more and more mass. 

As Ned flexed, the entire ground Quinn and Oli stood upon began to fracture, and Quinn was shaken to the ground.  Larger and larger Ned grew, and with each flex, lightning would burst from his muscles, wind would flow simply by the movement of his limbs, and his eyes began to glow pure white.  When he released the flex, Ned’s body maintained the pump he had gained, but the black hole above him was now swirling faster, like a giant maelstrom sucking in stars and planets to fuel his growth.

Ned’s head had grown somewhat with his body, but it remained somewhat insignificant looking compared to the rest of his body.  Quinn covered his ears as in an unanticipated roar and a flash of what appeared to be pure torment to Ned, the bones that formed his entire cranium began to split re-fuse larger.  Quinn watched this with fascination and awe, but it was truthfully a frightening sight. His skull kept swelling larger and larger until his head resembled an immense light bulb. Ned’s neck muscle continued to thicken to support the added weight of his new head as it exploded with further growth.  Soon his eye sockets expanded, as did the glowing orbs that had replaced his eyes. Ned howled again in anguish as his eyes doubled and tripled in size. He looks deformed, almost alien like, Quinn thought, until his cheekbones and nose began to grow as well, he could see that very soon, it would resemble a human head again… just a leviathan version.  Ned’s chin grew and squared off at the same time as his brow ridge became more prominent. His traps, afraid of being left behind, soon grew more immense and once again fused above his ears.

THIS IS IT!!!  THE MOMENT I HAVE TRULY BEEN WAITING FOR!!!  THIS IS WHAT THE UNIVERSE IS WAITING FOR!!!

Ned’s pubis became more and more muscular as his miniscule cock began to get hard.  Ned threw his head back and cried out as the greatest surge of ecstasy him him. Starting at the base, some sort of otherworldly power was forcing it to grow longer and thicker, transforming his his cock into a mirror of the rest of his body: and immense, bulging, pulsating, throbbing collumn of mass.  His cock grew tremendous, quickly, and was soon as thick as his own forearm, and just as his body continued to grow more massive, so did his dick.

Ned wrapped his hand around his cock, stroking it, and feeling it grow even longer and thicker in his hand

MY BODY… EVOLVING...THOUSANDS OF NERVE ENDINGS IMBEDDED IN MY COCK… MORE SENSITIVE THAN…. ANY COCK CREATED!!!!!

Ned could only drool as wave after wave of pleasure besieged his body as he stroked his new cock, watching it grow even more colossal. Soon the head began to swell, expand, and lengthen, until the mushroom head was larger than Ned’s own fist.

Both Oli can Quinn covered their ears as Ned roared as his balls began to widen.  Quinn could smell Ned’s testosterone being emitted in waves, forced into overdrive as his evolved testicles begame power plants to fuel his final metamorphosis into a being of pure size, power, and masculinity.

Quinn could feel the universe splintering as more and more planets were sucked into the black hole and into Ned.  As his balls grew immense and sent out shockwaves of testosterone , he grew even faster, adding on thousands upon thousands of pounds of muscle each minute.  Hair erupted all over his body, growing quicker and thicker on his face and chest. His hair growth was so out of control that where one follicle would once have grown, he now had five or six, making his newly grown beard thick and dark.  Within minutes, Ned had a full beard that lengthened as he grew taller and more immense, standing over 200 feet tall now. His pecs were covered in a pure pelt of jet black hair, but no matter how thick the hair on Ned was, it couldn’t hide the musculature beneath it.  The hairs on his arms and legs lengthened, trailing down onto his hands and feet, and his underarms had a forest of long jet black hair. His pubes grew denser as well as they covered his pubic mound and ever expanding balls.  

Thick hose like veins rose up all over Ned’s body, feeding his musculature.  New veins and arteries were formed doubling and then tripling the amount the human body had.  Quinn assumed Ned’s body needed this larger amount of so my massive heart would be able to pump the required power throughout his body, but was that even how his body worked anymore?  His cock, now nearing the length of his leg, grew even thicker as pipe-like veins took root, crisscrossing the entire surface and feeding this monster. The head... ugh!!! The head grew even larger, nearly the size of Ned’s cranium.  His cock was indeed more than simply a device for reproduction. It was a monument to all things muscle, strength, all things masculine, and all things Godly. Leaking a constant flow of precum, Ned’s entire body began emitting the most intense musk... sexual and masculine.

Changing... becoming... something else... all of my senses are becoming heightened... becoming... my voice...so deep... more like a rumble of thunder then a voice...yes...becoming even stronger... becoming... yes... a being of pure instinct... I feel as if I am transforming into something more animalistic the more masculine I become.

The blackhole emitted largest surge of power into Ned’s body, and he let out a massive roar that began to tear holes in the universe, letting in bursts of power into his body.

THIS NEW EVOLUTION WAS WANTED… ASKED FOR… BUT UNEXPECTED.  I DIDN’T TRULY REALISE WHAT IT WAS I DESIRED FOR MY LIFE, UNTIL NOW… AND NOW I AM RECEIVING IT!!!!!

MY BRAIN… TAKING IN SO MUCH INFORMATION AT ONCE… YES!!!!  SMARTER THAN ANY GOD… MORE SUPREME THAN ANY GOD… YOU ARE WITNESSING THE BIRTH OF THE GODHEAD… THE GOD OF GOD’S!!!!  I AM THE ABSOLUTE BEING… THE CREATOR OF ALL… I AM THE ALLFATHER!!!!!! I BREATH IN AND I CAN SMELL TIME!!!! I CAN WITNESS STARS BEING BORN AND DESTROYED… MY MIND CAN NEVER BE COMPREHENDED… I HAVE EVOLVED PAST ALL GOD’S… I AM THEIR SUPERIOR… THEIR RULER… AND YET I STILL CONTINUE TO EVOLVE INTO MORE!!!!!

The blackhole had sucked up every last planet and star in the known universe until there was only darkness.  The only light that emitted was coming from Ned’s eyes. Quinn watched the storm begin to lower itself until it engulfed all of Ned’s body, making it impossible for Quinn to even see him, even as Ned continued to grow larger and larger.  All Quinn could hear was Ned’s booming voice, and that he heard with both his ears and mind. He is everywhere now, Quinn thought, he is all of existance!!!

MY MIND HAS BURST OPEN!!!!  KNOWLEDGE FROM THE FIRST STAR THAT WAS BORN HAS FILLED ME!!!! 

Ned’s laughter could be heard over the storm surrounding him, growing louder and louder, shaking the very core of Quinn’s existence.  Not able to turn away from the final transformation that was transpiring, Quinn watched as the storm moved down Ned’s torso, revealing The Allfather, the mightiest creature in existence. 

LOOK UPON ME!!!  WHAT YOU WORSHIP IS BECOMING EVEN MORE THAN YOU CAN COMPREHEND!!!

Looking up, Quinn could could see that The AlFfather and the storm appeared to be merging into one being.  As it swirled lower around The Allfather, his massive legs began to slowly evaporate, his mountain size quads dissolving and becoming part of the storm.  Still growing more and more massive, everything below Ned’s legs were now a swirling part of the entire universe. The only thing that surged out of the swirling cloud was his massive cock… larger than anything Quinn could even imagine. He looks exactly like the genie that Oli must have imagined, Quinn thought… and yet now he has something more to worship!  Ned was the God of all God’s. Did he even remember being human?

EVER CELL… EVERY MOLECULE… EVERY ATOM… 

The AllFather screamed as his entire body began to glow with power.  

THE KNOWLEDGE… I… GAINED BEFORE… NOTHING TO WHAT… I AM… RECEIVING...

The AllFather’s upper body now stood 500 feet tall and still it continued to expand… growing thicker… wider…. taller… hairier… and more and more powerful.

The AllFather looked down at both Quinn and Oli and grinned.  Picking up the small worshiper with his hand, he held Oli close to his mouth.  With one breathe, Oli was fully transformed as large white wings burst from his back.  Now, Quinn thought, he will be able to worship forever.

I AM THE UNIVERSE!!!!!  I AM ETERNITY!!!! I AM THE ONE TRUE POWER!!!!!!  MATTER IS MINE TO COMMAND!!!!

As The AllFather laughed, new suns, stars, planets, and galaxies began to emerge from his lips.  New worlds were being created from within him.

I NOW REIGN SUPREME OVER EVERYTHING!!!  I EXIST AS EVERYTHING!!!! THIS POWER… SO INTOXICATING… SHOULD THE UNIVERSE FEAR ME, QUINN????

Quinn discovered that he couldn’t speak.  The ever growing AllFather was too majestic… to mighty…

Ripping his own chest open with his hands, Quinn saw universes and galaxies swirling within him as he expanded larger and larger.... Soon filling every inch of space.  Soon, Quinn could no longer even see The AllFather’s face as his size took up every inch of the universe and continued to keep expanding.

I AM WHAT YOU WANT JUST A SLIVER OF… WHAT YOU MASTURBATE OVER… I AM TOTAL AND COMPLETE POWER!!!!  WATCHING YOU FROM MY FLAT BRINGING HOME GUY AFTER GUY TO FUCK… I WISHED FOR YOU TO NOTICE ME… TO WANT TO FUCK ME… I WORSHIPED YOU!!!  NOW… I WILL BE WORSHIPED!!!!! NOW WHEN YOU MATERBATE, YOU WILL THINK ABOUT ME!!!!

Quinn felt an explosion rip him apart, existing now as only consciousness.  I’m falling, he thought. I no longer exist, yet I am falling!! All of the universe sped past him as he fell faster and faster.  Looking up, Quinn’s consciousness could see that The AllFather was indeed, the universe, and the universe was the AllFather. He was making the suns shine… he was controlling all of existence… he was creating life with his mere thoughts.  

Quinn felt the atoms that made up his body come back together, and as he continued to fall, he was able to look into the AllFather’s eye, and instantly his cock was painfully erect, and he was cumming harder and longer than he had ever done in his entire life.  His cock was like a geyser shooting gallons of cum. His mind swirled until he felt a massive thud... and realised that he was lying on his back on the floor of his own flat.

Trying to stand, Quinn found that he was too weak to even think about moving for a while.  All around him, he could smell and feel the cum that had shot from his cock. Looking down, he could see that his cock was still hard, but unlike before, his cock was massive… standing erect at over twelve inches and thick.  Lifting his hand, he found that even his massive paw couldn’t encircle it’s girth… and the head… fuck, Quinn thought!!! I’ll never fuck again!!! This thing is massive!!! What had Ned done?

Just thinking about him… Quinn began to cum again, over and over, his orgasm stronger than anything he had ever felt.  When the four minutes were over and Quinn could think straight, he found one final gift from Ned. He had left his trademark on his cock, for now it was covered in the same tattoos that had appeared on Oli.

What can this mean, Quinn wondered, as he lay his head back on the floor…his cock beginning to go soft, but hardly losing any of its size.

*********

Jacob ran out into the night trying to distance himself from the God that was growing inside Quinn’s house.  That should have been me, he kept thinking to himself. That should have been me!! As he ran, not paying attention to where he was going,  his body smacked into what felt like a brick wall. Looking up, he came face to face with a massive bearded figure. As the shadowed figure looked down at Jacob, the rising sun let him see the growing smile on his face.

Look at you… far more superior than anything else on Earth… and now you are mine…

In an instant, Jacob could feel himself slowing unraveling, his entire being transported and merging with the laughing creature in front of him… Soon, he would be apart of John… and the world would tremble with what John would become... 

To Be Continued...




 

 

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8 hours ago, BigBen said:

That was worth waiting for! Thanks! You are a god of writing yourself 

Thank you so much!!!  This story just keeps telling itself as I write it.  I’m so glad you enjoy it.  It means a lot to me!!

-Q

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This was AMAZING.

I always had a soft spot for your stories, since I  seem to have a certain affinity with your fantasies, but I think this one is your best one so far.

I love the unpredictability of it all and the yearn for growth and power that permeates.

I can't wait to read what's next, I have a feeling we'll witness the rise of a very dark soul.

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Really excellent writing.  I thoroughly enjoy the way you work in the subconscious elements as well as the muscle growth.  It’s really inventive and always has me looking for more.  Well done 

many thanks,

George

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On 11/11/2019 at 3:30 AM, Eorange said:

Wow man, things are getting out of control! 😂 will Quinn grow too? will everything back to normal? Great story! looking for the next chapter.

Thanks!!  Writing the next chapter now... so we’ll see.  Not sure how this is going to turn out!!

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On 11/11/2019 at 5:46 PM, superkappa said:

This was AMAZING.

I always had a soft spot for your stories, since I  seem to have a certain affinity with your fantasies, but I think this one is your best one so far.

I love the unpredictability of it all and the yearn for growth and power that permeates.

I can't wait to read what's next, I have a feeling we'll witness the rise of a very dark soul.

Thank you!!  I’m so glad you like my stories and fantasies... maybe we should talk!!  I think you may be right about what is to come... it can’t be anything good!!

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20 hours ago, hardmuscl4life said:

Really excellent writing.  I thoroughly enjoy the way you work in the subconscious elements as well as the muscle growth.  It’s really inventive and always has me looking for more.  Well done 

many thanks,

George

Thanks!!  I’m really enjoying writing this one, and glad you’re enjoying it!

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