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LOVE a vulnerable beast!!! Great short story with lots of potential for expansion. Hope to see this story "fleshed out" :Din the near future! 

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You guys are ALWAYS too kind.  Thank you though.  I don't know if short stories are my thing really - I like to really "flesh" things out, so to speak and to develop a world around what makes the story somehow believable. That takes a lot more time and many more words - so after I wrap up the other active stories I have going, I may come back to this one and see if I can have some fun with it. >:-) 

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Ikaika will ahve a great tiem with the Dr. 

Of course we love your long stories but this one just short ebough and you made it hot

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