studio77 Posted March 7, 2019 Share Posted March 7, 2019 Absolutely brilliant story I can’t wait to see what further feats of strength will be discovered. I think his whole body is about to be upgraded . 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anormorph Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 4 hours ago, bradspencer said: Weird how he had the biggest appetite lately . . . Declann isn't the only one who's appetite is surging. I'm pretty sure all our appetites are thoroughly whetted for this to continue! A delicate balance again between immersion and explanation - thank you for finding it and for making it work so well! I have a weakness for sci-fi/hero themes so this is checking quite a few boxes that will result in the need to fan myself 'cause it's going to get . 3 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfram456new Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Loved the story so far. The slow build up and the multiple perspectives, great work. Keep going. Cant wait for the next. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jtchef2 Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Can't wait for more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dredlifter Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Fantastic story! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeaMusc Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Well paced and with enough background to make whatever happens in the future quite believable. I am loving the Serve and Protect title and hope to see John save Gabriel again as Gabriel has done for him. This story is ripe for awesomeness and I can't wait to be a part of the ride. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardbodor Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 I’m very impressed and looking forward to reading more! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cregssatx Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 This story has all the characteristics of an awesome journey! Can't wait to see where it goes. Great job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xmrr20a Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Awesome! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted March 10, 2019 Share Posted March 10, 2019 Outstanding work so far. Loving all the medical stuff And now he is in his way to grow. This gonna be great 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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