sithspawn Posted February 13, 2019 Share Posted February 13, 2019 . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dredlifter Posted February 15, 2019 Share Posted February 15, 2019 That was a great story! Really well done. Hope you keep writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrestlejockCT Posted February 15, 2019 Share Posted February 15, 2019 I really enjoyed that one, start to finish! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nnnrg Posted February 18, 2019 Share Posted February 18, 2019 Still not sure what happened with Chris. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted February 18, 2019 Share Posted February 18, 2019 Oh WOao.I miss the final chapter but now in caught up. This was an excellent first story my man It gad everything nad i loved the flashbacks style of the whole fic. I do wonder tho. What happened to his first love? The one that raped Carlos? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 19, 2019 Share Posted February 19, 2019 Obviously the only fault in the story is Chris's resolution. I think the way you switched back and forth between the two stories was an interesting concept and with some refinement it could be amazing. Overall I really enjoyed this story. The characters are compelling, it has a good arch, and a happy ending. It's sexy in parts and emotionally affecting in others. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PozmaOfOz Posted April 7, 2019 Share Posted April 7, 2019 Dirty blond hair with various sun-kissed patches? Startingly blue eyes that evoke thoughts of thunderstorms? I know a guy like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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