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Oh WOao.I miss the final chapter but now in caught up.

This was an excellent first story my man

It gad everything nad i loved the flashbacks style of the whole fic.

I do wonder tho. What happened to his first love? The one that raped Carlos?

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Obviously the only fault in the story is Chris's resolution. I think the way you switched back and forth between the two stories was an interesting concept and with some refinement it could be amazing. 

Overall I really enjoyed this story. The characters are compelling, it has a good arch, and a happy ending. It's sexy in parts and emotionally affecting in others. Well done.

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