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You got  an interesting start my man.

The Flashbak style of the story is working so far

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59 minutes ago, Ro20316 said:

You got  an interesting start my man.

The Flashbak style of the story is working so far

Thank you very much!

 

Also, I can’t believe THE JayPat liked my story! 🤩

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I love your writing style, world-building and all the nuances that come with the main character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

And romantic too...... ❤️

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1 hour ago, GymFox90 said:

I love your writing style, world-building and all the nuances that come with the main character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

And romantic too...... ❤️

Thank you!

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Chapter 1 is an awesome start!  Love that you're spending time on building the characters!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

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4 hours ago, cregs1972 said:

Chapter 1 is an awesome start!  Love that you're spending time on building the characters!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you!

 

2 hours ago, Elky said:

This is your first story? Wow, it's really good.

It’s the first story I’ve finished. Thanks you,

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This is great! The structure of the story works very well, and our protagonist is brilliantly portrayed.

Keep it up!

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Amazing start to this story💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻Don't keep us waiting for more💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻

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