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11 hours ago, peewes said:

 

That is a great pic.  I'm guessing you use giantdimensions.com?  I use it to visualize size differences when my characters get far apart size-wise.  For the latest chapters, this is the visualization I've been using:

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Part 9

 

Seth and Trevor finish changing at the gym and then head out to a sports bar before making their way over to the arena. As they walk in, Trevor again admires how huge Seth looks, towering over everyone in sight.  Not to mention his incredible width.  Seth is two, sometimes three times wider than the puny people he walks by.  It's crowded but given Seth's size and height, he's so easy to spot that Trevor would never lose track of him.  Trevor swoons as Seth has to turn and duck to get through the metal detectors, accepting comments of surprise from the arena's security team.

 

As the pair head toward their seats Trevor can't help but contrast and compare every one else's size. The size of other people's arms and chests, their breadth and especially their height. Trevor feels like he's in a twilight zone as he looks around. It feels like not a single person is shorter than him! A few girls are his height, but so many are even taller! And all the guys seem to hit 6ft at the lowest! To Trevor it really feels like he is shrinking in the crowd.  Seth seems to sense all the large young adults around too. He can't help but agree that they all look taller and more athletic that normal. Seth doesn't say anything but notices how small Trevor looks among the crowds as well. Perhaps it just the nature of being at an athletic event, having so many superior built people around, an observation that Seth remarks on.

 

“College students are getting huge, aren't they Trevor," he says with a quick wink and a smile. Trevor grins, but feels tiny as usual as is becoming all too normal for him.

 

The two find their seats and enjoy the first half of the game. Trevor especially loves how Seth's mass encroaches on his own chair. Arena seats were not meant for 6'10+, 350 lb muscle giants. The entire time Seth's bulging biceps are pressed up against Trevor's shoulder, though Trevor doesn't mind. Trevor feels really bad for whichever unlucky schlubs got seated being Seth. At one point, Seth simply reaches around and beyond Trevor and rests his big arm on the back of Trevor's chair, caccooning Trevor within the confines of a tight space created by Seth's mass of pecs, shoulder, biceps and forearms. He feels like big Seth's protected date. It gives him a strange comfort. Trevor turns to his side and sees Seth's massive shirted armpit looming at eye level, giving off an intoxicating masculine and musky smell.

 

At halftime the two get up to get snacks. As they wander the corridor searching for food, they hear a familiar, deep and jocular voice call out.

 

“YO! BIG SETH!”

 

Trevor freezes in place, recognizing the voice as well...although it seems deeper than he remembered. He looks up to see Seth is waving his big hand high up in the air. Seth is so tall that he can easily see who shouted at him, while the entities are hidden from Trevor among the sea of people.

 

“HOW HAVE YOU BEEN, MY BIG DUDE! DAMN, LOOKING JACKED AS EVER!”

 

Eventually the crowd parts and Trevor looks up, way up, to a beautiful, ridiculously attractive young couple. Brooke and her new boyfriend, Jack, are attending the game as well. As they walk toward the boys, Seth quickly looks down at Trevor with a shrug and an apologetic look.

 

"I didn't know they'd be here," he mouths to Trevor.

 

Trevor watches from as the gorgeous couple approach. Brooke towers over girls and guys alike, even more so in her 2" heels. She is truly a sultry college coed giant in her tight baby-doll tee adorned with the teams logo stretched across her ample breasts. And right beside her is Jack, towering even above her. Jack's t-shirt is also very tight due to his own exceptional musculature, not lagging too far behind Seth. Jack has a shit-eating grin as he approaches, which only accentuates his pretty boy frat jock face. Trevor gulps as they approach, seemingly rising higher and higher. Trevor can't help but mutter to himself how incredible they look together.

 

"Jeezus....they are so tall... so FUCKING TALL... Perfect muscles..." he says to himself, feeling his cock stir in his jeans.

 

Brooke smiles and greets Seth. “Omigod Seth! It's so good to see you! Looking buff and tall as ever! Wow! Whenever I think you can't get any bigger, your arms look like they have an entire new inch on them.”

 

Seth smiles graciously, always happy to received compliments on his physique.

 

“Yeah, bro! I'm never gonna get as jacked as you if you keep packing on the muscle like that! Give me a chance to catch up, Brah!” Jack adds.

 

“Thank you Brooke. And no way, Jack! The bigger the better right? Haha, I hope you are enjoying your time on campus being the big dog because when I come back I intend to TAKE OVER!”

 

Seth grins and quickly flexes his cannonball right arm. His sleeve is mercifully are able to resist the onslaught...for now. Jack throws his head back and laughs before reaching out to feel Seth's massive arm, causing a fit of jealousy in Trevor. Trevor's heart flutters more as he notices now that when Seth raises his arms to flex, his own head would be UNDER Seth's arms when standing up straight! The thought that Seth can now literally flex OVER him makes him feel even tinier around these giants.

 

As Seth, Jack and Brooke chat, Trevor can't help but feel like a midget. He realizes that he doesn't reach the shoulders of any of the three. The three giants completely blow him away. And not just Trevor. Looking around, everyone can't help but notice the three amazingly fit and good looking coeds dwarfing everyone in the concourse. Trevor hasn't seen Brooke since the breakup and also since she is so busy with basketball and he can't deny she is hotter than ever...and taller. Trevor composes himself and decides to join the conversation.

 

"How tall are you now, Brooke?"

 

Brooke jerks here head to the side looking for that little voice she hears.  She looks over to the small man next to Seth. Trevor's heart sinks as he realizes that she hadn't even noticed that he was there. He guesses that this is most likely because he looks so small while standing next to Seth.

 

"Oh!  Hi there Trevor.. I'm so sorry, I didn't see you there. I hope you're doing well. It's great that Seth took his little buddy out to a basketball game. Oh, to answer your question I measured in at 6 ft 5, Trevor! Isn't that awesome! Tallest on the girls basketball team! And I'm maintaining my proportions so well, don't you think? I don't look stretched out at all.”

 

Brooke giggles while turning and twisting her form to show off her rockin' body, smiling proudly. She looks so happy, energetic and radiant. Trevor had been worried that should would come off as frosty once they inevitably ran into each other again and it was something he'd been fearing. But Brooke seemed to harbor no ill will at all... Unfortunately, this makes Trevor feel worse. He would've rather she felt more uncomfortable around him. Instead, it felt like Brooke had completely moved on and was as happy as she could be. It felt like she had indeed outgrown and moved on to bigger and better things and perhaps had even forgot about him as he dwindled from her sight.

 

Seth congratulates her. "Well it looks good on you. Good thing you are growing too!  You'll need to keep up with Jack here, he measured in at six foot eight the other day."

 

Brooke giggles some more and gropes Jack's heaving pecs.  She gives him a pec on the cheek while kicking up her back foot.

 

"Oh I know, Seth! He's so hot. I just love my BIG and TALL hunky man.” You couldn't wipe the proud grin off of Jack's stupid...yet incredibly handsome face as his super tall vixen girlfriend dotes on him. “I measured him too last night when we were um...having fun, hehe! We love measuring things."

 

The three giants throw back their heads and laugh. They continue to chat, forgetting once again that Trevor is lingering right there underneath them. 

 

"Sounds like things are going well, Brooke," Seth adds.

 

"Oh yes. We're on top of the world. Jack here leaves me feeling happy and ... well... more fulfilled than any man I've been with, let's just say!"

 

Trevor's dick shrivels even more at these revelations. And what is crazy is he honestly doesn't think Brooke is trying to degrade him. To Trevor, it really was like she was talking as if he wasn't there. All three of the giants are. “I guess that when you are nearly a foot shorter than everyone else that can happen," he thinks.  It is then that Trevor notices how Seth is still well taller than Jack, who was just revealed to be at six foot eight. Obviously his relief that Seth's growth had slowed was not entirely true as he seemed to dwarf even Jack.

 

As the giant's conversation winds down Brooke looks around in curiosity, eventually again catching Trevor's eye.

 

"Oh, yes! Trevor. I forgot you were here. Good to see you again, how are you?"

 

Jack jumps in as well, grinning stupidly way down at the tiny man whose woman he had easily won by being the bigger, better man. A thought that fills him with pride.

 

"Trevor! My man, how's school going? Haven't seen you around much. And I can usually spot people from a long ways away since I'm so tall, bruh!  Haha. But I guess you sorta get lost in the crowds a bit, huh, being short and all.”

 

Trevor rolls his eyes. “Hi Jack. You're looking good too.” Trevor can help but comment on his form, causing Jack to smile even wider showing his perfectly straight white teeth. “School is going well. I'm talking some different business classes. Keeps me busy with the studying. I have one professor who-”

 

“-That's cool, man.” Jack rudely cuts him off, bored with Trevor's story. "Well, halftimes about over, we'd better head back to watch the game. It's great to see you Seth! Can't wait until we can lift and grow together. Just us two huge muscle bros getting bigger and bigger!"

 

Then to Trevor's horror performs a simple act that completely crushes his will. As Jack turns to guide Brooke back to their seats, Jack reaches over and pats Trevor on the head.

 

“See ya later, little guy!” he says with a smug grin.

 

"Seth, say 'hi' to Stacy for me!"  

 

Brooke smiles and waves to Seth and Trevor as they saunter away, seemingly unconcerned about Jack's act. Seth too has noticed and does his best to pretend it didn't happen, hoping that by ignoring the action it won't stir up his little buddy. Nonetheless, Trevor can't help but feel that he has been truly dominated and emasculated by Jack, the bigger, stronger, better looking man.

 

Back at their seats Seth admits, “That was pretty douchey by Jack. Sorry about that man.”

 

“It's ok. Jack won the girl. He's a jock. He had to gloat, its in his nature.”

 

Seth smiles down at Trevor. “Well if he ever gives you too much shit, let me know. Jack may be big...” Seth proudly flexes his monstrous biceps. “But I'm WAY bigger.”

 

After the game that night, Trevor is laying on Seth's couch surfing the internet on his phone before bed. After the events of the game and recalling Seth's comment at the gym, Trevor is researching Elongro in more detail. The new rounds of size inadequacy have relapsed his psyche into a state of inferiority. Trevor feels like he is literally shrinking in the presence of all his close acquaintances. And if the last measurement was accurate he really was shrinking! Trevor begins to wonder, did he inject himself correctly? The vial he bought seems to be working exponentially more effectively than any dose he'd read about. Well, it is on his friends. Seth, the girls, Jack, are all far exceeding the expected results that have been documented on the deep web forums of the internet.

 

Trevor thinks he must have done something wrong with his injection. Trevor still had the vial back home in the back of his fridge, even though the vial had enough for five people and now five people had been dosed. Since Trevor hadn't been growing, a few days ago he took it out and examined how much liquid remained. It looked like there was enough liquid for about half of a dose, maybe a little less. Through Trevor's research he has discovered that black market Elongro has skyrocketed to over $20,000 per vial due to its growing demand, so he quickly determines that a new vial was is of the question.

 

Considering injection the remaining drug, Trevor also researches the potential side effects of a second shot. Because the drug was designed to be effective after one shot, there is very little information to find. The majority of what he finds states that there were no effects, that Elongro acted like a vaccine, only one dose was needed and it would work or it wouldn't. He did find a few sparse mentions of 'light adverse reactions' with no further detail but nothing that looks worrisome. Most the sites simply restate the original warning, that as long as you were past puberty there should be no devastating health consequences of a second dose.

 

Trevor looks up to see Seth wandering the hall getting ready for bed, his wide shoulders nearly touching each side as he struts down the hall, filling it with his warm, pulsing masculine size. Fuck, Trevor wants to be that big so bad. To take up that much space. To have that much MASS. As he admires his friend's gigantic frame he decides that he just has to try it again. Perhaps when he first injected maybe he missed his blood stream and the Elongro dissolved or went somewhere else in his body where it wasn't synthesized. Spurred on by desperate jealousy, Trevor plans right there and then to take a second shot when he gets home. Even though he only had half a dose, even if he could get half the results that Seth was having, that would be a dream come true after what he's gone through. Trevor drifts to sleep, imagining just half the gains of Seth. Imagining himself growing eight inches taller, adding 100 lbs of muscle. His dick hardens as he drifts to sleep imagining being a large powerhouse of a man like his best friend Seth.

 

The next morning a thump wakes Trevor. He bolts upgright and notices Seth has wandered into the living area to greet and wake Trevor. Being so wide Seth, has understandably thumped the hallway wall with his huge elbow. Seth, still in morning zombie mode rubs the sleep from his eyes.

 

“AHHHHHH. Good morning dude.”

 

“Ugh, is it morning already, Seth?”

 

Trevor does the same, clearing the fog from his brain. As his vision clears he once again looks upon Seth's incredible body...and specifically one incredible body part. Seth hasn't realize it but he still has a case of morning wood.

 

Seth stands there godlike in just tight briefs. With a yawn he stretches his hands up to the tall ceiling and palms it easily. Trevor is stunned at the display, knowing that it would take a running jump for him to be able to touch that same ceiling. With his hands up, his uber-masculine, muscle-packed body literally stretches from ceiling to floor.  Halfway down, or up depending on where you start, the powerful display is bisected by a raging bulge stretching the briefs to the max. Trevor stares in disbelief as the thick cock nearly reaches halfway down his long meaty thighs and his ponderous balls completely fill up the pouch of the underwear. Trevor silently wonders why Seth wears underwear at all given how confining it must be to his huge mega cock. The thickness of the manhood has swelled too, making it as thick as a baseball bat and in Trevor's head that's what he starts to really compare it to. Trevor mentally calculates how big it must be, realizing with a jolt that it looks to be over a foot long, even on his enormous body. On some tall guys, sometimes even a big cock doesn't necessarily look that big because their frames are so long...Seth does not have this problem.

 

Seth continues to stretch and shake out his long, muscular limbs. Trevor finds the scene incredible erotic even in its banality. He starts breathing heavily, his cock quickly reaches full mast. Unable to contain himself, he blurts out.

 

“Holy fuck dude, how BIG is that thing???"

 

Trevor's outburst brings Seth back into reality. He looks down at his tent and starts laughing.

 

"Fuck dude... sorry! I didn't notice! I wake up most mornings with crazy wood but I usually, um, take care of things with Stacy before getting breakfast!"

 

Trevor just keep staring, unable to take his eyes off it. Seth can tell he's thinking of something. Trevor starts to say it but stops a few times. Seth can see the trepidation in his head. Hoping to satisfy an itch of his own, Seth decides to delicately approach the situation.

 

"I know, this thing is huge, even for a big guy like me. Even I get shocked at just how BIG I am down there.  It's pretty amazing, huh.  Um...so Trev, I know you said you weren't gay or anything so... um... would you mind measuring it for me? I haven't measured it in a long, LONG time. Seeing your reaction, now I'm curious just how big it is, haha."

 

Trevor sits there stunned and flabbergasted at what he as heard. In that moment he wants nothing more than to explore Seth's body.

 

“Yes, of course!" he replies meekly, it not maybe a bit too eagerly, causing Seth to chuckle.

 

“Haha. Thought so. This'll be fun.”

 

Seth fishes in the drawer for a tape measure and tosses it to Trevor. With smirk Seth hooks a thumb in his briefs. Like the big giant goofball he is he swings his hips back and forth a bit as if he's gonna start a sensuous strip tease.  It's something that Trevor imagines Seth does this every night for his amazingly attractive girlfriend. Instead, with a sudden jerk of his powerful arms he rips them off with an ear splitting tear.

 

"Damn things were getting too small anyway!"

 

Immediately Seth's long and thick cock comes up and hits his abs with a loud THWAK before settling at a 45 degree angle jutting out from his body. It looks MASSIVE to Trevor's eyes, even bigger than he thought. It's so big and thick he thinks it's amazing that the weight of the manhood doesn't cause it to sag downward even while at full erection. That is until Trevor realizes that all of Seth's muscles are so strong and developed that his kegel muscles wouldn't be any different.

 

"Fuck...." Trevor says frozen in place. Seth hears Trevor's soft exaltation as he watches his small friend bring the cold tape measure up to his thick cock. Looking down at Trevor next to his cock makes Seth feel so ultimately powerful. He mentally compares how the thickness of his dick might actually rival Trevor's wrist in diameter and his forearm in length. It's a feeling of masculine superiority that he can't ignore and it makes his cock throb and leak. Suddenly though, big Seth trembles as he feels Trevor's cold hand and cold measuring tape make contact with his hot erection.

 

"Oof! That tickles, little buddy!" Seth shouts as Trevor watches his cock pulse even a bit LARGER than just a moment ago.

 

With awe Trevor places the end of the tape against Seth's trimmed pubes. He runs the tape along the shaft, marveling as inch after inch passes. Past the base of the cut head and out to the tip.

 

"Fuck... BIG SETH.... your cock... its fucking massive! It's 13.25" long!!! That's porn star sized... BIGGER than porn star sized!"

 

Seth rumbles a DEEP, pleased moan. “FUCK YES! I'M MASSIVE! Keep going little man. Tell me how HUGE I am!”

 

Trevor then measure the girth, barely believing what he is seeing.

 

"Dude you are 8".. almost 9" around! Fuck....." He says, absolutely stunned, his own little cock pressing against his shorts, barely perceptible.

 

Seth's big chest is heaving mightily just above Trevor's eye level as he breathes with energized excitement. Seth's head is tilted forward, grinning cockily down at Trevor as he announces the numbers. The last time Seth measured himself he was just a hair under 12”. Not quite a full foot of cock. But now, the excitement at learning that he had blown past the footlong mark and now sported a 13' hard dick flooded his mind with intoxicating masculine pride.

 

"FUCK YEAH LITTLE DUDE. I HAVE ONE OF THE BIGGEST COCKS ON THE PLANET! Thank God Stacy is so tall, I don't know of any short girls who could come close to taking this monster. To tell you the truth, she's even been having a hell of a time taking it all lately even though she is growing. Just look at it Trevor! It's so huge. Ah fuck, knowing my cock, my muscles, my height, all everything exceeds the average my so much. I FEEL SO BIG!”

 

Trevor looks on at his giant friend as he completes his monologue, taking in the giant form. Taking in the the insanely huge monster cock sticking out from under his cut abs. He really is the perfect man. Masculinity personified...and he' still growing.

 

“That's because you are BIG, Seth.   Colossal.  Herculean.  Titanic.  They're going to have to create new words for you, Bro!"  Seth chuckles.  "You are so...huge... And you're only going to get bigger. That thought terrifies and excites me a the same time. I mean, Seth, your cock is now over twice as long as mine...”

 

“TWICE AS LONG?? HAHAHAH!  FUCK YEAH! I'M A GIANT!”

 

“Yes you are, Seth.” Trevor meekly says. “Seth? Can...can I measure your muscles.”

 

Seth peers down at Trevor. “Of course you can buddy. I know how much you like my size. I can't blame you, I like it to, haha. Since you are way down there already, why don't you start with my quads.”

 

Seth shifts his feet spreading his legs wide. Trevor wraps the tape around the Seth's colossal right quad. Seth's huge bull nuts accidentally brush onto Trevor's forearms since they hang so low and huge. Trevor gasps as he briefly feels their weight, like two Haas avacados.

 

“Quads are now 34 inches...”

 

Trevor straightens up and admires the tight waist as Seth stands at attention with his hands on his waist. Trevor looks up into Seth's smiling eyes. Before measuring his waist, Trevor reaches out and feels his friend's huge, deep set abs, rubbing his fingers into the grooves into each perfectly spaced brick. Seth flexes his abs and the canyons deepen.
 

“Amazing, big guy.” Trevor praises. “You have so much muscle and yet no sign of any roidgut.” The words stroke Seth's ego, but he also is loving how he is able to impress his best friend. Trevor tapes his waist. “You are so freakin' tall and your waist is still just 34 inches.”

 

“So my waist matches my leg size. Sounds pretty awesome to me. Do you agree, Trev?”

 

“Hell yeah man. Extremely few bodybuilders can boast that. It makes sense though. You need huge muscular legs to hold up those huge pecs!”

 

Seth smirks and bounces his pecs. Trevor's eyes are looking just slightly up at Seth's nipples as they pulse up and down. Seth's chest is so developed that his nipples point right back down at Seth. No words are needed to know what's next. Trevor does his best to measure Seth's chest, but Seth inevitably has to help because he just too wide for Trevor. Seth holds the end of the tape against his chest as Trevor works his way under Seth's arms and around his body, finally getting the tape in place.

 

“You chest is 59 inches around!”

 

“HELL YEAH! Gonna break 60 soon, I can FEEL IT!”

 

Seth breaks out into some more poses as Trevor steps away.

 

“I suppose it's time for the big guns?” Seth asks with a smirk as he puts up a double biceps pose. Trevor nods, trying to suppress his drooling. “Although, little dude. We may have a problem...”

 

Without breaking the pose, Seth steps forward, right up to Trevor until his cock pokes into Trevor's upper abdomen, yet Seth says nothing about it.  Trevor's head is tilted back as he looks UP into Seth's eyes, so far above his own.

 

“I don't know if you can reach these peaks, little Trev. I guess I'll have to CROUCH DOWN for you.”

 

Trevor's heart races. He hates feeling small, but conversely, the thought of Seth being SO BIG makes his cock throb. He watches as Seth, with that cocky yet sexy grin, begins to sink down, while still flexing those two mountainous arms at his side. He slinks lower until he is on his knees. Trevor's cock pulses as he sees it.

 

“Seth...we...we're the same height. You're on your knees and I'm standing and we are the same height.”

 

“HAHA. That's because you're small and I'M HUGE!!! Fuck yeah! Now measure these guns, tiny!”

 

Now with easier access Trevor tapes Seth's right arm, taking extra time to massage and feel all over the muscle.  His arms are so big it feels like he's encircling a warm watermelon.

 

“Twenty five inches on the dot!”

 

“UGHHHH! I'M SO HUGE!! AND I'M ONLY GOING TO GET BIGGER AND BETTER!” Seth stands back up to his towering height, having had enough of feeling so short like Trevor.

 

“Fuck, Seth. You are so hot.”

 

“THANKS LITTLE BUDDY! That means a lot. UGH! OK shit, all this measuring has got me so horny!”

 

“Me too, big Seth.”

 

Seth's body suddenly quakes as he keeps flexing. A drop of precum falls from his tip. “Ah hell, I gotta take care of this monster in the bathroom. Shit dude, with this huge thing I have to jack off like five times a day and then still fuck Stacy's brains out at night, haha! I'm just too much man and I LOVE IT!"

 

Seth turns to head toward the bathroom before looking over his shoulder at Trevor.

 

“It's not as noticeable as this battering ram of mine, but I can tell you're just as hard as I am. Care to join me in sawing some wood, little buddy?”

 

During the entire measuring session Trevor has been careful not to touch his penis, knowing any slight brush would cause detonation.

 

Like a moth to a flame Trevor follows Seth into the bathroom where they jerk off together as two bros. Trevor, being the smaller man aims for the toilet while Seth uses the shower.

 

“I stopped trying to use the toilet a long time ago, haha. Let's just say I blow a lot and all over, you'll see.”

 

In the bathroom Trevor watches as Seth pleasures his giant cock, needing both of his gigantic hands to do the deed.  As he nears completion Seth closes his eyes and imagines himself fucking Stacy. Imagines growing bigger and bigger. Towering over the tiny people of the world and blowing them away with his muscles. Having every woman want to try out his titanic cock and knowing every man wants to be him. Soon he explodes with a force that shocks Trevor. His multiple loads coat the far wall of the shower stall. Trevor's shock is short lived as the scene causes him to quickly spurt as well...though he just dribbles his comparatively tiny load into the toilet bowl.

 

Seth comes back to Earth and smiles at Trevor, “That was fun, bro. Thanks.”

 

Trevor agrees.

 

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Wow.  A great chapter.  Sort of what I expected at the ball game, though not what I'd hoped.  but.... no Trev.  Dont fall into the trap of a partial dose. Don't.  I hope not.

More to come.  I just feel bad for Trev again.  I wish he could really be honest with Seth and Seth take it seriously.

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It's almost as I predicted.  The giants pretty much treat Trev as pretty much non-existent.  Trev did good by not turning into a cry baby, he's handling it pretty well all things considered.  As much as I want Trev to grow, I think it's pretty obvious to the reason why he's shrinking (he hasn't finished puberty).  This is permanently going to effect Trev since he is probably under the guise that he's past puberty too. 

It's good that Seth keeps an eye on Trev, but if Stacy comes back around, he's pretty much out the door.  Allthough, if I read it correctly, even Stacy is having trouble with Seth's cock. 

 

more to come later...

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10 minutes ago, ploder4 said:

 

It's good that Seth keeps an eye on Trev, but if Stacy comes back around, he's pretty much out the door. 

My biggest and last fear.  That Seth leaves Trev behind too.

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As much as I find myself perpetually enraged by these characters and their actions, the fact is I'm enjoying the fuck out of this story and keep coming back to see what horrors await in every new chapter. It's actually very helpful when I'm thinking about my own story ideas and where I would want to go with them. 

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3 hours ago, ploder4 said:

It's almost as I predicted.  The giants pretty much treat Trev as pretty much non-existent.  Trev did good by not turning into a cry baby, he's handling it pretty well all things considered.  As much as I want Trev to grow, I think it's pretty obvious to the reason why he's shrinking (he hasn't finished puberty).  This is permanently going to effect Trev since he is probably under the guise that he's past puberty too. 

It's good that Seth keeps an eye on Trev, but if Stacy comes back around, he's pretty much out the door.  Allthough, if I read it correctly, even Stacy is having trouble with Seth's cock. 

 

more to come later...

Brooke was not as much of a douche as Jack was.  They both seem to genuinely not have ill will to Trev but then again, he wasn't really there through most of the conversation.  There was no "be quiet adults are talking" moment which seemed natural given the way Trev seems to be shrinking out of sight of everyone.   It looks like Elongro has taken off everywhere, so Trev will end up in a small club of small people on campus.  Everyone else will become 7 ft tall muscle giants.  Even nerds will be bigger and stronger than Trev. 

So it was said that there were no dramatic negative side effects for those past puberty.  Have they found out anything regarding those that were before puberty?  Is the condition permanent or maybe Trev will have the opportunity to grow back when puberty ends for him?  Does he end up looking like one of those people with Progeria?  Or... Is Elongro de-pubertizing him?   Is Trev going to die from these negative side effects?  Will the giants stick with him until then?

I could see a situation where Trev ends up disappearing off the face of the Earth and becoming an Elongro lab rat.  Or...  Elongro pays compensation to Trev, and he ends up giving the money to Seth because Seth is the alpha and Trev becomes owned by him (consentually of course).  Seth can focus on growing bigger (also funded by Elongro) and Trev is watched and cared for as he worships Seth on demand. 

It would be interesting if Stacy ends up with Seth and Trev in a cuckolding threesome relationship.  Stacy gets off on Seth dominating Trev and then dominating her then she's dominating Trev.  I think Elongro also gives the people who benefit from it a confidence and calmness enhancement.  All the giants become nice people even though they're douchebags.  lol

It will be a future of giants and smalls.  Giants rule the world while the smalls end up in service to them. 

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Read this three times now, and I guess for the very first time my feelings toward these characters are different.  Gonna be hard to write and I hope this makes sense.

1) The basketball game.  You just KNEW that Brooke and Jack would be there.  I know Seth said he didn't know they would be there, but you just did.  And you know what - I think this scene is the most humiliation that Trev has ever been through.  That humiliation - that he is not even there.  To be ignored.  Brooke ignored him (for the most part. My feelings for her have changed), Jack did except for being a douche (as Seth said), and even Seth completely ignored him while he was around the other giants.  It felt so rude.  Kind of the exact opposite of the breakup when Brooke said she had wanted Trev to participate and he would not.  Now he tried - and they just treated him like some sort of child or not even there.  (I can't help but reflect on that line - "I forgot you were there.)  They just have nothing in common anymore.  Nothing at all.

Reading that was HARD.   It makes me afraid that Seth will also forget Trev once he is back with the giants all the time.  This was disturbing.  But at the same time, there was no malace.  Even Trev said that, through his depression.  The best way I can put it is that there is a new morality with them.  They are not "exactly human" anymore.  They regard each other as equals, but not the "normal" or the "little" people.  What looks so rude, what looks like rubbing salt into wounds (The lines from Brooke about sex with Jack etc and how big he is, and especially "little buddy" like she didnt even know who he was or was just a child), they make it because Trev just isnt there to them and to her.  

I still believe that she was not being truthful totally in the break up.  I still believe she was cheating.  I still believe part of what happened was she wanted to be with the bigger, better man.  But, Trev also drove her away.

Trev- I am proud of him.  This time, HE TRIED.  He tried so damned hard.  He tried to be a part of it, his old friends, the ones who owe what they are to him in a small way, but who have passed him by.  HE TRIED.  Do i want him to take that second dose? No.  Not in this mental state. Not in jealousy.  Not if he hasnt finished puberty.  And taking partial doses of anything is just dangerous.

2) The muscle measuring and worship session.  Seth is ... well... Seth.  He gets off on the attention, the worship, and the comparison between his old friend and him.  But i a PROUD of Trev for being more open.  For not hiding his attraction so much.  That they both enjoyed it.  Now, Seth seems to almost be megalomanical at some points in his fantasy.  But, it was very hot.  My only beef - I JUST WISH TREV WAS FULL OPEN AND HONEST.  He made some steps, some BIG steps in this don't get me wrong.  He SAID IT.  HE let himself feel it and Seth let him explore.  And Seth seemed to enjoy it too.  But please Trev,  just get it ALLout in the open.  Tell Seth everything straight out, and I hope that Seth would listen not in his superior fratboy celebration way of the worship session, but as he did in Ch 7.  And truly appreciate what Trev would do, how hard the admissions would be.  That would settle so much.  But... taking that second dose in this state is wrong.  (The comments about homosexuality also bother me.  What happens when Trev comes out, at least for what he is.  How will Seth take it?)

I truly have one fear - that Seth too will leave Trev behind.  Just by his now superior nature he has to some degree.  I hope and pray that he doesnt leave him behind the way Brooke has.  That sort of ending - where Trev has truly been abandoned - would be the worst downer I could possibly imagine. 

I don't hate the giants anymore.  It is like they have become a law unto themselves.  I can understand it.  I don't like it.  But I get it.  And the little people are left behind.  And - maybe for Trev it would be for the best.  He was healthier when he was without them.  I am so torn.  I want him to be with all the giants in a good relationship.  But, I do not know if that can ever be now.... And I will not venture a guess as to where this goes except that I don't think Trev will be wildlly harmed (I hope).  I just hope he is able to get back what he lost.  He doesn't have to be the big man on campus in body.  He can be in heart and build his body the best he can with what he has and build his mind but ... Sorry for blathering on.

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This just goes to show how great a writer Dredlifter is.  My heart literally thumps faster as I read in anticipation of what is next.  So kudos big man.  Thanks for writing such an engaging story.  On to Ch. 10  - Another month or two goes by, more growth, and I hope against hope Trev will be OK.  It feels like he is about to do something very stupid.  I hope the giants can be there for him maybe.  One last time.

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It's nice to see that Seth is trying to have Trevor's back and the end portion really paints why he may no be taking much notice to Trevor's feelings of inferiority and it seems it's because he loves seeing someone who he admired so much admire him back and look at him the way he looked at Trev. It does make my wonder exactly what he thinks of Trevor now. Trev being someone who he admired and once thought of as big but to now be double or more his size must have change on his perspective. I don't think he'll turn him back on Trevor intentionally and he will try to be there for him as much as he can since Trevor was there for him when the roles were reversed. That doesn't I don't think he may end up leaving Trevor behind but I feel now it will be more on Trevor's part then his. I also feel like seth does want to see Trevor start to grow but more them anything have Trevor enjoy his growth and be excited for him. Which makes sense you want your friend to be happy that your happy and join you as you explore yourself.

It is sad how the others just comeplety overlooked Trevor but that is understandable due to their size. I also feel bad for Trevor that Brooke has completely moved on from him and though her words stug it's nice that it was addressed that they weren't said out of spite but merely because she doesn't see it as that big of a deal which really does help show she has moved on.

I am getting annoyed with the over use of "little buddy". It's mostly fine when Seth says it in dialogue but coming from the others especially when Brooke said how it was nice of Seth to bring is little buddy to the game. It puts Tevor on the same level as a child which they may very well view him as but it's insulting non the less. I also find the use of to in the narrative itself to be unnecessary.

I'm liking where at the end Trevor and Seth start exploring what their relationship with one another might be and how it seems that Trevor is started to be more okay with the fact that Seth is just huge. I definitely think by exploring Seth's body and speaking his mind on it has helped him in some way but we can see that he is still focusing on his friends growth vs his lack of growth.

Which leads me to my last comment. I worry for Trevor, I hope that this half does does give him the boost he needs but idk. If he ends up shrinking I'm the end I'd feel bad for him but I hope that Seth is right by his side to a friend. If Trev does end up shriking I can see Jack taking the opportunity to humiliate Trevor and Seth stepping in to put Jack in his place and shows Trevor that no matter how much of a size difference there is between them Seth will always be there for him.

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11 minutes ago, DelaCrest said:

It's nice to see that Seth is trying to have Trevor's back and the end portion really paints why he may no be taking much notice to Trevor's feelings of inferiority and it seems it's because he loves seeing someone who he admired so much admire him back and look at him the way he looked at Trev. It does make my wonder exactly what he thinks of Trevor now. Trev being someone who he admired and once thought of as big but to now be double or more his size must have change on his perspective. I don't think he'll turn him back on Trevor intentionally and he will try to be there for him as much as he can since Trevor was there for him when the roles were reversed. That doesn't I don't think he may end up leaving Trevor behind but I feel now it will be more on Trevor's part then his. I also feel like seth does want to see Trevor start to grow but more them anything have Trevor enjoy his growth and be excited for him. Which makes sense you want your friend to be happy that your happy and join you as you explore yourself.

It is sad how the others just comeplety overlooked Trevor but that is understandable due to their size. I also feel bad for Trevor that Brooke has completely moved on from him and though her words stug it's nice that it was addressed that they weren't said out of spite but merely because she doesn't see it as that big of a deal which really does help show she has moved on.

I am getting annoyed with the over use of "little buddy". It's mostly fine when Seth says it in dialogue but coming from the others especially when Brooke said how it was nice of Seth to bring is little buddy to the game. It puts Tevor on the same level as a child which they may very well view him as but it's insulting non the less. I also find the use of to in the narrative itself to be unnecessary.

I'm liking where at the end Trevor and Seth start exploring what their relationship with one another might be and how it seems that Trevor is started to be more okay with the fact that Seth is just huge. I definitely think by exploring Seth's body and speaking his mind on it has helped him in some way but we can see that he is still focusing on his friends growth vs his lack of growth.

Which leads me to my last comment. I worry for Trevor, I hope that this half does does give him the boost he needs but idk. If he ends up shrinking I'm the end I'd feel bad for him but I hope that Seth is right by his side to a friend. If Trev does end up shriking I can see Jack taking the opportunity to humiliate Trevor and Seth stepping in to out Jack in his place and shows Trevor that no matter how much of a size difference there is between them Seth will always be there for him.

I agree pretty much completely.  Here.  Even with the use of "little buddy" like that.

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