The Test

[Guest]

Okay...this is my first story in years.  Many...many years!  But...I promised myself I would start writing again, and this is a story I've been working on over Christmas.  I'm not sure if there is a Part Two or not.  Let me know what you think...but be kind!  Like I said... this is my first story in many years!!!

 

The Test

Chad hopped out of his jeep and ran up the twelve steps to Jacobs building.  The lab was on the fourth floor, and no sooner had he entered the main doors, he was running up the stairs, taking them two at a time.  Seconds later, he was bursting through the door.

• ⁃ Where were you?  This is the third time this week you stood me up.
• ⁃ I left you a message on your phone.  I said I was too busy with work to go.
• ⁃ Too busy to keep the gains you’ve worked on for the past 8 months?  It was leg day...and we both know you can’t afford to miss leg day!

Chad looked down at his friend and grinned broadly.  They had been working out together for nearly a year now, ever since Jacob had joined the gym where Chad was a personal trainer.  The relationship had been strained at first.  Jacob was naturally shy and insecure in the gym, but once they discovered a common trait: their love for hot men, their friendship flourished.  Since then, they worked out together, hung out together, cried a couple of times on each other’s shoulders, and passed from simple gym pals to best friends.  Oddly enough, there was never any sexual chemistry between the two, and Chad felt it was best this way.  He didn’t have the best track record with men, breaking several hearts in the time he knew Jacob, and sleeping with many many more.  He didn’t even think Jacob knew what a complete man-whore he actually was.  He never told his friend about his countless sexual escapades, not because he feared Jacob would think less of him, but more because he never really acknowledged what he was...a man who loved sex very, very, very, VERY, much!!

Jacob looked up at his friend wearing the craziest pair of glasses/magnifying apparatus Chad had ever seen.  

• ⁃ I’m really in the middle of something.
• ⁃ I can see that.  What is that thing, an emerald?

Jacob looked down at the large stone he was holding in his hand, exhaled a sizeable sigh of frustration, and took the optivisor off his head.

• ⁃ No.  It’s not an emerald.  We have no clue what it really is.  It wasn’t even green this morning?
• ⁃ What?  Really?

Chad sat his large frame in the chair nearest his friend.

• ⁃ How’s it changing colours?
• ⁃ I have no idea.  So far since it was excavated three weeks ago, it’s been orange, red, purple, yellow, and pink.  No rhyme or reason for the colour change.  It just happens.  Usually over night.
• ⁃ Where was it found?
• ⁃ A few miles outside Athens.  Some colleges of mine are on a dig, excavating what appears to be an ancient agoge.
• ⁃ A what?
• ⁃ An agoge...a vigorous training academy for the military.
• ⁃ Was the stone captured in a raid?
• ⁃ There was nothing with it except this piece of parchment.  Since I’m a gemologist, they sent it over to me to examine.  They had to sneek it out of the country by Fed Ex, shoved and sealed in a can of coffee grinds.
• ⁃ Why?
• ⁃ They have some idea what it might be after taking a look at this parchment that they found near it.  But since they can’t leave the dig for another four weeks without arousing suspicion, they sent it to me to keep safe.
• ⁃ Trusting friends.
• ⁃ It’s actually my ex, Elliott.  He knew I wouldn’t say no, and I like a good puzzle.
• ⁃ What do they think it is?

Jacob reached over and pressed the space bar of his laptop.  The screen came to life, and with a few clicks of his mouth, found the document he was searching for.

• ⁃ Here’s a copy of the parchment.  From what I can translate...this figure is some sort of cosmic king.
• ⁃ Zeus?
• ⁃ No.  It almost appears as if he’s beyond even Zeus.
• ⁃ An alien?
• ⁃ Maybe.  I don’t know.  Whatever it is, he’s asking this warrior a riddle. When the warrior gets the riddle right, a beam of light shoots from the gem into the warrior, transforming him into what looks like a magnified version of himself....the perfect soldier.
• ⁃ Damn.
• ⁃ Yeah. 
• ⁃ I guess you need the alien king to make it work.
• ⁃ Maybe.  I’ve tried sending light through it.  Here...look...

Jacob got up from his desk and moved to the center of the room where an apparatus was placed.

• ⁃ I’ve put the gem stone here, and sent light through it from here into several rats and mice, but nothing.  No change.  Nothing.  I’ve tried every wave length you can think of, several different power sources, and even natural sun and moonlight, but nothing.  I’m at a loss.  I tried the light from a laser this afternoon, but the rat just sat there happy as could be.  It must need a mediator of some kind to make it work, but I’m not sure what.  So...you can see why I’ve missed the gym the past couple of days.
• ⁃ Yeah.  Why work out when you can build your own warrior rats here.

Chad got up and moved to near where Jacob was standing.

• ⁃ Why didn’t I go to college instead of joining the Marines?  I could be working on interesting shit like this instead of waiting for lazy PhD no-shows.
• ⁃ I said I was sorry,
• ⁃ Did you?
• ⁃ I think I did...and besides I’m doing this on the sly.  My boss has been driving me crazy, having me put together a presentation for him that he has to present at a conference.  What time is it?  I have to bring it to him at his house by six. 

Jacob and Chad both looked at the clock across the room. 

• ⁃ Good.  Only 3:40.
• ⁃ Buddy, that clocks wrong.  After you, I had Mrs. Walsh, and I got done with her at 6.  It had to be at least 6:30 by now.
• ⁃ What?  It can’t be!

Chad looked down at his watch and showed it to Jacob.  

• ⁃ 6:45 actually.
• ⁃ No!  No...no...no!  Fuck!!  It can’t be!!  Fuck!!!

Jacob ran over and grabbed a Zip drive from his desk.  

• ⁃ He’s going to kill me.  I’ll never make it over there in time.  I  only have my bike with me...  Fuck!!!
• ⁃ Take my Jeep.
• ⁃ What?
• ⁃ Here take my Jeep .  How far away does he live?
• ⁃ About 20 minutes by bike...
• ⁃ So you’ll get there in no time with my Jeep.  I’ll stay here and when you get back we can go for a drink.
• ⁃ Oh my God.  Thank you so much.
• ⁃ No problem.  I have a spot right outside.  Just calm down and be careful.
• ⁃ I will.  I promise.  I’ll be right back,

Grabbing Chad’s keys, Jacob tore out the door leaving Chad alone in the now empty lab.  He could never be holed up in a room like this, examining stones and rats.  He was too much of a physical person.  He needed to be out and about either working out, or jogging, or any other of his physical hobbies.  He never had any interest in scholarly pursuits.  To him the stone was just a stone...even if it did apparently change colours and come with a pretty cool backstory.  Chad picked up the stone and looked at the computer screen one more time.

• ⁃ So...the light goes through the stone and into the rat...

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Jacob parked the Jeep, turned it off, and got out slower then he wanted to.  After that ordeal at Professor Lease’s house, he was both physically and mentally exhausted.  He had to simply stand there as the older man berated him over punctuality, responsibility, and the qualities it took to be an adjunct professor in his department.  Jacob has nearly cried as Lease went on and on and on.  He would have continued even longer if his Uber hadn’t arrived to take him to the airport.  The final insult to injury cane as Professor Lease passed Chad’s Jeep and said: 

• ⁃ This is yours?
• ⁃ No.  I borrowed it from a friend.
• ⁃ I didn’t think someone like you would drive something like this.  Shape-up, Mr. Harrow.

With that, he slammed the door to the Uber, and was whisked away.  Jacob waved to the car as it quickly faded into the distance wishing he had the balls to give him the finger instead of this ridiculous display of false affection.

Now as he opened the glass door to the building that housed his office/lab, he decided that he would take the lift up to the fourth floor instead of climbing each of the stairs.  Nearly thinking about the climb in his current mood filled him with dread.  It was while thinking these thoughts that he suddenly realized the foyer to his building was in complete darkness.

Moving to the wall that held the light switch, he blindly felt his hand around until he found it.

Click.  Click.

Nothing.  There must be an outage somewhere, he thought, and gazing outside, realized it was only his and a couple of other buildings in the area that were bathed in complete darkness.   

Carefully taking each step that laid ahead of him, Jacob began the journey to the fourth floor.  Chad must be sitting upstairs in the dark since he wasn’t outside to greet him, Jacob thought as he reached the second floor.  Jacob smiles as he thought of his friend doing push-ups or sit-ups to keep himself busy as he waited in the dark.  He wished he had his friends energy and drive when it came to fitness...but it wasn’t anything that ever really interested him.  He never would have even joined the gym if it hadn’t been for the offer to have 300.00 pounds taken off of his private insurance with proof that he was living a healthy life.  He would have quit a week after joining if it hadn’t been for being paired up with Chad for an offer of four free sessions with a personal trainer.  Chad’s sexiness kept him returning for the four sessions, and just the thought of being able to hang out with someone like him had Jacob signing up for three sessions a week.  Now that they were friends Chad told him he would train him for free, but Jacob refused.  He knew that his friend needed the money, so He made up the excuse of not getting Chad in trouble with his Boss at the gym for continuing the payments.  It wasn’t a lot, but Jacob was glad to be able to help his friend out.

As he climbed the final flight of stairs that would take him to his office, Jacob saw flashes of light as well as what sounded like sexual moans coming from under his door.  As he got closer, Jacob could hear his friend clearly as Chad let out a loud

• ⁃ FUCK!!! 

Jacob laughed quietly.  Chad must have gotten bored waiting for him in the dark and decided to rub one out while watching porn on his phone, which would account for the flashing light.  He thought he would wait outside until Chad finished up when he heard Chad calling out to him, moaning as he spoke:

• ⁃ Jacob!  Fuck!!  Come in!
• ⁃ I think you’re doing just fine on your own.  You don’t need me.
• ⁃ Get in here!!  Man!!  I have a surprise for you!  Fuck yeah!!

Slight embarrassed thinking about what he was about to see, Jacob opened the door.  What he actually saw far exceeded his imagination of what Chad has been up to.

The laser was powered on, and the beam was first going through a magnifying glass that had somehow been rigged onto the apparatus, then through the stone which was rapidly changing every colour known to man.  The beam continued through the stone, emerging as a multi coloured arrow of light hitting Chad squarely in the chest.  Chad was shirtless, and the sweat that was pouring down his chest was highlighted in the every changing array of colours.

• ⁃ You made it just in time.
• ⁃ What the fuck are you doing, mate!!  You’re crazy.

Jacob ran over to the switch that powered the beam with every intention of turning it off.

• ⁃ Don’t!!

As Jacobs hand reached for the switch, an arch of electronic energy erupted from the panel, shocking him into submission.

• ⁃ He won’t let you stop it.  Not now.

Chad’s moaning continued, and his breathing became more rapid.  Jacob could see he was aroused from the obvious tenting of his shorts.

• ⁃ If you felt like I did, you’d never want this to stop either.  I feel like I’m having thousands of orgasms all at the same time, and they keep getting more and more powerful... I can hardly stand it.
• ⁃ Who’s this ‘he’ that you mentioned?
• ⁃ I don’t know.  He’s just a voice I can hear in my head.  He told me how to wire up your laser and draw all of the power from the building.  He said you were so close... you just needed a push.
• ⁃ You shouldn’t have tested it on yourself.  We have no clue what it will do to you.
• ⁃ I still don’t.  All I know is as each second passes, it’s filling me up more and more with power.  

Jacob leaned against the desk and watched his friend experiencing what seemed like pain and ecstasy at the same time.

• ⁃ I just wanted to help.  I got the idea for the magnifying glass from what you said about it transforming the soldier into a magnified version of himself.  Maybe the light just needed to be magnified.  So, I rigged that magnifying glass there, set the rat on the table, and turned it on.  Nothing.  I then thought...maybe you didn’t need a rat...maybe you needed a guinnea pig.  A human one.  So I moved the rat and put myself there.  At first Nothing happened, and then I heard a whisper in the back of my head, almost like a thought to take my shirt off...so I did.  Once it was hitting my flesh, I could hear the whispering better.  He told me you were being too careful...the rat would never work because it had no real cognizant thoughts.  Then he said the power was too low.  He had me turn it up and then step into the beam.  The voice was getting louder...and he said that it still wasn’t strong enough, so he told me how to rewire the entire console, draining energy from this building and three more that surrounded it.  He also had me put that failsafe around the switch because he knew if you came back you would be worried and shut it…Awww!  Fuck…Jacob!!!  Nearly there!!!  I’m nearly entirely filled up.  Jacob!!!  I’m so filled with power I feel like I’m going to explode!  I can’t even explain how this feels.
• ⁃ What’s going to happen next?  What happens when you get entirely filled up.
• ⁃ I don’t know!  All I know is…

Chad stopped talked and appeared to be listening to someone speak.

• - You were wrong, Jacob.  It’s not a riddle.  It’s a test.
• - A test?  What do you mean?
• - He wants to know what I really am.  Deep down…what do I really believe I am?
• - You’re a human…like me…
• - He knows that!  Deep down…what am I?
• - Chad…please…stop this now…while you can.
• - I can’t, Jacob.  Not now…and I don’t think I want to.  What am I deep down?  We both know…don’t we?  We both know what I am.

Jacob realized Chad was no longer speaking to him, but to the voice only he could hear.

• - Exactly.  I’m a sexual animal.  That’s what I am.  I’ve always known that.  We both know that.

Silence again for a few moments…and then Chad started speaking again.

• - What do I wish to become?  What will I be?  A sexual beast…a sexual conqueror… a sexual warrior?

Jacob leaned forward as he saw Chad smile and then laugh.

• - Exactly.  Why stop there.  You’re right.  That is exactly what I need to be.  A God.  A sexual God.

Suddenly the room went silent.  The beam from the laser shut off, and the only thing that eliminated the room was a glow from the stone…now completely clear.

• - It’s happening, Jacob.  I can feel it.  I’m changing!  Oh, Fuck!  My cock!  Look at my cock!

Jacob watched as the bulge in his shorts started to get bigger and bigger, looking as if someone was inflating a large balloon with air.  Chad threw his head back and started moaning loudly again. 

• - I can feel my whole body changing, Jake.  What am I becoming?

Jacob watched as Chad’s bulge proceeded to get bigger and bigger until he finally heard his underwear rip, and his cock flopped out the leg hole of his shorts.  Fuck, Jacob thought, his cock is nearly down to his knee and it’s still growing.  The shaft continued to grow longer and thicker, the head growing larger and meatier.

• - Fuck yeah, Jake!  Fuckin take a look at me!!!

Jacob couldn’t help looking at Chad as his penis continued to stretch and swell.  Within a few minutes the massive shaft was nearing the floor.  It was thicker than Chad’s own muscular arms, and just as veiny.  The head was nearly as thick as two of Jacob’s fist together, and had a gaping hole he easily could have stuck several fingers into.

• - I’m getting so horny, Jake.  I don’t think I’ve ever been this horny.

Chad’s cock began to get thicker and longer as it got harder, defying gravity and rising up off of the floor.  Soon there was a war between Chad’s penis and his shorts, and to no ones surprise, the penis won, first tearing the leg of his shorts, and then quickly destroying the rest of the material.  

Chad stood there naked, his eyes wild and filled with lust, his hands moving toward the shaft of his newly grown penis.  Even with his long arms he couldn’t touch the head of it, and both hands were not enough to encircle the girth.  Chad looked at Jacob and grinned.  

• - Can’t wait to fuck with this thing!!
• - I’m not sure anyone will be able to take you with it.
• - Oh yeah?  Take a look!

As if Chad was willing it of his own accord, a river of pre began to flow from the hole at the end of his massive cock.  It was like someone had turned a faucet on and walked away from the tap.  Jacob looked at Chad, and watched him close his eyes.

• - Take another look.

Jacob looked back down at Chad’s cock, and watched as pre suddenly began to flow from tiny pores all over his cock.  Soon, the entire shaft was slick and dripping with pre.

• - Apparently I’m self lubricating now.

Chad’s hearty laugh suddenly deepened three octaves as his hands cuped the testicles that sat in his sack.  They were quickly enlarging to match his penis.  Chad felt around his sack, cupping the two orange sized balls with a smirk that suddenly turned into a grimace of pain.  Jacob looked down to where Chad’s hands had quickly gone to, and discovered there appeared to be a third testicle emerging.  

• - What the fuck’s happening to me?

Chad’s voice was so low now it was more like a grumble.  Jacob could see a fourth testicle suddenly form in his ball sack, and begin to swell.  Chad’s sack grew larger as the four testicles grew to the size of extremely large grapefruits.  This sudden rush of god like testosterone hit Chad all at once, and hair began to sprout all over his body.  Jet black hair began to take root around his lips and on his chin forming the manliest of beards.  His bare chest was next as hair began to thickly coat his pecs.  Like water flowing down a mountain, his abs, then crotch, and finally legs were covered in silky black hair.  Chad’s hands felt his face and chest, marveling at the sudden carpet of hair that had grown there.  Soon after, his muscular arms began to be covered as well, leading to his arm pit which grew a dense outcrop of hair.

• - What do you think, Jake?  I always wanted to be a little hairier.

The exploration of his new hairy body was cut short by a sudden jolt of pain.  Jacob moved toward Chad, but his arm flew out and stopped him.

• - It’s okay, buddy.  Don’t worry.  I think I’m growing.

Jacob watched on with concern as Chad’s body began to jerk and then convulse wildly.  He feared Chad was having some sort of a seizure, but realized it was simply every muscle in his body pulsing with new found power.  Jacob surveyed Chad’s chest where it seemed to be hitting with the most force.  His already muscular pecs were pumping larger and larger as if it was ten years of solid chest workouts in one minute.  

• - Look at these chesticles!  I can barely see over them!

Chad had barely uttered these words when his pecs flourished even larger blocking any view he would have of his lower body.  Chad looked preposterous with these now 100 pound each pecs plastered to his body, but that appearance was to be short lived.  Chad’s neck began to grow outward, thickening like a redwood.  His shoulders erupted upward, becoming grander and more rounded.  

Jacob heard the cracking of bones and noticed both of Chad’s arms were lengthening as his biceps and triceps expanded and enlarged.  Soon Chad’s hands scraped the floor, as his forearms thickened to the size of Jacob’s own thigh.  Each finger lengthened and expanded, and the palm of his hand became as large as a manhole cover.  Chad lifted his hands off of the ground and examined them.

• - I think I might have some trouble finding gloves to fit these mits!

Chad flexed both of his long arms with a grin.  His bi’s and tri’s erupted in size, becoming larger than Jacob’s head and still continued to swell. Chad dropped his arms, his huge hands slapping the floor.  They didn’t rest on the floor for long as Chad’s lats began to expand like the rest of him.  His back was growing wider and wider, and soon his arms didn’t rest against his side anymore, but were forced away from him.

A rumble of laughter erupted from Chad.  His cock had started leaking pre again, and his hands had begun to stroke the mighty shaft.  Even with his massive hands, Chad still couldn’t complete grip his cock, and needed to use both to completely encircle it.  One hand left his cock and moved to his pecs where he began to play with his nipples.  Along with his chest, each nipple had grown and now were the length and thickness of Jacob’s own thumbs.  His pecs had gotten so large that the nipples were forced downward, and the cleft between them could completely hide Jacobs foot.  

From his pecs, Chad’s hands went down to his abs which were beginning to grow along with the rest of them.  Chad had an incredible 6 pack before, but now each abdominal muscle swelled to resemble thick body armor.  The hair that had grown on his chest did nothing to hide the incredible wall of muscle that was emerging on his stomach.

The sound of bones breaking and reassembling themselves began again, and Jacob watched as Chad’s legs began to grow longer.  Where the man had once been at least 6 feet tall, his height skyrocketed to seven feet and then closer to eight.  In moments, Chad’s head had hit the ceiling, bringing plaster down onto his body.  Not to be left out, Chad’s feet ripped from his sneakers, and soon began to cover three of the 12 inch floor tiles, and then proceeded to eclipse a fourth.

Chad screamed out in pain and reached for his ball sack.

• - Fuck!!!  I’m growing another set again!

The growth of the third set of testicles brought a further wave of testosterone through Chad, causing his body hair to become even denser, and swelling his quads and calves until his legs were thicker than redwood trees.  Chad had to adjust his stance several times as his thighs grew more and more massive.

A further cry of pain brought his hands back to his balls.

• - What now??!!

To Jacob’s eyes, it appeared like the six large balls were moving around on their own inside Chad’s ball sack.   

• - They’re merging!

Jacob watched in awe as the six large testicles merged into two of the largest balls he had ever seen.  They didn’t appear out of place on Chad’s massive body, but next to a mere human, they would be as large as ostrich eggs.

Chad’s massive hands flew suddenly to his head as he cried out again.  Slowly, Chad’s head and face were expanding, getting large to fit in proportion to his body.  His mandible cracked as his jawline squared off, somewhat hidden by Chad’s new beard, but still obvious.  

• - This is it pal!  This is it!!

Every part of Chad’s body grew even larger than it had been before, gaining hundred more pounds in muscle and size in minutes.  With his bearlike paws, Chad grabbed his cock and began to frantically jerk it off.  The second round of growth continued faster as Chad fell to his knees as to not go through the ceiling.  Even on his knees, Chad was taller than Jacob.  Pre was flying everywhere as Chad proceeded to masturbate with fervor.  He’s going to explode, Jacob though, watching his friend getting far larger than anything he could imagine.  Suddenly, Chad stopped all action.  Jacob wondered what was next, and realized Chad’s focus was now on his cock.  Longer and thicker it swelled, finger sized veins criss-crossing the length of it.  The head swelled even larger still, and with the power of his giant testicles, Chad began to ejaculate.  Cum erupted from Chad’s penis, hitting every object in the room, including Jacob.  Shot after shot were fired, until it seemed there was no end in sight.  Chad grabbed hold of his cock again with one hand trying to control where it was firing, but only succeeding in exciting himself more.  Sweat ran down Chad’s face as an eroma of male musk emerged from his body.  Jacob came in his trousers simply from seeing and smelling his friend.  Chad lifted his arm and smelled his own armpit.  Smiling at Jacob, he proceeded to squeeze his massive right nipple, and let out the lowest moan of ecstacy Jacob had ever heard.  Seven more shots of cum erupted from Chad’s penis, and then there was silence; cum dripping quietly from the massive hole.

• - It’s done, Jake.  
• - You’re massive.
• - How big do you think I am?
• - I don’t know.  Probably close to 9 feet tall and thousands of pounds.  Your damn head is as big as my chest… both heads… and even after cumming for nearly 10 minutes your cock is still hard.
• - I’m still horny.  I don’t think I’ll ever not be horny again. 

Jacob laughed.

• - I can’t wait till the world gets a look at you.
• - What do you think of me?
• - You’re incredible.  So far beyond human.
• - I ceased being human about twenty minutes ago.  He gave me a choice for my shape…and for a moment I thought of becoming a two-hundred foot dragon.  What do you think?

Chad closed his eyes, and through only his will, two large amphibious wings ripped from his back.  They were as wide and masculine as he was.  Chad breathed, and fire erupted from his mouth.  His eyes became those of a snake, and a moment later, fire erupted from the head of Chad’s penis, proving to Jacob that he was indeed more God than man.

• - You’re magnificent now, but I’m more at ease with how you were before…
• - I could destroy you with a mere thought if I wanted to…reduce you to dust with a single wish.  

Jacob knew every word Chad was saying was true.  But, when Chad smiled down at him, he knew he had nothing to worry about.  Chad’s wings folded into his back again, and his eyes reverted to their customary look.

• - He wants to know when you’ll join us.  He wants you to take your place among the God’s.
• - He still talks to you?
• - No.  He’s silent.  He’s waiting for you.
• - I don’t know… this might all be too much for me.  I don’t know what kind of God I’d be.
• - Deep down you know what you are… just like I knew what I am.

Jacob did know what he was, but he was afraid to admit it.  Afraid of what he would become.

• - But first… I need to thank you.

Chad blew, and every stitch of Jacobs clothes disappeared.  Chad grinned, and opened his mouth, revealing his tongue.  As Jacob watched, his tongue lengthened and proceeded to move snakelike down his body until it wrapped itself around Jacob’s cock and balls.  Before he knew it, Chad’s tongue was slowly jerking him off.  The tip of his tongue licked his cock head, and teased the opening.  Just when he thought he couldn’t take amymore, Chad effortlessly lifted him off of the floor until they were eye to eye.  Chad grinned a wicked grin, and his tongue proceeded to lengthen again, making its way toward Jacob’s asshole.  Within moments, he was being both jerked off and rimmed by the God that held him.  Chad’s tongue entered Jacobs hold, sending shockwaves through him.

What will I become…Jacob wondered as his friends huge tongue proceeded to enter him further and further, thickening as it went, and proceeded to start fucking him.  What will I become?  He knew it was far from human… even further than his friend had come, and that scared and excited him.

 

 

 

 

[Guest]

I love this, this is amazing

 

[Guest]

A little more... out there... than the kind of thing I normally go for, but it definitely had some very hot moments. Thank you!

[Rugbyjock92]

Great story man and well written!

[elysiumfields]

And then there were...two.?

[Guest]

Im glad that you all seem to be enjoying it.  I love reading all of the positive feedback.   I started writing the next part this morning!  I should have it up pretty soon!!  Working out in the gym definitely inspired me!!

[fishlover2]

Can’t wait! Thanks man!