Edrian2012 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 I love so much this story! But I want Noah to stay small and cute like he is now , I don't want to imagine him like a bodybuilder hahahaha Amazing story! Thanks @muscleaddict 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Built22 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 wow looks like the alcohol was loosening up aj too. great work as always ,and aj maybe just maybe starting to make his move!!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
studio77 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 Absolutely awesome. Can’t wait until Aj decides to let out his inner beast and do his most muscular. Its great to have a story based in the uk too. I wish there was a Muscle man like AJ in my local Tesco lol 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinevenson42 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 With this last chapter, pretty sure I almost jumped out of my chair, or yelled out "NO" or "YES," a few times, but you should have seen my reaction when I read: “When did you know that you liked lads?” We're so close, it's insane! 3 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikamik Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 the last chapter......i mean.....i can't even.......i.....KISS HIM........KISS HIM AND BE HAPPY!!!!........sorry, sorry.......i'll calm down 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crushme99 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 What a wonderful and endearing conversation between them. I like how you begin to probe AJ's feelings about bodybuilding, up on stage, being admired by the audience, etc. If you expand on that, Noah just might have a heart attack. One scenario I have been imagining: AJ and Noah are side by side, in the car or maybe at AJ's place. Noah asks AJ what his goals are in bodybuilding. With exaggerated cockiness, AJ says, "To be the biggest, baddest, most ripped and shredded muscle freak ever." But Noah, looking past AJ's exaggeration, asks again, "No, seriously, what's your goal?" AJ, getting more serious, answers, "To be the biggest, strongest guy on stage at nationals." That, of course, gets a major reaction from Noah, who replies, "Exactly, mate! The biggest.... strongest.... and...." -- taking a risk in saying it -- "most rock solid guy on stage." "Rock solid, huh?", AJ responds, "You tell me if I'm getting there." And he raises one arm, flexes his massive bicep as tightly as he can. "Grab on. Tell me if that feels like rock to you?" See the kind of things your excellent writing gets me thinking about? 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzNLA Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 Wow! What a great chapter. So sweet and revealing at the same time. The smiles, the touches show how much they care about each other and how the relationship is developing. I can’t wait for the next chapter. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict99 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 14 hours ago, Built22 said: muscleaddict99 isnt the author nope! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict99 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 12 hours ago, muscleaddict said: I think you mean me, in which case - thank you, matie! Unless you're talking about muscleaddict99's posts and comments, in which case I agree, they're awesome! i'm pretty sure he means you! there's no way i could compete 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict99 Posted September 23, 2018 Share Posted September 23, 2018 i'm falling in love (again!) lol 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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