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9 hours ago, muscleaddict said:

Funnily enough…strength is not actually a big thing for me *but* there is one little moment later on along those lines. The idea just came to me as I was writing a chapter. It's more of a silly/fun thing but you might like it! :D

Oh, man, I would love to see some scenes where AJ shows un-natural superstrength, and he's all cool about it like it's the most normal thing in the world!

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5 hours ago, mario2007 said:

Oh, man, I would love to see some scenes where AJ shows un-natural superstrength, and he's all cool about it like it's the most normal thing in the world!

Nah man, I think that would be irrelevant. Just saying, this story is about romantic relationship that possibly happen in real world.

And I think, it would be better to stay on track. 

Romance, comedy, a lil bit muscle worship and sex, and of course gay story.

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11 hours ago, MuscleWorshipID said:

Nah man, I think that would be irrelevant. Just saying, this story is about romantic relationship that possibly happen in real world.

And I think, it would be better to stay on track. 

Romance, comedy, a lil bit muscle worship and sex, and of course gay story.

You have your fantasy, I have mine.

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On 10/15/2018 at 9:58 AM, Shawn1978 said:

amazing chapter, MuscleAddict! the character development is amazing! Even I'm falling more and more in love with these two guys together, with each new chapter! Your characterization is amazing, and the sexual situations are written very much just as sexual and they are romantic. Almost pornographic in nature in some places. I mean seriously, would we see blowjob action for real, between actors, even on HBO? I highly doubt it. But that still doesn't make the notion any less hot!

I also loved the part when someone came home downstairs. At first, I forgot that they were still in AJ's bedroom, so I kind of got an image of them doing it right there in the hallway, where someone walks in on them, so I thought they were gonna get caught, redhanded! And with the way AJ wanted to keep things going and make Noah cum again, even after someone returned home, makes me think AJ just might be a little bit of an exhibitionist. Maybe? LOL!

It'll also be interesting to see how AJ's mom and Andy handle the truth about AJ's relationship with Noah, should it turn into one, and how they deal with it. Will they be against it or supportive? So many ways that could go!

Also, how will Noah handle things with Eddie? Surely, he wouldn't still be with him, given his true feelings for AJ.  I'm sure AJ and Noah will possibly have obstacles in the road, on their way to becoming a couple, but who hasn't in life? We all have issues, but it's how we deal with those issues that makes us who we are and who we want to become, in the future.

Great job, once again, MuscleAddict! AJ and Noah are already an award winning couple! I can feel it!

Cheers for the awesome feeback as always, matie! Again - it's hard to comment too much on what might happen without giving too much away but I will say that Eddie *does* pop up again! And the scene with AJ's hand over Noah's mouth while his mum was downstairs was particularly fun to write! Not sure if it's AJ being so much of an exhibitionist (though aren't most bodybuilders in a way?!) but more just showing his cheeky/mischevious/adventurous side!

As for awards...maybe we should suggest that to the mods of this board and get the lads up for "Best Couple!" ?

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Next chapter! Just to clarify something for the non-British readers, the word "tea" is often used for dinner/supper in some areas of England.

Twenty Three

“You spunk so much!” AJ exclaimed, as I gripped onto him in post orgasmic bliss. “It’s like a bucket load every time!”

I giggled in response. “Mmmmm!” he said, before kissing me. He cleaned me up with a balled up t-shirt and sneaked off to the bathroom, flashing me a cheeky grin as he left.

I don’t really know what came over me in that moment, but I suddenly felt this overwhelming wave of emotion. It suddenly came to me that I’d never liked anyone as much I liked AJ. What we had, what I felt for him, even just being with him was amazing. More so than I could have ever imagined. I think it all just felt a bit much though, because my eyes were watering and I was sure that I was on the verge of tears. Maybe I was even a little scared?

“You OK?” AJ asked me as he came back to his bedroom.

“Yeah!” I replied, as if nothing was wrong. Because why would it be?

AJ perched on his bed, now in a pair of shorts and a vest, while I was still lying down completely naked. I felt vulnerable, but I kind of liked it. I felt like just fully giving into my emotions, and accepting that both AJ, and my feelings for him had this insane power over me. I was his, to do whatever he wanted with me. I gripped my arms around his waist and lay my head in his lap and he gently ruffled my hair. I could have probably just lay there like that all night.

And then a question came into my head. Was AJ feeling even half of what I was? I couldn’t be sure exactly, but I had a strong intuition that he was. There was something in the way he touched me, looked at me and kissed me.

“Wanna go down and say hello?” he asked, still playing with my hair.

“Mmmmm!” I replied, twisting my head up to look at him.

“I think it’s just my mum. Andy should be hope soon though!” And then his mouth curled into this mischievous, knowing grin and he cheekily raised one eyebrow. I smiled back and playfully rolled my eyes. I had a feeling he wasn’t going to let me forget my confession that I’d had a crush on his mum’s boyfriend in any sort of hurry.

I felt a giddy rush of adrenaline as I followed AJ down the stairs, him flashing me this excitable grin. It was like we were two naughty school boys again up to no good. Stealing bookmarks or making prank phone calls to our teacher. Even though I was on a high from the events of the afternoon, I was still a little nervous to see AJ’s mum again.

“Oh, hello, Noah!” she said, giving me one of her big, warm smiles that filled up half of her face. “What have you boys been up to?”

OH GOD!

AJ shot me a knowing smirk. I’m sure I blushed. “Just hanging out!” he replied.

“Does Noah want to stay for tea?”

I bit my lips and tried not to laugh. It was such an adorable offer though. I kind of loved AJ’s mum.

“Mum!” AJ groaned. “We’re not twelve!”

And I loved how embarrassed AJ got.

Mrs Jones tutted. “You’ll always be my little baby. No matter how big and muscly you get!” And then she looked at me and gave me a mischievous grin. Like she was getting a kick out of embarrassing him and letting me join in the fun.

“KILL ME NOW!” AJ replied. He rolled his eyes but he was still grinning. I was smiling too, while simultaneously being filled with the fuzziest feeling at watching AJ adorably squirm as his mum embarrassed him.

And then I heard the rattling of keys and my heart shot straight into my throat when I heard a deep voice and the front door closing.

“Andy’s home!” AJ said, animatedly. The cheekiest grin on his face. “You remember Andy, don’t you, Noah?”

You little fucking bastard!

I turned around and there he was. My first ever male crush, plus eight years and a couple of extra pounds. OK, his face was rounder and his midsection was bigger, and he was now in his early forties rather than his mid thirties, but the big, bald man in the leather gear in front of me was, undeniably, still rather fucking sexy. And much more so in the flesh than in the picture AJ had shown me on his phone the week before.

Andy nodded and said hello, seemingly unfazed that a mate AJ knew eight years ago was suddenly back in his life. AJ was giving me this sly smirk, clearly enjoying watching me squirm.

As Andy walked out of the room I couldn’t help but get a cheeky look at the thing which used to have a strange, overwhelming effect on the thirteen year old me; his big, meaty arse filling out his tight, creaking leather trousers. Granted, it was a little less pert than it used to be, but it was still very much there, filling out a pair of leather trousers (though presumably ones with a slightly bigger waist size). And it was still a pretty damn fucking horny sight to behold.

AJ was grinning at me like crazy and shaking his head as he closed the bedroom door behind him. “What?!” I asked him.

“You still fancy Andy!” he exclaimed, clearly amused.

I shrugged and cheekily smirked at him. “It’s not my fault your mum has good taste in men!”

AJ let out a short, loud laugh. “That’s just WRONG!” he said, before grabbing my hand and leading me to his bed.

I sat down, and he climbed on top until he was lying flat on top of me. His huge, heavy muscle mass sinking into my body. “Are you trying to flatten me?” I quipped as I gripped on to his back.

“Oh, so now you don’t like the fact that I’m a pumped up bodybuilder?”

Fucking GRRRRR!!

“Cause your dick says something different! Are you ever NOT hard?!” AJ outrageously asked, wriggling his crotch against my now erect cock.

I was feeling brave. “I’ve got a huge, gorgeous bodybuilder lying on top of me. Of course I’m fucking hard!”

AJ giddily grinned at my compliment before going in for a kiss. “So I’m gorgeous?!” he said, his eyebrows twitching up and down.

I rolled my eyes. “Yep!” I said, feeling a little sheepish.

AJ grinned at me more. The most heart melting grin. Cheeky, mischievous and so fucking sexy.

“I think you know you are!” I said.

He playfully shrugged. “Mmmm. I guess I’m kinda hot!” he replied.

I giggled. “Cocky too!” I cheekily said.

“Oh, I’m definitely that! Especially when I’m flexing. Which you didn’t seem so bothered about earlier if I remember rightly!”

I rolled my eyes and giddily grinned at him.

“So …” AJ began, “this thing about you being turned on by bodybuilders ...”

Oh fuck!

“Hmmmm,” I replied, a little nervous, but mostly excited to be discussing my love for huge, flexing muscle freaks.

He bit his lip. “You said you like watching them flex?”

My heart fluttered and I cheekily grinned. “Yeah!”

“So, what would happen if I posed for you?”

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!

My cock juddered like crazy under the weight of AJ’s body. I opened my eyes in excitement, then had a sudden urge to be playful. “Honestly? I’d probably cum in my boxers in twenty seconds flat!” I said, matter-of-factly.

AJ howled. “Fuck!” he said, looking excited. “Does it really turn you on that much?” he asked.

“Yep!” I replied.

He bit his lip and nervously looked at the door. Fuck! Was he thinking of doing it now? “I might have to put on a little show for you then!” he said.

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!

“Maybe when we’ve got the house to ourselves again, though?!” he suggested, pulling a cautious face. I felt a mini wave of disappointment, but couldn’t suppress my excitement at the thought of AJ posing for me. Whenever that might be.

“Then we can be as noisy as we want!” he said, raising his eyebrows.

FUUUUUCK!!

My whole body was buzzing with excitement. “Oh, I like that too, by the way!” I said. “Bodybuilders being noisy when they pose!”

AJ excitedly grinned at me more. “Yeah?” he said.

“Yep! Like … grunting and groaning!” I said, loving every second of sharing this information with AJ. “Huffing and puffing!” I continued.

AJ giggled. “I can do that!” he said.

“Maybe even a few shout and yells as you crank out a most muscular?” I added.

His eyes widened. “Hell yeah!”

There was a pause as we both just gazed at each other smiling. “Mmmmm!” he said, looking at me lovingly. “When did you get so cute?”

My heart fluttered. “So I’m cute?” I said.

AJ chuckled. “You know you are!”

I pulled a face. Not only did I not think of myself as cute but I rarely ever believed it when other people told me I was. Compliments like that always just sort of ricocheted off me. On the other hand, whenever people told me I wasn’t good looking, or cute, or just average, I very much believed what they were saying with conviction.

“Or maybe you don’t!” AJ said. “Which makes you even cuter!”

I gave AJ a coy grin, and then his lips met mine.

“You haven’t cum yet!” I said teasingly as I squeezed his back.

AJ bit his lips and pulled his face. “Hmmmm. Mum and Andy though!” I wrinkled my nose. “You can make it up to me next time,” he said. “After I’ve posed for you!”

A little later on and I was cuddled up to AJ with my head on his chest while we watched an episode of Dom and Cole In The Land of Ug. “You’re really cute with your mum, by the way!” I told him.

He released a playful groan in response. “So … now my mum’s embarrassed me in front of you, does this mean I get to talk to your mum?”

“Ugh! It’s not just that! I know what she’s like. She’ll go on and on about you. She makes such a big deal out of everything. And she’ll jump to all these conclusions. She’ll think you’re this mystery boyfriend she keeps accusing me of having!”

There was suddenly an awkward pause. Maybe it was because I’d said the word boyfriend.

“Why does she think that?” AJ asked. I couldn’t help but notice an ever so slight sense of fear in AJ’s voice. My stomach twisted. Was the idea of him being my boyfriend really that scary? And then I reminded myself that all of this was incredibly new for AJ. I was only the second guy he’d ever been with. Of course the idea of having an actual boyfriend was a scary notion for him.

“Erm … probably because I actually go out of the house!” I replied. “So of course she’s jumped to the conclusion that I’m seeing someone.”

“Well you kind of were seeing someone, to be fair!” AJ said, referring to Eddie. “And you kind of still are!” he added, giving me a squeeze. I looked up at him and he gave me a coy, little grin.

“Yeah, that’s the annoying thing. Her suspicions are usually right!”

AJ giggled. “Do you think you’ll see Eddie again?” My stomach twisted a little. Not if you don’t want me to, I felt like saying.

“Ummm … probably not!” I replied. AJ seemed to be trying to suppress a grin at my answer. “Maybe just as a friend?” I suggested.

AJ raised an eyebrow. “Is that really gonna happen though? I mean, you could tell him you just wanna be friends, but ...  I dunno, that’s not really an easy thing to do when you like someone!”

I looked at him and gave him a knowing grin. “I managed it! Although I did think you were completely off limits!” I added. The side of his mouth curled into a cute little grin.

“I’m just saying …” AJ began, “it’s very hard to be around you and not wanna cuddle the fuck out of you!”

My heart melted. It was one of the cutest things he’d said to me.

My phone vibrated in my pocket and I reached to get it out. It was a text from Naomi.

“Hey. How’s The Cookie Monster?”

I chuckled and showed AJ my phone with the message. He let out a short, sharp laugh in response. “LOVE IT!” he said.

“She’ll be teasing me about that forever!” I told him.

“She won’t be laughing when you’re a shredded monster! GRRRRR!!” I grinned and shook my head.

“She wants to know if I’ve heard from you!” I said after we’d exchanged a few texts.

“Oh, right!” AJ replied. Fuck! There was something serious about the tone of AJ’s voice which made my chest tighten.

“Just, you know … since what happened Saturday!” I explained.

AJ looked a bit wary. Nervous, even. “What does she think happened?”

“Erm … I don’t think she knows about us!”

AJ nodded. I could tell he was trying to act cool, but not doing a very good job of it. Suddenly everything felt weird and serious and awkward.

“Would you rather me not tell her?” I asked. I suddenly felt a bit sick.

“Ummm … maybe just wait a bit?” he suggested. I could tell he was nervous about my reaction. I nodded, completely failing to hide my concern and disappointment.

“Sorry!” AJ said. “This is all just so new to me!” He looked so sincere in that moment. I could tell he was nervous, not just at the idea of someone knowing about us, but for fear of hurting my feelings.

And seeing this, suddenly telling Naomi what was happening between AJ and I didn’t seem to matter. “It’s okay! I get it!” I reassured him.

“Yeah?” he asked, warily. I gripped his waist, bought my face up to his and kissed him gently. “Mmmmm” he said, as my nose rubbed against his and the pang of disappointment that AJ wasn’t ready to tell anyone about us (whatever “us” was) fading and being replaced by an overwhelming feeling of euphoria that me and AJ were even an “us” in the first place.

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So totally awesome chapter mate. I love the interaction between them. Their talks and actions are so on point from beginning to end. I’m totally in love with Noah and AJ.  Keep on the good work and feel free to drop a chapter or two before the weekend end . LoL ???????

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1 hour ago, Justinriv717 said:

NEXT CHAPTER CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!

 

48 minutes ago, BrzNLA said:

So totally awesome chapter mate. I love the interaction between them. Their talks and actions are so on point from beginning to end. I’m totally in love with Noah and AJ.  Keep on the good work and feel free to drop a chapter or two before the weekend end . LoL ???????

Jeeez!! All this enthusiasm and demand for more of my story! Ugh! I hate it more than AJ hates being gawped at when he's waddling round Tesco's and he's bulging out of his tight fitted work uniform! ?

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2 hours ago, muscleaddict said:

 

Jeeez!! All this enthusiasm and demand for more of my story! Ugh! I hate it more than AJ hates being gawped at when he's waddling round Tesco's and he's bulging out of his tight fitted work uniform! ?

Hahahaha! I bet you do Mate!?????

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Love it. Just want to give you a tip, so you can prevent what I often see happening in other stories: don't give the readers what they want too quickly. Now AJ & Noah are 'together', but where is the tension, the secrecy, the mystery ; ) . Be sure that we're big fans and always waiting for the next part, and I can handle a few episodes without. But those qualities in a story are important for readers to keep wanting more, to want to know what happens next, in the long term. If you don't somehow cause conflict or reasons for the previously mentioned qualities to occur, stories can get flat and repetitive. It then loses a sense of purpose, so to say. You've done really well on those qualities so far, so just want to make sure you continue to keep doing that.

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