Kamaswami Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 Great chapter my friend, I love the connection these two young men have. As an aside, I just had to pack up my dog and head out of town because apparently there's a hurricane headed straight for my house. Maybe you could expedite a chapter out of pity for poor old me while I sit in my hotel room, staring longingly into the distance, wistfully thinking of AJ and Noah... All joking aside, this is great work, and I can't wait to read the next installment whenever it arrives. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinevenson42 Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 10 hours ago, muscleaddict said: Who says he does? He might just pop his shorts and hoodie back on and say, "Thanks Noah, mate. That was fun. Maybe see ya round Tesco's or Scorpio's sometime." Imagine, I think everyone's heart on here would collectively shatter. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 10, 2018 Author Share Posted October 10, 2018 7 hours ago, rairf said: I love this story so much. The balance between AJ & Noah is beautiful- the way they care for each other rather than the imbalance of power that we often see in stories featuring bodybuilders (though that can be exceptionally hot as well). Thank you for taking the time to create such a romantic, sweet, funny, sexy story. Awww, thanks @rairf! Some really lovely feedback there! It's awesome to see someone new commenting too. I wonder if there are many people reading and enjoying this but not commenting. I guess it's impossible to say! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 10, 2018 Author Share Posted October 10, 2018 2 hours ago, Kamaswami said: Great chapter my friend, I love the connection these two young men have. As an aside, I just had to pack up my dog and head out of town because apparently there's a hurricane headed straight for my house. Maybe you could expedite a chapter out of pity for poor old me while I sit in my hotel room, staring longingly into the distance, wistfully thinking of AJ and Noah... All joking aside, this is great work, and I can't wait to read the next installment whenever it arrives. Oh wow, mate! I hope you're safe and holding up ok? Well I'd love to say yes but I want to change and add in a few things to the next chapter so it's not quite ready just yet! Stay safe, mate! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawn1978 Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 14 hours ago, Kamaswami said: Great chapter my friend, I love the connection these two young men have. As an aside, I just had to pack up my dog and head out of town because apparently there's a hurricane headed straight for my house. Maybe you could expedite a chapter out of pity for poor old me while I sit in my hotel room, staring longingly into the distance, wistfully thinking of AJ and Noah... All joking aside, this is great work, and I can't wait to read the next installment whenever it arrives. My prayers will be with you, as well as your family and friends, Kamaswami! Having to evacuate because of a Hurricane is never fun, I'm sure. You must be in Florida or near the coast somwhere. I haven't been to Florida since I was 4 years old, when my grandparents took me to Disney Land. Be Safe out there and definitely tune in to a few stories to take you rmind off of things until it passes! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Built22 Posted October 10, 2018 Share Posted October 10, 2018 yea come on muscleaddict get some more chapters posted to help the poor guy and to feed our hunger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rony Posted October 11, 2018 Share Posted October 11, 2018 I check this place for updates more frequently than I check my sign email, please post some more 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post muscleaddict Posted October 13, 2018 Author Popular Post Share Posted October 13, 2018 Twenty One I just wanted to stay lying on AJ’s bed forever. With my head resting on his huge chest, my legs wrapped around his and my arm stretched across his midsection while I gripped his waist and felt his gorgeous bubbles of ab muscle underneath my skin. I looked at the assorted pictures of muscle freaks on AJ’s bedroom wall. Blaine Holton, Chris “Freaky Peaks” Jackson and AJ, himself, shredded and tanned and cranking out an insane crab most muscular pose in his shiny lime green posing trunks. I couldn’t believe that I’d just had sex with that very bodybuilder. That I’d just made him cum. That his arm was now wrapped tightly around me and I was resting my head on those very pecs he was proudly and cheekily showing off on a bodybuilding stage. AJ kissed me gently on the forehead, then just rested his lips against it. Everything felt perfect in that moment. I had no worries, no doubts and no anxieties as to what might happen next. It was just me and AJ, basking in our own private heaven. When I lifted my head up, AJ was smiling down at me with such affection. This ecstatic little grin. I felt like I was his. And it was the most intoxicating feeling. “Hello!” he playfully and cheekily said. “Hey!” I replied. AJ bit his lip, and his mouth curled into an even bigger grin that seemed to fill up half of his face. He squeezed me just a little bit tighter and I gripped his waist tighter in response. My stomach pressed up against his side. My leg on top of his. I wanted to just melt into his skin. I couldn’t believe where I was. What I was doing. Half an hour before I was sitting in AJ’s bathroom having what felt like some sort of a breakdown and wondering whether I was ever going to see him again. Now I was pressed against his naked body, his arm wrapped tightly around me. “What ya thinking?” AJ asked, still grinning, and obviously sensing that something was going through my head. I coyly grinned in response. “Dunno! I just … can’t quite believe this is actually happening!” He gave an adorable little sigh and looked at me with his loving smile. “I know,” he said. Then his eyes opened wide in a comical fashion. “We’re naked!” he exclaimed. I grinned like crazily and he squeezed him tighter still. A million questions were racing through my head. Looking at me the way he was, AJ no longer looked even remotely scared or nervous. I couldn’t imagine a more perfect time to ask him what I wanted. “Can I ask you a question?” I said, still a little wearily. His mouth erupted into this goofy, adorable, knowing grin. It was like he’d expected it. “Hmmmm!” he replied in a teasing tone. “Was that … a new thing for you?” “Mmmm. New-ish!” AJ replied, wincing, but still grinning. He inhaled and exhaled and I felt his chest heave up and down beneath me. “You’re my second guy!” he confessed. It was completely unexpected, but I felt a sharp stab of disappointment at AJ’s confession. I guess somewhere deep down I’d been hoping that I would be his first. “Could you tell?” he then adorably asked, biting his lip. “NO!” I reassured him, even though I had been able to a little. He gave me a cute, knowing little grin in response. I think he knew that I wasn’t being completely honest with him. “Soooo … are you gay?” I asked, a little cautiously. He pulled a face. “Ummm. I don’t think so? I mean, I’ve always liked girls. I still do. I think?” He didn’t look really so sure. And then his expression changed. He didn’t look nervous. Just a little pensive. “I’m guess I’m still trying to work it all out.” I looked at AJ and gave him a reassuring smile. I didn’t care what he was. Gay. Bi. Confused. All that mattered was how he made me feel. How it felt like my insides were exploding every time he was near me. How completely amazing it was to be touching him and looking at him in the way that I was. I leant into his face and kissed him gently. God, I loved kissing him. Even though my mouth was kind of dry. I didn’t care. I would have kissed him a hundred times more over the chance of having my mouth feel normal again. “So … this other guy!” I playfully said, with one eyebrow raised. He bit this lip. “Yeeeah?” he asked teasingly. “You don’t tell have to tell if you don’t want to!” He was smiling back at me playfully. “It was last summer!” he explained. “About a week before a show.” Fuck! It was absurd given what had just happened, but I was instantly jealous. Some lucky fucker had been with AJ while he’d been in shredded competition condition. “And it was at Scorpio’s!” he confessed, with a little, mischievous smirk. My eyes widened in shock. Fuck! Was AJ about to confess that he’d had impromptu sex with another bodybuilder in the changing rooms of the notorious hardcore bodybuilding gym he‘d been taking me to? “No way!” I replied. He gave me a little nod and had a mischievous and excited look on his face. “Where?!” I asked. He pulled an “eeeek” face. “In the showers!” “That was a bit risky!” I exclaimed. AJ did one of his cute, little giggles. “Well it was a Saturday night so the gym was pretty dead! And, well … it wasn’t exactly a planned thing!” he explained. “So what happened?” “Mmmm. Well it was this random guy. I’d never seen him in the gym before!” “Bodybuilder?” I asked, my voice cracking. “No! He was fairly big though!” My stomach twisted a little. Because how could I compete with a guy like that? “He gave me a few looks when I was training but I’m kinda used to that, so I thought nothing of it! Anyway, afterwards I took a shower, and he came in after me and started talking to me. Just about supplements and stuff. And he said I looked good. But I didn’t think anything of it. It was just regular gym talk! So I was telling him about this supplement I was taking that was giving me these crazy pumps and the next thing I knew he was asking me to flex and then he started feeling my bicep. It all just felt really friendly at first. But then, I dunno … the atmosphere sort of changed. And I remember looking down and he had this massive hard on! I didn’t know what the fuck was happening. Then he started touching my other bicep. And then my pecs. And I suddenly started to get hard too. I thought it was maybe just the roids I was on? But, I dunno. I liked him touching me. Really liked it. And the next thing I knew, he was kneeling down, and then he was … sucking me off! I remember putting my hand on his head, feeling his hair, and it just felt right? And afterwards he hugged me. Just for about five seconds. But I remember wanting that hug to last longer. To just kinda stay like that with him for a while.” He looked a little sheepish as he confessed that last part and his cheeks flushed a little. Hearing that just made me want to fucking melt. I squeezed him and dreamily grinned at him and he gave me this adorable, coy, little grin in response. “Did you see him again?” I asked. “Only once!” AJ replied. “A few weeks after it happened he came into the gym. I kinda freaked out and left!” he explained. I couldn’t help detect a slight hint of sadness in AJ’s voice at that particular confession. “Is that really bad?” he asked, wincing and looking at me nervously. It felt like he was worried I would judge him. I smiled and shook my head. “No! You were scared. I completely get it!” His face softened. “I think it’s like you said last week. About knowing in the back of your head that you like guys, but not really wanting to face up to it? I think the fact I always thought I liked girls just made the whole thing more confusing. I thought that maybe if I just ignored it, I wouldn’t have to deal with it? So I did for a while. But then … I dunno, I started thinking about what happened with that guy. A lot! And finding myself more attracted to lads. And I think I finally just thought to myself, is it really that big of a deal if I’m attracted to guys too? And I’ve thought about doing stuff. I’ve seen guys at the gym who I think might be into lads. And I’ve thought about talking to them. I’ve even thought about going on one of those gay dating apps. But … I dunno. It all seemed a bit scary!” I gave him a reassuring smile and squeezed his waist. “And then … you came along!” AJ said, biting his lip and giving me this adorable, sheepish little look. I couldn’t help but giddily grin, while gazing at him. “So … when did you know?” I asked. His mouth erupted into a cheeky grin. “That I liked you?” My heart fluttered like crazy. Just hearing him say the words. That he liked me. Fuck! I nodded. He took another deep breath. “Ummm … I think it was when we started messaging each other on Facebook? Every time you messaged me, even just seeing your name on my screen, I’d get really excited. And then … I just found myself thinking about you. A LOT! And then, whenever I was with you, I’d just start having all these thoughts. And … urges!” he said, playfully raising one eyebrow. “Urges?” I cheekily asked. “What kind of urges?” I teased. Suddenly I was rock hard. My dick digging into the side of one of AJ’s thick thighs. He gave me a little squeeze. “Like I wanted to kiss you!” AJ said. I leant in and we kissed again. The most amazing kiss. “And other stuff!” AJ cheekily added with his eyebrow raised. “You know what you were saying last week?” AJ asked. “About really liking someone. When you can’t stop thinking about them? All that stuff about feeling butterflies. That’s how I feel about you.” Fuck! Fuck, fuck, FUCK! “I was kinda talking about you too!” I confessed, feeling those fuck off massive butterlies more than ever. “That was risky!” he said. “I think the alcohol made be brave!” AJ chuckled. “You must have had an inkling that I liked you, though?” “Ummm. Actually I didn’t! Well … not since what happened on Saturday. Hmmm. Maybe last Thursday?” AJ bit his lip. “The leg thing?” he cheekily asked. I nodded, feeling excited that we were broaching the subject. “I dunno what came over me!” AJ said. “I was just … GRRRR … dying to touch you. I think I was kind of hoping you’d react? ” “I didn’t know what was happening!” I explained. “I mean, the idea of you liking me. It’s pretty fucking crazy!” “Why?!” AJ asked, sincerely. “Ummm … HOT BODYBUILDER!” I exclaimed looking him and down. I felt a jolt of excitement at being able to describe AJ to him in that way. I never thought I would. AJ beamed and laughed in response. “Plus, I just kept telling myself you were straight!” I explained. “So … same question to you!” AJ said. “When did you know you liked me?” “Erm … I think it was the Facebook messages too,” I replied. I didn’t really feel like admitting to AJ that I’d been pretty much obsessing about him since the afternoon we’d bumped into each other at Tesco. Or that I’d been wanking off to pictures of him in competition that very same day. I felt like I needed to give him something a bit more though, even if it wouldn’t be the whole picture. “Although …” I began, feeling brave. AJ smirked, like he knew what I was about to say next. “I did kinda fancy you a bit before then!” AJ was suddenly beaming. The big, smug grin. “Yeah?” he excitedly said, raising an eyebrow. I playfully rolled my eyes. “Ummm … YEAH!” He did one of his cute, little giggle in response. “Could you not tell?” I asked, my stomach twisting just a little. “A little!” he said with a mischievous grin. I sheepishly grinned back and felt my cheeks flushing. So he had known all along. Fuck! “I thought maybe it was just the body?” AJ said. “Hmmm. Well that was part of it! But … it wasn’t just that!” I confessed, suddenly feeling a little shy. He gave me a little squeeze and continue to dreamily grin at me. “It was the waddle too!” I added. AJ gave a short, sharp laugh in response, and my chest fluttered. The way it always did when I made AJ laugh. “So …” AJ began, lightly rubbing my arm with his hand. He suddenly looked serious. “Is what we’re doing OK here?” I furrowed my eyebrows in confusion. “In what way?” “Well … aren’t you kinda seeing Eddie? I know you said you didn’t “like like him”, but I don’t wanna step on anyone’s toes!” The fact that that was a concern for AJ spoke volumes. “I honestly think of Eddie as more of a friend. And I know I said he likes me! But I’ve seen only seen him, like three times?” AJ’s expression softened and his moth curled into a happy little grin in response. “He definitely likes you!” he said. “I can tell.” And then he looked serious again. “And I’m sorry about just storming off on Saturday. Seeing you with him. I dunno … it just did something to me. It wasn’t just the kissing, either. It was before then. Just seeing you two together.” I remembered how AJ had seemed bothered about something in the lead up to him leaving, whilst I’d been chatting to Eddie. I squeezed his back with my hand. It was completely absurd that AJ would think that he’d have anything to worry about where Eddie was concerned. As nice of a guy as Eddie was, my feelings for AJ were completely incomparable. “Eddie’s really nice. But …” and then I leant in and softly kissed him. I wanted to say, “He’s not you,” but the kiss seemed to be enough. “So ... did you buy me the hoodie?” I said, teasingly. AJ looked sheepish but grinned. “Kinda!” “And it wasn’t really your friend’s birthday on Saturday was it?” “I just really wanted to see you again. And … I guess I was kind of hoping something might finally happen?” AJ confessed. I dreamily grinned at him and gently kissed him. I was rock hard again. “Mmmmm!” AJ said as my hard on dug into the side of his thigh. We squeezed each other tighter. As I sunk my head into AJ’s thick bull neck, he gripped my rock hard dick and squeezed. I groaned into his trap muscle and gripped his back with my hand. As he worked his hand up and down my cock, I unburied my head and look down at the obscenely muscular body I was pressed so tightly up against. I put my hand on AJ’s right thick pec. The place where the emblem of his Scorpio’s gym hoodie usually sat, and the place where the name badge had been pinned that very first time I ran into him a month before. I smiled as I remembered that very encounter. How I’d been shocked at how huge my old friend from school had become. How outrageously big his arms were and how his massive tits had strained and bulged through the material of his work shirt. And now I was touching those same tits, before moving my hand to those very huge arms and giving them a squeeze, while the owner of them played with my cock. My nose rubbed against AJ’s, and then we were kissing again. Mouths locked and tongues intertwined. The most passionate kiss as I gripped and squeezed onto his phenomenally thick, hard as rock arms, and AJ bought me ever closer to cumming, until I couldn’t contain it any longer. Still kissing AJ, taking in his unique scent, feeling his huge, hard mass against me, his warm, soft, sticky skin on mine, I released loud muffled groans into his mouth as I gripped his enormous upper arms and my whole body exploded with ecstasy. 35 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gman Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 Another great chapter. I'm so happy for both of them. This is great writing. Not only does it do the job that erotica is suppose to , but I'm emotionally invested in these characters! I want to know how they start dating. Do they keep it secret? Does AJ come out? Will he worry about that hurting his chances as a competitive bodybuilder? Would he consider following Noah back to London and competing there? Will they do a long distance thing? Will AJ hook Noah up with a gym buddy in London and he gets noticeably bigger every time he and AJ meet up? Will the gym buddy start making advances on either Noah or AJ? Will it just be a summer romance, and both of them will move on, being better people at the end of it? Possibly meeting up again in a few years once AJ has gained confidence in his sexuality, become a pro bodybuilder, possibly with his own gym (or a partner in Scorpios), and Noah has his degree and a massive body of his own, quietly following AJ's carrier all these years, despite dating other guys? So many possibilities! 3 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandias Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 You really capture how our two protagonists are quite simply soulmates. I'm really looking forward to their mutual development as the story progresses. Also, it certainly wouldn't go amiss if AJ and Noah grew physically too haha! But of course, soulmates doesn't mean they're meant to be together... 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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