Bjort Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gman Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 Ahhh!!! Still so ambiguous! Love this story for the tension! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Built22 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 oh my fucking god!!!! like everyone else thought noah would come back in to find aj in his posers with a bottle of oil doing another most muscular damn you man you leave us danglingon a knife edge again bring on chapter 20 come on 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuscleWorshipID Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 I hate you, Clayton James.... It is a kinda cruel, you are teasing me.... !!! I want more.... we want more!!! 6 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Built22 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 1 hour ago, MuscleWorshipID said: I hate you, Clayton James.... It is a kinda cruel, you are teasing me.... !!! I want more.... we want more!!! yes definitely love that photo 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ldnmscl Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 I’ve only just discovered this and I’m loving it! Can’t wait for the next chapter! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 7, 2018 Author Share Posted October 7, 2018 12 hours ago, Ozymandias said: Beautiful, heartfelt chapter. Perfect descriptions of Noah's emotions as always. This is, without a doubt, one of - probably the - best story I've had the pleasure of reading on here. Thanks for writing it I'm really touched by this! Thank you, matie. More below... 7 hours ago, Austinevenson42 said: Amazing, this chapter killed me in the best way possible. The minute I started reading it I knew you'd leave us with a cliffhanger again, I just had a feeling, but it was still even better than what I imagined. I really hope we get a new chapter sooner rather than later, but I don't want to rush genius. Honestly can't give you enough praise. Thanks so much, both!! It means a lot to me to get this kind of feedback! I think one of the reasons why I was a little nervous about this chapter is because it's a bit more serious in tone compared to the previous chapters. Also, while I've written characters who are very introspective in their thinking before, none of them have really faced anytihng like Noah does here. Anyone who is familiar with my stories will know that most of them are very light in tone! So this felt like new terrority for me as a writer and I wasn't sure if I'd pulled it off! I'm sure many would argue that I overdid it, and that Noah posed too many questions, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. ARGH!! I'm just loving the experience of sharing this story. How about I make it a series? I'm thinking 7-10 AJ & Noah related stories?! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 7, 2018 Author Share Posted October 7, 2018 2 hours ago, Built22 said: oh my fucking god!!!! like everyone else thought noah would come back in to find aj in his posers with a bottle of oil doing another most muscular damn you man you leave us danglingon a knife edge again bring on chapter 20 come on 1 hour ago, MuscleWorshipID said: I hate you, Clayton James.... It is a kinda cruel, you are teasing me.... !!! I want more.... we want more!!! I don't know where I've got this reputation for being a tease from! Anyway, here's the next chapter... Twenty It felt like my heart had- Bugger! Just remembered I need to pop out. Laters, guys! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawn1978 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 Amazing chapter, MuscleAddict!! And a very nice cliffhanger! A better one than I was expecting. I can't begin to tell you just how much I've fallen in love with this story! As someone who has watched soap operas and movies over this very thing, I can clearly visualize the scenes in my head, as if they are playing out, as I'm reading the story. The sexual tension, the nervousness, the anxieties, and the feelings! I could feel everything that AJ and Noah were both feeling. Even though we don't have AJ's point of view in the writing, you can kind of pick up on how he's feeling. And when it comes to being afraid to confess your feelings to someone you are not sure feels the same way, it's something all of us can relate to. We have all been there. Having feelings for someone and not being able to tell them. And here are the questions. How will AJ react? Will he feel the same way about Noah that Noah does for him? How will AJ's parents react when AJ has to confess his true feelings for Noah? Will they approve or not? Where does this leave Eddie, who is clearly beginning to fall hard for Noah? Or is it now for AJ? How come someone not fall in love, or even in lust, for someone as hot and as muscular as AJ? I love that you write this story as a fictional love story, but with some realism to it as well, such as Little Denton, the setting, Scoprio's Gym as one of the location scenes, and last but not least, the way all the characters relate to each other! A story told, with real human emotions, is a story sold! This would definitely be a hit as a Netflix series. Or maybe even an HBO series. The world needs more stories like this to be told. Gay youth, as well as adults who are unlucky at love, need this, so they can have hope to find love in their lives and have the courage to come out to their families and friends and be able to be themselves and do what makes them happy! Can't wait for the next installments! This story rocks. And so do you, MuscleAddict! You're an amazing writer! 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Built22 Posted October 7, 2018 Share Posted October 7, 2018 25 minutes ago, muscleaddict said: I don't know where I've got this reputation for being a tease from! Anyway, here's the next chapter... Twenty It felt like my heart had- Bugger! Just remembered I need to pop out. Laters, guys! hahaha cant think why youve got this reputation but im loving it 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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