Guest Posted October 5, 2018 Share Posted October 5, 2018 That was fantastic, it just keeps getting better! I love Noah’s nan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LOve4muscles Posted October 5, 2018 Share Posted October 5, 2018 16 hours ago, Shawn1978 said: Thank you, Love4muscles. I may continue it when I figure out how to pick up from where I left off. I have the ending already made up in my mind. It's just about getting there. I remember having the biggest crush on Nick Lachwy and have often wondered how hot he would have looked with more massive muscles on him. Now, on to more AJ and Noah! I am sorry for the off-topic. I hope I didn't bother anyone. It is just that when I find something that makes me reading 98 chapters in a single say it is quite extraordinary... Let's wish our best to our Noah: I wish I had a muscle-bound boyfriend/husband... Please, when you have time keep writing your story. I have to know how the trial will end and I want to know what happens to Jason, Nick and Sean: are they going to have a menage à trois? I am just joking. Thanks to you all to make me dream that one day I will find my person. Best regards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Share Posted October 6, 2018 On 5 October 2018 at 3:03 AM, TheOnceandFutureFreak said: *screams into my pillow* Oh my god you're killing me man. I'm literally smiling at this story. Oh my goodness and I'm such a hopeless romantic too so this hits me from so many spots. Ughhhhhhhh. Yayyyyy. Booooo. I'm going through a lot of emotions LOL Haha! LOVE that reaction! And this post in general!! Well you're not alone, mate cause Noah definitely goes through a fair range of emotions over the next few chapters, too! On 5 October 2018 at 7:24 AM, Built22 said: yes you sure are but then poetic licence for the author!!! maybe aj suggests meeting for a coffee to explain his actions from the other night You'll find out soon... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Share Posted October 6, 2018 On 5 October 2018 at 3:16 AM, Shawn1978 said: That is indeed my works. Thanks! Sorry MuscleAddict, I didn't mean to kind of pimp my story out, but I was just mentioning it as an example. It started out really messy when I first started it, until I spaced the text out in later chapters. I never did finish the story though. If you or anyone else wants to check it out, feel free. It was the first story I ever attempt to write to see if I had talent as a writer. Absolutely not, mate - feel free to pimp away! Love4muscles' feedback has gotten me intrigued about the story! Will definitely check it out! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Share Posted October 6, 2018 20 hours ago, DejimaStation said: That was fantastic, it just keeps getting better! I love Noah’s nan Thanks, matie! "Special friend" was something my own nan said! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Share Posted October 6, 2018 On 5 October 2018 at 4:47 AM, mario2007 said: That chapter was a total tease! You're a genius. Hmmm. I feel like I could be a BIGGER tease though! Maybe I'll end the next post mid-sentence. "My heart skipped a beat. Because AJ Jones was leaning towards me. And then he took his hand and put it in on my- TO BE CONTINUED"! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzNLA Posted October 6, 2018 Share Posted October 6, 2018 I really loved the first part of chapter 19. I can’t wait to read what you come up with next mate. I have my own version of part two, but I want to see what you come up with. It is your story and vision By the way, a small suggestion, if you really want to tease the hell of us, you should end the chapter “My heart skipped a beat. Because AJ Jones was leaning towards me.” THAT would be a major tease 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Share Posted October 6, 2018 20 minutes ago, BrzNLA said: I really loved the first part of chapter 19. I can’t wait to read what you come up with next mate. I have my own version of part two, but I want to see what you come up with. It is your story and vision By the way, a small suggestion, if you really want to tease the hell of us, you should end the chapter “My heart skipped a beat. Because AJ Jones was leaning towards me.” THAT would be a major tease Hehe! Like it, mate! Maybe we can add an "and..." on to the end of that. See you're just encouraging me to actually do it now! Id actually love to hear what youd like to see happen in the rest of the chapter! Although it might make me worried that what *does* actually happen might be a let down!! Feel free to send me a private message if you don't wanna post it here. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popular Post muscleaddict Posted October 6, 2018 Author Popular Post Share Posted October 6, 2018 Second half of chapter 19. Deep breath! Kinda nervous about this one but I'm not sure why! -------- I decided in that moment that as soon as I got home I would swallow my pride and message AJ again. I couldn’t risk losing what we had. Even if it meant ignoring his drunken confessions. I would make AJ talk to me. I just wanted what we had back. And I wanted to see him again so badly. Little did I know that he’d already beaten me to it. My heart blew up in my chest and my stomach somersaulted when I saw those words I loved so much on the screen on my phone; AJ Jones has sent you a message. “OMG! Have you heard about the latest episode of AJ and Noah In The Land of Beef?” I looked at the message. I’d never felt such a mixture of emotions. I was happy, elated even, that AJ had finally messaged me back. That we were apparently back to our usual, cheeky, funny Facebook messages. But I also couldn’t help feeling an almost crippling disappointment. Not to mention confusion. Was AJ really just going to completely ignore the fact that he’d all but confessed that his feelings for me weren‘t strictly platonic? “Oooh, no! What happens?” I typed, playing along. A few seconds pause, then three dots. “AJ adopts some kind of superpower which makes everyone he meets wanna grab and squeeze his biceps!” My disappointment faded, and in it’s place, I felt a giddy warmth as I pictured the scene from a few nights before when that incredibly lucky stranger had felt and squeezed one of AJ’s flexed bicep in the toilets of the bar. “Sounds like an awesome episode!” I messaged, while dreamily grinning into my phone. The way I often did when I was messaging AJ. “Apparently it was inspired by recent true events!” he then messaged. Something twisted in my stomach. Nerves, but also excitement, that AJ was recalling the events of our night out. Was there any possibility that this was going to lead to AJ explaining why he left? And maybe then to the drunken Facebook messages I’d received early the next morning? I typed a message. “It was a good night!” But then I erased it straight away. ARGGHH! I really wanted to try and push the subject, but I was terrified. Because what if AJ didn’t reply? What if he disappeared on me again? Ignored my messages like he had done for the past day and a half? I wasn’t sure I could go through that torment again. I had to write something. But I had no idea what. My brain tried to scramble for something funny. Something cheeky and muscle related. But I was drawing blanks. Because I was unable to say the things I really wanted to say. The questions I was dying to ask AJ. I stared at my phone. No dots. None of us were typing anything. An awkward silence seemed to be hanging in the air. And then a lifeline. Three dots. AJ was typing another message. And what that message consisted of caused an excitement to furiously surge through my whole body. “Hey. Are you free tonight?” YES, YES, FUCKING YES!! I felt like I was going to combust. Because after a day of fearing that I may never hear from AJ again, it now looked as if I was going to see him that very evening. “Yeah! Why?” I replied. And then a pang of nerves twisted in my stomach. Because I wasn’t just going to see AJ again. I was going to see AJ for the first time since his drunken Facebook messages. I wasn’t particularly that keen on the idea of going to Scorpio’s that evening. But if that was what it took to see AJ again, then I would just have to go. In truth, I probably would have agreed to do anything or go anywhere just for the chance to see him again. I would never have predicted what AJ was about to message next. “I’ve got the house to myself. Fancy coming round?” GOD YES. A THOUSAND TIMES YES!! “Sounds good!” I replied, while my insides felt like were exploding. “Maybe this time we’ll give the alcohol a miss?” AJ messaged. And then he sent the thing I loved so fucking much. That cute little AJ emoji. Almost as cute as the boy I’d named it after. My body couldn’t seem to decide how it wanted to react to AJ’s invitation. I was excited and elated at the fact that I was going to see AJ again. That I was going round to his house and that I was, no doubt, going to be perched on his bed again, sitting close up to the huge, gorgeous bodybuilder I was completely besotted with. But I was also incredibly nervous. Because it was the first time I was going to see AJ again since our eventful night out, and the Facebook messages that had followed. On the walk to AJ’s house, a dozen questions were going through my head. Would things be awkward between us after what had happened? Would AJ be exactly the same as he was before? Would we talk about the night out again? Would I feel nervous doing so? And what was the likelihood that the subject of AJ’s drunken confessions were going to come up in conversation? Would he mention it? Would I have the nerve to mention it? Was AJ expecting to me to bring the subject up? A part of me wanted to. A massive part. But another part of me also just wanted things to carry on exactly the same way as they were. Before I’d left for AJ’s, I had grabbed my bright blue Scorpio’s hoodie in a spontaneous moment of bravery, careful to hide the logo on the chest from my mum on the way out of the house. It was a little mad, but even just walking along the street wearing a hoodie with the name and logo of a genuine hardcore bodybuilding gym gave me a rush. My heart was pounding as I stood on AJ’s doorstep. Even more than it had the very first time I’d been stood there a few weeks before on our first trip to Scorpio’s. As soon as AJ opened the front door, and we were face to face for the first time in two days, my nerves seemed to diminish dramatically, and I was filled with the all too familiar rush of happiness of being in the presence of the impossibly gorgeous, competitive bodybuilder I had spent the past month falling for. AJ was wearing his Scorpio’s Gym hoodie too, which I kind of fucking loved. He looked as insanely sexy as he always had. Cute button nose, styled hair, rosy cheeks and all. I could tell he was nervous to see me. He even looked a little vulnerable. I wanted so much to just put my arms around him and snuggle into him. Do whatever it took to reassure him that everything was fine between us. Give him whatever he needed to feel like he could act normally around me again. But despite the obvious nerves, I could tell he was pleased to see me. It wasn’t just the fact he was giving me this cute, coy, little grin. I could see it in his whole face. And I couldn’t believe that I was responsible for that happiness. That someone as huge and cute and amazing as AJ was pleased to see me. “Nice hoodie!” he cheekily said to me, as I stepped inside his house and he closed the door behind me. He still looked nervous, but his smile grew just a little bit bigger and more gorgeous. I giddily grinned back at him. “Oh, this?” I said, looking down at the best gift anyone had ever given me. “I just found it lying around. I can’t remember where I got it from!” I said, shrugging. AJ grinned even more, and gently bit down on his bottom lip, the way he often did. The chemistry between us, the amazing buzz I always felt whenever I was with AJ was very much still there. In fact, in that moment, I felt it more than ever. He signalled for me to follow him up the stairs and I obeyed. He was wearing a pair of grey shorts which cut off just above the back of his knees. His tanned calves looked fucking humongous. I was turned on instantly. As we walked into his room and I perched on his bed, I was, once again, suddenly thinking about the events of the past two days. And all of those big questions were bubbling away again. Because surely one of us would at least have to mention the night out? And what had happened afterwards? AJ manoeuvred himself so he was sitting with his feet near mine with his back to the wall. I couldn’t help but stare at his bare shins. He had hardly any hair on his legs, and they were way more tanned than the average lad’s. He really was a proper little bodybuilder. He was also wearing these cute, little, white sports socks which cut off at the ankles, and contrasted with his brown legs, which, for some reason I found unspeakably fucking hot. God, even AJ’s ankles were fucking sexy. Things didn’t so much feel awkward between us. But it definitely felt like there was something hanging over us. Something unspoken, I guess. Like an elephant in the room. “Where’s your mum and Andy?” I asked AJ. “Oh, one of mum‘s workmates is having a birthday thing!” AJ replied. “Why? Disappointed?” he asked with a cheeky grin and a raised eyebrow, referring to my old crush on his step-dad. I sheepishly grinned and rolled my eyes. “Shut up!” I playfully said. “Did your mum question you about the hoodie?” AJ asked, with a mischievous grin. I pulled an “eeeek” face. “I kinda hid the logo from her!” AJ did one of his cute, little giggles. “How is she gonna react when you start blowing up into a muscle freak?” Fuck! As typical whenever AJ talked about muscle in such a hot manner, my dick started to stir and swell under my jeans. I blushed a little, while failing to suppress a huge, giddy grin. “I think she’d actually disown me!” AJ grinned. “Well I’m pretty sure my mum would take you in! She’s used to being around shredded freaks!” And suddenly I wanted nothing more than for my mum to kick me out so I could come and live with AJ. Spend all my time here, mostly sitting on the very bed I was on at that moment. Hanging out and spending time with the gorgeous, funny bodybuilder whose cute little ankles I couldn’t seem to stop looking at. My phone suddenly pinged in my pocket. AJ checked his phone. “Think that was you!” he said. As I reached into my jean pocket, my stomach suddenly lurched. Because what if the text was from Eddie? Fuck. AJ would ask me who it was. And the events of Saturday night would suddenly be bought to the surface. The thing I was partly dreading happening, and partly wanted so badly. I almost felt disappointed when I saw Naomi‘s name on the screen. Curiously, AJ didn’t ask me who the message was from. Maybe he was fearing the exact same thing that I was? “Hmmm. Text from Naomi!” I said casually. AJ nodded, but suddenly looked a little nervous again. And I knew why. Because Naomi had been a part of that evening too. I looked at the text. “Have you heard from AJ yet?” I know it was just a text, but somehow, just having that little piece of my best friend there with me gave me an unexpected bravery. “She really liked you, by the way!” I said, my stomach twisting. Because I was getting close to the subject we had so far been skirting around. Apparently a compliment was all it took to ease AJ’s nerves, which in turn broke the slight awkwardness and eased my own nerves. AJ’s face softened and his mouth curled into an adorable, little grin. “Awww! She’s awesome!” he said, and my heart fluttered. I loved the fact that my best friend and AJ liked each other so much. “I still can’t believe what you did to Reece Miller! I’ll never forget his face when you called him a prick!” AJ was beaming. “Mate, that felt so fucking good! God, I hate that little shit!” he said, referring to my ex best friend. “There was another part of the night I liked better, though!” “Yeah?” I said, my heart beating a little faster. “Yep! Your face when I gave you a most muscular!” I shook my head and smirked. My dick was suddenly stirring and swelling again, not just at the mention of the incident, but the actual memory of it. “You know I’m gonna get you back for that!” I teased. AJ beamed. “Oh yeah?! What are you gonna do?” “I’ll think of something!” I mischievously replied, shrugging. He grinned at me and my whole body filled with an incredible warmth. Because despite whatever was happening, and whatever had happened, it felt like we were back to being us again. Playfully winding each other up and making each other laugh. And yet, it undeniably felt like something had changed. Like there’d been a shift in our friendship. I suddenly thought about what Naomi had said in the pub after AJ had left. “There’s something going on with you two. The way he talks to you. The way he looks at you!” And in that moment, sitting on AJ’s bed, I felt it more than ever. “Fancy watching Dom and Cole?” AJ asked. My heart dropped. Because we were so close to discussing AJ’s Facebook messages. And why he’d left the bar upset. But it clearly wasn’t going to be then. Maybe AJ knew we were close to the subject and wanted to veer away from it too? “Yeah!” I replied, trying not to sound too disappointed. I could barely concentrate as we sat watching the TV screen. I couldn’t stop thinking about what AJ had confessed in his messages. That he’d gotten upset and stormed off because he’d seen me kissing Eddie. All of these questions started to race through my head. What did it all mean? Did AJ like me as much as I liked him? Was AJ even gay? What about the girl he’d told me about from the summer before? I needed to know. I needed answers. But how and when would I get them? When AJ got drunk again and decided to send me another series of drunken messages? And what would we do until then? Carry on as we were, making up cute bodybuilding nicknames for each other, going to Scorpio’s and drinking vodka in his bedroom while watching cartoons? And then something hit me. Everything that had happened with us had been because AJ had made it happen. He had added me to Facebook after our first chance meeting at Tesco when the thought of doing so hadn’t even entered my head. He had been the one to message me first. Something I never would have done because I’d never have believed that a gorgeous, competitive bodybuilder would have wanted to spend his time talking to me. It had been AJ who had invited me to Scorpio’s and suggested I come to his house. AJ had come to meet me and my friends the Saturday before because he had suggested it. And things were now different between us because it had been AJ who had opened up over his drunken, confessional Facebook messages. It had all been because of him. AJ was a doer. AJ made things happen. While I just sat back and let things happen around me, and reacted accordingly. And I realised, that unless he decided to act again, nothing else was going to happen. That I wouldn’t get the answers to any of the questions that were racing through my mind. That I would never get the thing I wanted more than anything. Unless I acted first. I can’t describe what happened to me next. Sitting on AJ’s bed, I suddenly needed to escape. It was all just too much. I felt like my head was going to explode. So, without saying a word to AJ, I slid off the bed, and made a dash to the bathroom. I put the toilet lid down, and sat on it with my head in my hands. I felt like I was having some sort of mini breakdown. Like my emotions were too big for the world. It didn’t necessarily feel bad. Weirdly, I even kind of liked it. It was almost as if I was in a film, and a really important scene was playing out. Or maybe that was just my way of dealing with the situation. Because I knew that whatever was happening, it was big. Monumentally fucking big. I realised in that moment that I couldn’t go on doing what I was doing with AJ. That something had to change. That if he couldn’t give me what I wanted, then I’d probably have to walk out of his house and never look back. And I realised that this time I couldn’t wait for AJ to act. That this time it would have to be down to me. A calmness seem to suddenly come over me at that realisation. I looked around AJ’s bathroom and realised that there was a good chance I would never see it again. Because I had no idea what was about to happen next. I took a deep breathe, and made my way back to AJ’s room. Amazingly, I didn’t feel nervous. Because I knew I had to do what I was about to do. AJ had moved. He was now sitting next to the spot where I’d been sat, with his back against the wall facing the TV. “You okay?” he asked me with a concerned look as I sat down next to him. God. Even just being that close to him. Feeling the warmth of his body next to mine. It was intoxicating. I liked him so much that I just wanted to fall into him and become him. “Yeah,” I replied, perhaps not too convincingly. We were sat closer than ever on his bed. It was probably good that he wasn’t directly facing me. This is it, I thought. There’s no going back. I swallowed hard. My heart started thumping. “So, what exactly happened Saturday?” And suddenly the nerves were back. Suddenly my stomach was twisting. And AJ wasn’t responding. And so I did the thing I had really wanted to do when we’d both been sitting in that very spot the week before, when his leg had been pushed up to mine and he hadn’t moving it away. I nervously turned my head and looked at his face. That gorgeous, perfect face I loved so much. A rare, serious look on it. Part nerves, part fear. It quickly changed as he attempted to relax it. “It’s all a bit of a blur,” he replied. LIAR! I thought. I then felt something I’d never felt for AJ before. Something completely unexpected. Disappointment. Because he remembered enough. I knew he did. I turned away from him again to face the TV head on. “Oh,” I said. “Because in your messages, you said you left the pub because of me? Because of me and Eddie?” I cautiously looked at him again. He looked more nervous than ever. Scared, even. But I could tell that he wanted to tell me what he’d meant. That he wanted to say the words I so badly wanted to hear. I could see it written in his face. I looked down at his body. At his bright red Scorpio’s hoodie. His grey shorts. Those bronzed, hairless shins. His sexy sports socks. His cute little ankles. My leg was so close to AJ’s. I could have easily pushed it into his like he’d done the week before. What would be do? How would he react? Flinch and move it away? Or keep it there? And what would his expression be? What would his face give away? That he felt the same way I did when we were touching each other? That he felt like he wanted to die? I knew that AJ wasn’t going to open up to me that easily. That this was a hard subject for him to talk about. That whatever was happening with him and his feelings was a fuck off massive deal. “So what did you mean?” I asked. My heartbeat quickened as I looked back up at his face. Now more serious than ever. Our eyes locked. His chest expanded out and he took a deep breathe. Almost like he was bracing himself for what might happen when he said his next words. “I think you already know,” he said, softly. Fuck. Fuck, fuck, fuck. And there it was. The truth. The amazing, unlikely, unfathomable truth. That AJ Jones, the cute, gorgeous, funny bodybuilder I had spent the past month falling for, had feelings for me too. 37 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrzNLA Posted October 6, 2018 Share Posted October 6, 2018 Holy Shit Mate! What an awesome chapter and the cliffhanger is fantastic! Aarghh, it is gonna be torture to have to wait for the next chapter, but I know it is gonna be worth it. About my version, it would have been some confrontation, teasing and I would have ended with Noah hands on AJ biceps, because AJ did another Most Muscular on his face to shut up Noah’s babbling. I like your version of the chapter so much more! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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