pasidious Posted June 6, 2018 Author Share Posted June 6, 2018 1 hour ago, asianman2410 said: This is amazing. Absolutely got me hard and jerked off to it. I understand you are working on another story, but I do hope for a continuation at your earliest convenience!!! So amazing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0mgj00h4x Posted June 6, 2018 Share Posted June 6, 2018 On 6/4/2018 at 4:04 PM, pasidious said: "There's the fuckin' tip I want, dude," he said, gasping again Damn. This line alone, tying the approaching climax to the beginning in Chapter 1... just really elevates the literary quality of the overall piece. I absolutely love the detail in the growth sequence - you've written this so well that each reader can truly tap into the strength of their imagination. This has, without a doubt, become my favorite muscle growth fantasy. I really hope you do decide to continue this series, and, if you do, I look forward to it! (P.S. I think I've enjoyed Zach more than Mike has... ) 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted June 7, 2018 Author Share Posted June 7, 2018 3 hours ago, 0mgj00h4x said: Damn. This line alone, tying the approaching climax to the beginning in Chapter 1... just really elevates the literary quality of the overall piece. I absolutely love the detail in the growth sequence - you've written this so well that each reader can truly tap into the strength of their imagination. This has, without a doubt, become my favorite muscle growth fantasy. I really hope you do decide to continue this series, and, if you do, I look forward to it! (P.S. I think I've enjoyed Zach more than Mike has... ) I really really appreciate the kind words, and I'm really happy that I've been able to write something for so many people here to enjoy! I do want to continue this. I just need to begin planning it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0mgj00h4x Posted June 7, 2018 Share Posted June 7, 2018 32 minutes ago, pasidious said: I really really appreciate the kind words, and I'm really happy that I've been able to write something for so many people here to enjoy! I do want to continue this. I just need to begin planning it! If I may request, and if it's within your writing capability and realm of comfort, would you consider consider another penetration scene? Like where Zach is on top of a now-growing Mike, and Mike goes into detail about how their mutual growth causes him to feel Zach's member (and the rest of his body) to enlarge inside of him? *fans self* Oh, my... Just an idea, but you're doing great - regardless if you choose a different route, I bet the end result will be amazinggggg! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 7, 2018 Share Posted June 7, 2018 That is so freaking hot!! Please please please more chapterS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted June 7, 2018 Author Share Posted June 7, 2018 13 hours ago, jtchef said: That is so freaking hot!! Please please please more chapterS Thank you! And I am considering more for this story! 13 hours ago, 0mgj00h4x said: If I may request, and if it's within your writing capability and realm of comfort, would you consider consider another penetration scene? Like where Zach is on top of a now-growing Mike, and Mike goes into detail about how their mutual growth causes him to feel Zach's member (and the rest of his body) to enlarge inside of him? *fans self* Oh, my... Just an idea, but you're doing great - regardless if you choose a different route, I bet the end result will be amazinggggg! I'm always considering penetration scenes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
personme2 Posted June 7, 2018 Share Posted June 7, 2018 God, I hope they grow while they fuck each other. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted June 7, 2018 Author Share Posted June 7, 2018 1 hour ago, personme2 said: God, I hope they grow while they fuck each other. That's always a scene that I've found hot as shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1996bodybuilder Posted July 3, 2018 Share Posted July 3, 2018 Love your stories man can’t wait to see the continueation of this its hot as hell and love the content Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted July 3, 2018 Author Share Posted July 3, 2018 15 hours ago, 1996bodybuilder said: Love your stories man can’t wait to see the continueation of this its hot as hell and love the content Thank you! I'm going through a "dry spell" at the moment and I'm lacking inspiration, but it'll come back. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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