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Shahrazad2

I like the beginning! Looking forward to the next chapter 

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dredlifter

Nice premise!  I like a good detailed setup.  I love the poor Dory was unaffected...

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Ro20316
On 6/3/2018 at 3:23 AM, scarletic said:

“Hey, that’s no fucking shooting star, you idiots! That’s a meteor!” Wes said. “Hide behind something!”

I laughed my ass off. This was tully good. The setup  it0s great and you have really good charaters 

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hardmuscl4life

I'd like another helping of that please...

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hardmuscl4life

What a nice way to begin a Sunday morning.  Thanks for sharing your imagination with us...I really enjoy your story and hope you continue to add to it...   

More please!!!

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Ro20316
7 hours ago, scarletic said:

“Oh, yeah. ‘Cum?’ Are you sure you’re not just craving glue or something?”

I laughed my ass off at this 

Everyone is changing, ever so slightly but they are.

 

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dredlifter

This is awesome.  I love the setup, the slow growth.  The foreshadowing.  Great stuff.

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citizenies

more more omg more ❤️

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