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  • 7 months later...

Damn that ending though! Nice plot twist ha! I was already looking forward to more, now I'm REALLY looking forward to it. (Might want to work on the description of the size of the arms, since you want constructive criticism.) Great read though no worries. You do a great job at making a mood and setting the atmosphere and visuals. 

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