Bigger Posted June 5, 2018 Share Posted June 5, 2018 Love it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pasidious Posted June 5, 2018 Author Share Posted June 5, 2018 4 minutes ago, Bigger said: Love it! Thank you! Glad you love it!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JGMacroCreations Posted January 16, 2019 Share Posted January 16, 2019 Damn that ending though! Nice plot twist ha! I was already looking forward to more, now I'm REALLY looking forward to it. (Might want to work on the description of the size of the arms, since you want constructive criticism.) Great read though no worries. You do a great job at making a mood and setting the atmosphere and visuals. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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