sithspawn Posted April 19, 2018 Share Posted April 19, 2018 . 21 1 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cutlerfan Posted April 19, 2018 Share Posted April 19, 2018 Super! I hope this relationship and story continues. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupermanFan79 Posted April 19, 2018 Share Posted April 19, 2018 Loved it! I just enjoy all your superhero stories. Please keep them coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 More please ?????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejay Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 DEE Liteful! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muscleace Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 I'm not usually too into superheroes and strength stories, but this is too interesting of a set-up and story style to resist. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bjort Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 So very much to like here! Please keep it going!!! ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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arpeejay Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 1 hour ago, sithspawn said: Ummm...fuck I hadn’t planned on continuing it lol It was just a silly idea that popped into my head so I just had to get it down. I’m working on something a bit more ambitious but it won’t be ready for a while yet. I probably hold the world's record for time lapses between chapters, sometimes measured in decades. All we're saying is we would love to see you revisit it; do so in your own time, if at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted April 20, 2018 Share Posted April 20, 2018 WHAT a great premise! A superhero has doubts and wants "someone to talk to" in a therapeutic setting. This is a terrific idea, and you executed it with humor and sexiness! Great job! I've never seen this as a muscle/worship story premise! It would be overkill, but you could go into subsequent sessions based on the issues raised by the various superhero exploits: "So, Chris, when you saved that school bus full of children and returned them to the parents, how did that make you feel? Have you ever thought you'd like to have children of your own someday?" "Chris, when you stopped the destruction of the earth by reversing time by reversing the rotation of the earth, and then stopping the bad guys, did you think about your parents and other people you have lost?" "Chris, do you feel exploited when magazines and the media show endless pictures of your massively muscular physique, and yet you don't receive royalties on those images?" "Chris, how do you think people would react if your superhero self came out as gay?" "Chris, do you believe in God or a higher power outside of yourself?" And so on...... Well done! Clapping Mdlftr 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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