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Liquid Manhood- Chapter Six


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On 14/03/2018 at 11:07 AM, Hialmar said:

I wouldn’t call this a ”filler”. It is exquisite.

Oh, why thank you :D 

 

On 14/03/2018 at 8:26 AM, muscledrain said:

Wait...why didn't Chris also get big? I must have missed that. Did he elect just not to take the elixir yet? 

I really want more of Melvin. I can't get enough of Melvin. 

I want to use Melvin more, but the story is drawing to an end and I think I might just run into a dozen parts of filler if I follow all the threads I want.

Chris hasn’t used any yet, he can see that it has a mind of its own and is worried that he’s not gonna way what he wants. 

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On 16.3.2018 at 11:31 PM, ABSQRST said:

Oh, why thank you :D 

 

I want to use Melvin more, but the story is drawing to an end and I think I might just run into a dozen parts of filler if I follow all the threads I want.

Chris hasn’t used any yet, he can see that it has a mind of its own and is worried that he’s not gonna way what he wants. 

Maybe you could do some substories with all the threads you have in mind after you finished the main story. 

I like the story about Zac and Lance and that they became partners in a not so even relationship.

Also I like Sean and his transformation into a total behemoth. I would love to hear how he takes advantage of his new self.. :)

I love your story and your style of writing @ABSQRST ! 

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