theseventhwave Posted December 28, 2017 Share Posted December 28, 2017 Hot & sexy! Love your stories. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyberraga Posted December 28, 2017 Share Posted December 28, 2017 Perhaps logan can steal more muscle from other people too? I’d love a part 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kymuscleboy Posted December 30, 2017 Share Posted December 30, 2017 On 12/27/2017 at 11:05 AM, Xyggurat said: I don't see much room for a sequel in this, but I still want to get back to some longer form stuff. It's really hard, I think, to keep multi-part stories interesting and continue providing reader engagement when writing erotica. Some people like Jaypat do it effortlessly--me, I start to drown in worries: is this still hot? Is anyone going to read it? Shouldn't I be working on real novels with all this time? Why is Brandon Sanderson so much better at this? Am I a good man? And then I just end up going to the gym instead of writing. I have at least one more one-parter in the proverbial pipes right now, but I really need a few uninterrupted hours where I can write at home alone, for, uh, obvious reasons. I, for one, will read anything you write, whether it's a one off, or multi-part. I understand what you mean about keeping multi-part stories hot, but you've definitely accomplished it before. "The Roommate" is one of my favorite stories of all time. As far as your other worries, well, I can assure that people here will read your stuff. That said, I can't fault you for going to the gym! I need to spend less time reading stories and more time making them, and my user name, a reality. While I hadn't really thought this particular tale was ripe for continuation, the comment above about Logan being able to take from other people might actually work. Surely Troy wasn't his only bully. If it's in the context of other jocks that bullied him it might make sense in the narrative you created. Or not. I'm looking forward to the story you mentioned as well. So you write what you feel inspired to write, and I will happily read it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GainsWorshipper Posted July 26, 2019 Share Posted July 26, 2019 Damn, that was amazing. So glad I stumbled across it. Hope you're still writing - this is getting added to the permanent spank bank. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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