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arpeejay

Great follow-up and I hope there will be more!

Just FYI: You double posted about the last third of the story. There's a mix-sentence break just after Sam's last encounter with his roommate, then a long swath of repeated matter, and then the ending. You may want to tighten that up for the sake of your readers.

In the meantime, looking forward to more!

PS: Great profile pic!

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panama

So good writing ! Thanks.

 

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muscle405

That was amazing! Hope there's a sequel where there's a power play.

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Thefty
12 hours ago, arpeejay said:

Great follow-up and I hope there will be more!

Just FYI: You double posted about the last third of the story. There's a mix-sentence break just after Sam's last encounter with his roommate, then a long swath of repeated matter, and then the ending. You may want to tighten that up for the sake of your readers.

In the meantime, looking forward to more!

PS: Great profile pic!

Hello RPJ,

I have literally no idea how that occured, thanks for pointing it out.  Now corrected.  Many thanks

Glad you enjoyed.  More to come from me yet.

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arpeejay

From personal experience I can say it's VERY easy to do!

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BodybuilderBrad

What a great read! Thank you for your creation! Appreciate all the work you put into it! Please, keep on writing. =)

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xboy

Love it! The Sam character is great! I want more! I need more! He needs to show off, flex and become bigger, not taller, just thick and more muscular! Like Big Ramy! Nick also deserve to grow, less than Sam, the new Alpha top! He needs to fight again Nick, and be more dominant!

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lsosuke

MORE PLEASE MORE:wub:

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