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Wow! Great Concept! Quite the variety of test sections. I hope I would pass that test!  I'd say more but don't want to give any spoilers. Awesome Job man!

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4 hours ago, VRGoh said:

Very intriguing story, as well as a cheeky reference to "Brave New World."  Great job!

Ah you have caught one of my many references. Let's see if anyone can find the rest. :)

 

5 hours ago, cutlerfan said:

Wow! Great Concept! Quite the variety of test sections. I hope I would pass that test!  I'd say more but don't want to give any spoilers. Awesome Job man!

I think you could pass with flying colors. 

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7 hours ago, graniteknighte said:

Love the story Ace, very Gattaca wouldn't you say? Would I pass?

I think you could, especially the literary sections. 

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I loved it. Especially Aiden at the end. Love the idea of a super shy guy hulking out and becoming a superstud. Also love that it ended with the two of them holding hands.

Well done Ace!

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Aldous Huxley High School, ha ha - I love it! A fresh and erotic take on the idea of genetic modification on a societal scale. You have also taught me the word "heterochromic" which I'm determined to slip into a conversation at some point today!

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I got the Brave New World reference (I thought it just from the title, but it wasn't confirmed until I saw Aldous Huxley High School), and I loved Gattaca, so it made me think of that too.  Those were definitely some brilliant literary references to go along with a story that was creative, hot and satisfying.  Is the last name Torchmen a reference to the "fireman" in Fahrenheit 451, or am I reading too much into that one?

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6 hours ago, Kymuscleboy said:

I got the Brave New World reference (I thought it just from the title, but it wasn't confirmed until I saw Aldous Huxley High School), and I loved Gattaca, so it made me think of that too.  Those were definitely some brilliant literary references to go along with a story that was creative, hot and satisfying.  Is the last name Torchmen a reference to the "fireman" in Fahrenheit 451, or am I reading too much into that one?

No, you aren't. His was actually a double reference. One to Fahrenheit 451. The other was more of a pun on his name, I based it off of Roman Candle (a type of firework for those that don't know). I'm curious to see what other references you found. :) 

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