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Awesome job man! But you didn't copy the thing right, there's a lot of repetition of whole paragraphs and jumps (sometimes in the middle of a word).

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The only problem I had with the arm-wrestling scene, I would've loved to see the dad use both hands against the son's pinky, and the son still wins with absolute ease. That would've been incredible. The story does seem to have been copied a couple of different times, though, as the same scenes appear twice or three times.

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Wow yeah, a new BB Story out of nowhere! It's like Christmas.

This is shaping up to be another classic. Reminds me of some of my other favorites by you... hopefully he stays big and beefy and chunky on top of all the new muscle and size and power. Love those scenes where he dominates others, can't wait for more of that.

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Awesome story. <3

Though I kinda wished he would kinda stay his nerdy self. He seems like he is becoming a more jock-like person. =( A sporty nerd with a huge body that is happy to use his brain as well as his muscle would be so perfect. 83

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