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Chapter 14: Bunny Date Part 2
    The heavy thuds of Marvelous Man’s loafers and light steps of Gene Lightfoot’s running shoes echoed in a white hallway. After an interesting lunch at Toto’s, Marvelous Man had one last area for the date that he was sure would work: a viewing of the many paintings and installations at the Skyway City art museum.

    Like the Skyway City mall, the art museum was much bigger than Sunnysville. There was also the perk of most of the paintings and other artworks not being Apollo self-portraits from the very god himself.

    The rabbit demigod stopped in his tracks and turned towards a painting that caught his eye. Posing with a thoughtful gesture, the action was immediately betrayed by his radiating of confused emotions.

    “Such intricacy,” commented Gene.

    Marvelous Man tilted his head, while his brows furrowed. The two were staring at a blank canvas. The musclebound hero then took a closer look at it and corrected himself. It was painted in white; technically a “painting”. Looking down at the placard next to the “painting”, the canvas descripted, “White Oblivion of the Fractured Mind: A contemporary piece that reflects the artist’s perception of how people are crushed by the ever-ensuing modern stresses caused by technology and new social standards.”. 

Marvelous Man could feel anger stir within himself.

    He criticized, “It’s pretentious garbage. It’s literally a canvas painted white. It’s so pointless. And the description about how all this white reflects modern stresses is such bullshit.”

    “Thank goodness,” sighed Gene, “I feared that I did not ‘get it’.”

    Marvelous Man frowned, “Let’s just...go to another section that’s not so contemporary.”

    As the dating duo continued their walk, the Totochtin prince smiled.

    “I did not expect you to be so passionate about art,” giggled Gene.

    Marvelous Man blushed, “My dad taught me about all kinds of art: Graphical, musical, acting, etcetera. It helps that I’ve got a talent in those things too. But...yeah. I just think that art needs to elicit emotions other than confusion, disgust, or buyer's remorse. And the thoughts that run through your head shouldn’t be, ‘This is art?’. Sure, it could make it memorable, but the feeling is always temporary. Not like true art.”

    “I can agree to that,” nodded Gene.

    While wandering further into the museum, the daters’ eyes scanned the paintings and sculptures they passed by. They appeared well made but unremarkable; nothing worth talking about or staring at for more than two seconds. A good portion of them were simple shapes or realistic fruits.

    Marvelous Man halted his touring upon spotting something peculiar. He turned towards the art piece that caught his attention and began to give it a better inspection. It was a painting depicting a sort of ceremony between two men standing next to each other. One of the men had an olive skin tone and was dressed in a white toga with traditional Greco-Roman accessories. The other man was of Asian descent and was garbed in what appeared to be a traditional, red Chinese wedding outfit for grooms. In between the men was a large two-handed sword wielded by both men simultaneously. Both of them held the sword with one hand, while their free hands brandished a shield styled by their cultural backgrounds.

    Rabbit ears twitching, Gene stopped in his tracks. He appeared to have realized his date was no longer following him and turned around. Following back to where Marvelous Man was standing, he stood next to the musclebound superhero and examined the painting.

    The Totochtin prince remarked, “Ah, this is the marriage ceremony the outside world obsesses over correct?”

    “I guess. But I’ve never seen a style like this before,” shrugged Marvelous Man.

    Gene pointed, “What does the plaque say?”

    Looking down at where the bunny demigod pointed his finger at, Marvelous Man spotted the exhibit description label next to the painting. He then read the passage out loud for Gene to hear.

    “Union: An oil painting depicting a new marriage style gaining popularity in the U.S. known as a mixed culture wedding. The betrothed wear clothing and shield that reflects their cultural or ethnical background as a way to honor where they come from. By lifting a two-handed sword together with one hand, it symbolizes their unity and love to combat any harm or misfortune,” he read.

    Marvelous Man looked back at the painting, “That’s actually really beautiful. I wonder what a wedding is like in your homeland.”

    Gene looked up at Marvelous Man.

    “Oh. I am sorry to tell you this, but we Totochtins do not have the marriage rituals. Such marital unions do not exist in our country,” stated Gene.

    Marvelous Man stares down at Gene, “Why not?”

    The Totochtin prince was silent for a few seconds. His eyes gleamed the struggle of trying to put together words to exposit something that can only be felt.

    “Our tribes believe in a more...mutual love that is shared with every person. It is in a way like the polyamorous love. We all support each other and never feel alone or unloved. It is why we are so open with the sexual intercourse. It is both affection and an enjoyable activity to take part in,” explained Gene.

    He continued, “But we do have what we consider ‘favorites’. A person we would be deeply saddened by their absence and feel great joy by existing in the same room with them. Though such things are not long term. Eventually, they will lose interest and go their separate ways without any of the heartbreak. It is somewhat like your culture’s monogamy, but we Totochtin can have more than one favorite. Though having more than one can be uncommon.”

    Marvelous Man said nothing as he was stunned by Gene’s “traditional values”. The rabbit superhero turned his attention back to the marital painting and said nothing for a few seconds.

    Gene smiled, “I do find it fascinating. To choose a person with the intent to stay with them until the very end. As they say in your culture, ‘Til death do us part’.”
    
    “What’s wrong with that?” frowned Marvelous Man.

    From all the explanations and how Gene found marriage to be “fascinating”, Marvelous Man felt that Gene might be subtly mocking the sanctity of matrimony. As if his people’s way was superior. Marvelous Man could see Gene’s face becoming neutral.

    The bunny demigod replied, “I apologize if my remark sounded like the slander. Sometimes, what I say does not translate well enough to provide the context. But I do find marriage to be...interesting. It seems to only serve the purpose of insuring one is not lonely during their existence. Even when amongst their own kind, you people can still feel rejected.”

    Marvelous Man paused for a moment; trying to find the right words to say.

    “The world is a big place. Your...Totochtin race might feel whole because it's small and everybody can easily fit in somewhere like a...thirty piece puzzle box,” sighed Marvelous Man, “But outside of your small country, the world...it’s more like an infinity puzzle where almost nothing fits, cause all the pieces are from different puzzles. Not everybody is like you where they can have everything and just easily fit in together with everybody else. Sometimes...just being able to fit with at least one piece. To be part of that one thing can be enough against the infinity we can’t fit into.”

    “...That is very chaotic,” murmured Gene.

    Marvelous Man shrugged, “I guess so.”

    The two continued onward with the tour in silence. Every few seconds, the two would stop at an art piece and absorb the scenery for a moment before moving on. As the dating duo passed a sculpture of a nude Totochtin demigod posed sensually, a thought occurred to Marvelous Man.

    “Can I ask you something personal? You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to. Umm...you said you weren’t originally stationed to this region. What’d you mean by that?” requested Marvelous Man.

    Gene hummed, “Hmmm, well. My pilgrimage took place in Africa a few years ago. During that time, Doug was visiting Africa’s D.A.B. when the village I was visiting was plagued by a demon. I was careless and was captured by the demon and his possessed villagers. My gratitude came when Doug and his teammates freed me, and we vanquished the demon together.”

    “After the event, I finished my pilgrimage and returned home. Doug followed me and had the misfortune of being captured by my tribe. He convinced me to join the D.A.B., and I convinced the other tribe’s new prince to come with. We explored the world together and learned many things. But after a year, the other Totochtin princes wished to return home. I still desired to learn more of the world and the unique qualities one cannot find in my country. So I decided to stay with Doug, here, in Skyway City,” continued the rabbit superhero.

    Marvelous Man nodded his head as the two continued to walk. He spotted a canvas ahead that confused him. From his current perspective, the far away oil painting was full of black and white scribbles with no coherent design to it.

    The muscular superhero spoke up, “That reminds me. Did you hear anything back yet from the D.A.B. about the Skeleton Lord?”

    Gene shook his head.

    “I have not. They cannot find any answers on who or what the Skeleton Lord is. They cannot even find his whereabouts. All I know so far is a partial motive,” replied the Totochtin prince.

    Marvelous Man questioned, “And what’s that?”

    “You asked the Skeleton Lord what the point of doing all those terrible things was. He said to you, ‘When one has the power of a god and their purpose has turned to ash, the only thing one can do is burn the world itself.’. From there, I can ascertain he truly was powerful. Or he himself perceived himself as powerful as a god. But something happened to him. Something destroyed his purpose, and he is now vexed enough to destroy the world,” stated Gene.

    As the two passed in front of the scribble painting, Marvelous Man finally saw its true form. It was scribbles of not just black and white against a grey canvas, but also other colors included. The erratic strokes amalgamated into stick-like and skeletal figures being chained down to unseen depths. Thin, yellow halos encircled the figures’ heads while emanating a pink aura with pink flowers. Though such bright colors and details could be easily overlooked when the chaotic strokes that form absolutely nothing embraces the whole canvas.

    Marvelous Man frowned, “So you think he used to be a good guy?”

    “Or perhaps he was neutral,” answered Gene.

    The pair soon stopped to look at a pastel painting of the mountains. The rabbit superhero’s white bunny ears twitched, as he turned around. Looking across from himself, Gene spotted a bulky security guard staring at him. The man had hungry eyes and lewdly grabbed his crotch. The Totochtin prince licked his lips while nodding. As the security guard walked towards to the restroom next to himself, Gene smirked.

    He spoke up, “I am feeling sexually famished. I will regroup with you shortly after I have sated it with the security man.”

    Marvelous Man turned to watch Gene make his way to the museum’s bathroom. He could feel the bunny demigod emanating lustful emotions.

    “Oh...okay,” he replied.

    After watching Gene disappear into the men’s restroom, Marvelous Man then heard a camera shutter click. His eyes instantly stung as his vision saw only white for a few seconds. He blinked several times while looking down towards where he felt the source of the flash came from. Eyes adjusting back to normal, he saw the two people he least expected to show up. These two were the ones he most certainly did not want to see at the moment.

    Marvelous Man frowned, “Mom, Dad, what are you two doing here?! And where have you been?”

    Standing steps away from Marvelous Man was his mother holding a digital camera. As a goddess of love, Aphrodite was beautiful no matter what she wore. Even if all she wore was unsexy mom clothes. She always made the clothes beautiful; never the other way around.

    As for Marvelous Man’s dad, Apollo would be the god of vogue if not for his other deity powers and responsibilities. He struck a pose one would find in a glamorous fighting manga: arms twisting at angles around his torso, his toned leg muscles extended like he were about to do warm-up leg stretches.  To embellish himself even further in his flamboyant style, he sported a golden viking helmet with a white tuxedo and golden-rimmed, non-prescription glasses.

    “I could sense your love, sugarplum. I just had to see my baby boy on his first date!” smiled Aphrodite.

    Apollo chimed in, “Yes, we were so curious about this Gene boy, that we just had to watch. You got great tastes. He’s a prince, beautiful, and hypersexual. Almost as if you’re dating me.”

    Marvelous Man’s eyes went wide, as he felt his stomach lurch. Bits of bile ejected into his mouth. Was he really having a Freudian moment where he was dating someone that had an overabundance of characteristics like his father?

    “Ohmygosh. Please stop talking…” he gasped.

    Aphrodite grinned, “Well, he’s still a great catch, honey. And don’t worry, Gene only has similar features to your father. He’s got none of Apollo’s jawbreaker center.”

    “Bitch, please. It is a glittery, gooey center of bitchiness at the very least,” sassed Apollo.

    What his mother said did not make Marvelous Man feel any better. But the first part of what she said stirred his curiosity.

    Marvelous Man asked, “Hey, mom. Since you’re the goddess of love and all...Are you...Are you able to see if Gene and I are meant to be? Is he my one true love?”

    Aphrodite gently grasped his son’s hands and looked up into his eyes. She smiled with sincerity.

    “I can’t tell you that, sugarplum. It will only ruin the moment whether I say yes or no. Just enjoy your time with him and never regret it,” she answered.

    Marvelous Man sighed, “Okay...Uh, hey. Do you know anything about the Skeleton Lord? I figured you might’ve heard of him, since both of you are gods and kinda immortal. He’s able to raise the dead and has these skeleton powers.”

    The goddess of love looked at Apollo.

    “Skeleton Lord?” she said.

    Apollo pursed his lips; thinking as seconds ticked by.

    He snapped his fingers, “Oh, right! Yeah, we know nothing about him. Just word of mouth that he was some guy wreaking havoc on the other side of the world, yadda-yadda. But he never stepped a foot in Greece. Sooo, wasn’t in our jurisdiction and wasn’t our problem.”

    Marvelous Man’s heart dropped. He was hoping that they knew more, but it was a dead end as well. At the very least, they were able to confirm his existence from ancient times...Which brought up another question.

    “By the way, where’s Papa?” he asked.
    
    Aphrodite smiled and rolled her eyes, “Oh, he decided to stay behind. You know how passionate he can get about you, honey. Doesn’t want to end up intimidating your date and causing the love of your life to flee in fear of a war god. Besides, he says that he’s satisfied just watching your battles. 
    
    Marvelous Man’s mother paused.

    “It’s funny though. The only time he’s bragged about your encounters was with the PB&J gang. He’s been quiet since,” she frowned.
    
    The musclebound superhero felt thankful Ares did not tell his other parents about the Skeleton Lord encounters. Aphrodite could be a bit too coddling and overprotective. Whereas, Apollo would run his mouth; overembellishing the truth and causing Marvelous Man’s mother to freak out even more. It was surprising to know that Ares did not try to talk to Marvelous Man at all. Papa is the worst of the three when reacting to any misfortunate events that crosses their son. He must have been scratching his scars like a mad man; creating newer scar tissue over the old ones.
    
    Apollo tapped Aphrodite’s shoulder, “Oh, we have to bounce. Our little hero’s date just finished getting railed.”

    “Okay,” sighed Aphrodite, “Good luck on the rest of your date, sugarplum.”

    The two gods waved at Marvelous Man before walking off and disappearing around the corner of another gallery. Though the meeting was very brief, Marvelous Man enjoyed it. It was nostalgic, and he wished he had more time to talk to them. But that would have to be for another time.

    Turning towards the bathroom, Marvelous Man spotted Gene exiting. He saw Gene smile as the bunny demigod walked towards him.

    “I am sated for now. Let us resume the tour,” said Gene.

    Marvelous Man watched Gene take the lead. He enjoyed watching the bunny demigod’s naked, ample bottom bounce. The musclebound hero then smirked upon seeing semen leak from Gene’s buttocks and trail down the rabbit superhero’s sinew legs.
    
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    After the museum viewing, the date began to come to a close. There was one last thing the two had to do before Gene was escorted back to the D.A.B.

    Marvelous Man cradled Gene in his arms as they flew to their destination and landed in front of an abandoned subway station that resided in a run-down neighborhood. It was the Ridgemont subway station of where they had the second encounter with the Skeleton Lord. Marvelous Man felt guilt twinge within him; remembering how he failed to save the homeless community that dwelled within the subway.
    
    Released from Marvelous Man’s grasp, Gene landed on his feet. He then surveyed the area before speaking.

    Gene stated, “We can perform the send-off here. We do not have to do it at the exact spot. The ritual only has to be close enough for the spirits to notice it.”
    
    “Oh, okay,” nodded Marvelous Man.

    Gene asked, “Did you bring the toys?”

    “Yeah! I hand-carved them like you asked. But how come you wanted thirty?” questioned Marvelous Man.

    The musclebound superhero reached into his pockets and pulled out a wooden, hand-carved rabbit in each hand. Any craft that involves art was no problem for Marvelous Man to handle. Placing the wooden rabbit toys on the ground, he then repeated the process. This went on for several minutes until he had a pile of thirty rabbits. During which, Gene replied back.

    The Totochtin prince explained, “Because I wanted to make sure there was enough for each victim that died here at the hands of the Skeleton Lord. Did you remember the lighter you were supposed to bring as well?”

    Diving into his pocket, the musclebound superhero took out a kitchen blowtorch used to caramelize creme brulee. Marvelous Man sheepishly smiled, as he handed the device to Gene.
    
    “Are you okay with a caramelizer? It’s the only thing I could find around my apartment,” said Marvelous Man.

    Gene analyzed the device before pulling its trigger. A small, blue flame erupted from the lighter’s tip.

    Gene nodded, “It will do. Before we begin, could you please provide music with your harmonica? I request something somber.”

    Marvelous Man delved into his pocket again to reveal a his golden harmonica, Duskbringer. Pressing the instrument against his lips, he gently blew into it. The musically-gifted hero picked up speed while blowing different notes and began to play the sad tune Gene asked for.

    Squatting down with his lengthy meatus and red tie loincloth drooping against the ground, Gene positioned himself in front of the wooden bunny pile. The Totochtin prince pressed the caramelizer’s trigger; causing its blue flame to emit. Aiming the lighter, Gene contacted the flame against the hand-carved toy sitting at the edge of the pile. The toy lightly hissed, as the flame took effect and began its devour over the wooden rabbit. The bunny demigod repeated the process on the other toys at the edge of the pile. Once completed, Gene stood up and stared down at the inflamed toys.

    The red fire continued its spread from the edge of the toys to the ones residing in the inner pile and on top. The crackles of the fire’s light sparkled against Gene’s red-tinted aviator sunglasses. Once the pile was completely covered in flames and converted into a small bonfire, Gene clasped his hands together.

    “Oh lost souls. The unfortunate hand of death has claimed you,” chanted Gene, “But it does not mean your existence ends here. Come to the fire of my burnt offerings. For each of you, I give you a toy.”

    The Totochtin prince continued, “Let it remind you that you were all once children. Let the memories of childhood come back and transform you back into your nerelongful ways. Become the child you once were and let the burdens of your previous life fall away from you. Go now. Fly back to your gods and let your flesh be the soil for new life. You will not be forgotten. And the strong shall fight on for you and our god’s honor.”

    Seconds past after Gene’s speech ended, while Marvelous Man continued to play. A strong gust of wind blew out of the subway station’s empty entrance; bits of leaves and garbage flew with the current. The wind then breezed into the small fire of toy offerings. Rather than gusting past the tiny bonfire, it changed its flow straight upwards. 

    The smoke and flames became ensnared by the swirling, narrow vortex; spiraling up like a tornado inferno. The flaming vortex continued for a few moments before the wind eventually died down to a whisper flowing out of the abandoned subway. When the last wisp of air escaped into the spiraling vortex, the thin tornado dispersed as well as its flames.

    Ceasing his harmonica play, Marvelous Man watched the wondrous miracle before he looked down at the burned offerings. He spotted cold charcoal instead of burning cinders left over from the spiritual event. He then saw Gene squat down again at the pile.
    
    The Totochtin prince scooped up bits of the cool charcoal. He rolled it in his hand before crushing it between his fingertips.
    
    Standing back up, Gene turned towards Marvelous Man. The bunny demigod then extended his arm out to reach up to Marvelous Man’s face. Using his charcoal-covered fingers, he then marked the muscular hero’s forehead.

    “While it might have been luck or our extraordinary strength that ensured our survival, we must do our part to spread our greatness and assist the greatness of others to flourish,” said Gene.

    After marking his partner, Gene proceeded to mark his own forehead.

    He smiled, “The ritual is now complete. We may head home whenever you are ready.”

    Marvelous Man silently nodded and scooped up the rabbit superhero. With Gene cradled securely in his bulging, muscular arms, the bulky superhero flew up into the air.

    Gene remarked, “You know...I had taken part of the funeral ritual so many times for my tribe’s elderly, but had not given it a passing thought. But now that I have performed the send-off for the souls who died the unjust death...I see it from a new perspective. Those words actually have meaning.”

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    Nightfall began its approach, as the two said not a word during the flight. Marvelous Man was entranced by the event and was silently processing on what Gene had said to the fallen souls.

    Approaching the Demon Affairs Bureau building, the musclebound superhero began his descent. Marvelous Man touched the ground in front of the building seconds later and relinquished his grip of Gene. The Totochtin prince stood without help and turned to look up at Marvelous Man.

    “Much gratitude for the transport and assisting me with the send-off ritual. I cannot thank you enough for your kindness,” bowed Gene, “I believe this is where we part the ways for the night.”

    Marvelous Man looked a way for a moment and bit his lip. He clenched his hands with all his might for a berserker’s rage of courage.

    “C-can I...kiss you? If that’s okay with you,” he requested.

    Gene hummed, “...Yes, I do believe this is part of the dating custom wherein both people kiss each other. And your outside world media also dictates that this would sometimes lead to the intense sexual intercourse…”

    The bunny demigod paused for a few more seconds; his eyes reflecting intense thinking.

    “Would it be alright if we did not? It is not part of my people’s custom to kiss, and it seems like such an unsanitary thing to do,” he proposed.

    Marvelous Man’s eyebrows furrowed in confusion. It sounded like insanity. A sexual carnivore demigod believes kissing is an unsanitary idea?!

    His thoughts became verbal, “Aren’t you the type that sucks on the dick that just fucked you?! That’s even more unsanitary!”

    Marvelous Man instantly covered his mouth. He stared back at Gene with a shocked expression. Gene became surprised as well and looked away; his face showing a musing over what his date had just said.

    Seconds after, Gene looked back up at Marvelous Man.

    “I believe the expression I am meant to say here is ‘Touche’,” smirked Gene.

    Taking a slow breath, Marvelous Man gently placed his hands on Gene’s shoulders. He pulled his date forward with featherweight force and leaned down. Lips pursed and carefully aligned with each other, the muscular hero closed his eyes before contact.

    It was a soft peck. Embraced against each other for seconds, but it never went further. Gene’s lips felt like soft pillows, and his scent was a mix of honeysuckle and earth. This was enough for Marvelous Man to feel connected. To feel like a real person, and not some character stuck in a kid-friendly sitcom or comic book. His blood was rushing; pounding in both his head and his manhood. After everything he had been through, this brief moment made it all felt worth it.

    Releasing his delicate grasp and romantic embrace from Gene, Marvelous Man then realized he had stopped breathing during that kiss. He took a deep breath through his nostrils, and stood up straight. With adrenaline and high emotions wreaking havoc his body, it took all of the muscle hero’s will to not tremble and fall apart right after. The romantic giant then looked down at his date; beaming with love-struck excitement. His first kiss was everything he thought it would be.

    He grinned, “So...how was that?”

    Gene looked up in thought and bobbed his head left and right a few times.

    “Mmmm...It was cute,” he hummed.

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Not the perfect date, but definitely one sweet one. ^^ <3

This really is an excellent chapter to this story. ^^

Though gosh, his parents are just the worst. xD lol

But the only thing that I really find a bit of a downer is: That Gene had to "satiate"  himself with that guard. Sure it was perfect to introduce his parents to this chapter but still. ^^;;

Oh well, it is still a perfect part aside from that. ^^ <3

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3 hours ago, Hanugumo said:

Not the perfect date, but definitely one sweet one. ^^ <3

This really is an excellent chapter to this story. ^^

Though gosh, his parents are just the worst. xD lol

But the only thing that I really find a bit of a downer is: That Gene had to "satiate"  himself with that guard. Sure it was perfect to introduce his parents to this chapter but still. ^^;;

Oh well, it is still a perfect part aside from that. ^^ <3

Yeah...needed to figure out a way to get rid of Gene for a brief moment and I wasn't sure what better way there was, since MM made it clear in the previous chapter that he was not gonna volunteer XD I just knew people would be screaming at me as to why MM's parents haven't popped up again in a while and dished on some info about the Skeleton Lord. But yeah, doting parents have to be the worst no matter who they are lol

Also, apparently, a size 12 Font isn't acceptable for other people to read this, since a moderator had to get involved

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8 hours ago, EcchiMultiverse said:

Yeah...needed to figure out a way to get rid of Gene for a brief moment and I wasn't sure what better way there was, since MM made it clear in the previous chapter that he was not gonna volunteer XD I just knew people would be screaming at me as to why MM's parents haven't popped up again in a while and dished on some info about the Skeleton Lord. But yeah, doting parents have to be the worst no matter who they are lol

Also, apparently, a size 12 Font isn't acceptable for other people to read this, since a moderator had to get involved

It would be a little more uncomfortable for MM to have to go to the toilet and while he is taking a long leak (Unless he doesn't have too. Seeing as he is technically a full god, as his parents are full gods too and all. x3 lol), his parents would pop up and than have that lil conversation. xD

Though I do wonder what Gene would have thought & done if he would have gotten to meet MM's parents. >;3 Although on the other hand it could have ruined the date massively and all. ^^;;

 

I am surprised to hear that MM parents did not know about the Skeleton Lord though. I mean: aside from rumors of him reeking havoc on a different side of the world. Were they really THAT disinterested? =0

And oh yeah~, doting parents are truly the worst. xD Though I must admit: They seem so much nicer and more fun now compared to how you described them before you know? xD

 

And yeah, it does seems that way huh? Guess you'll need to post it in a smaller font next time. ^^;

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20 hours ago, Hanugumo said:

It would be a little more uncomfortable for MM to have to go to the toilet and while he is taking a long leak (Unless he doesn't have too. Seeing as he is technically a full god, as his parents are full gods too and all. x3 lol), his parents would pop up and than have that lil conversation. xD

Though I do wonder what Gene would have thought & done if he would have gotten to meet MM's parents. >;3 Although on the other hand it could have ruined the date massively and all. ^^;;

 

I am surprised to hear that MM parents did not know about the Skeleton Lord though. I mean: aside from rumors of him reeking havoc on a different side of the world. Were they really THAT disinterested? =0

And oh yeah~, doting parents are truly the worst. xD Though I must admit: They seem so much nicer and more fun now compared to how you described them before you know? xD

 

And yeah, it does seems that way huh? Guess you'll need to post it in a smaller font next time. ^^;

Honestly...I'm not sure what part of him is human, lol. I just borrowed a page from Wonder Woman's origin. I mean...he's probably like Gilgamesh and a sorta 3/4 god lol. But yeah, he still has to use the toilet and can be susceptive to the common cold XD

Apollo and Aphrodite would make some nice small talk with Gene. Ares would threaten Gene and give him the stink eye for the rest of his visit, hehe.

 

If you ever read any Greek mythology, you'd know 2 things about the Greek Gods. They're self-centered and fucking crazy XD So yeah, if a bad guy isn't messing with their shit, they don't care.

There was a difference? Do tell~ For right now, I'll just make the excuse that learning the truth and being able to interact with real people changed how they're narrated, since the narration is influenced by MM's feelings.

 

Yeah, a size 14, I suppose

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18 hours ago, EcchiMultiverse said:

Honestly...I'm not sure what part of him is human, lol. I just borrowed a page from Wonder Woman's origin. I mean...he's probably like Gilgamesh and a sorta 3/4 god lol. But yeah, he still has to use the toilet and can be susceptive to the common cold XD

Apollo and Aphrodite would make some nice small talk with Gene. Ares would threaten Gene and give him the stink eye for the rest of his visit, hehe.

 

If you ever read any Greek mythology, you'd know 2 things about the Greek Gods. They're self-centered and fucking crazy XD So yeah, if a bad guy isn't messing with their shit, they don't care.

There was a difference? Do tell~ For right now, I'll just make the excuse that learning the truth and being able to interact with real people changed how they're narrated, since the narration is influenced by MM's feelings.

 

Yeah, a size 14, I suppose

Well: They did say that the Greek Gods could change into humans if they wished to be (it is part of why Zeus was able to impregnate so many women and father a LOT of demi-gods). x3 So wouldn't be too strange for MM too get fascinated by humans (even if they are more like super humans in MM current world), and want to spend some time in that world and actually experience what it is to be human. I mean: Would be a good reason for why MM isn't a full god right now, right? Even if he is partly human he can still experience what it is like after all. ^^

 

Hahaha, I think Ares should never really have much contactvwith people MM would dat, not until the relationship would be set in stone and would be too strong to ever break apart (unless the Skeleton Lord would kill that boyfriend or anything like that). ^^;;

And really? Gene and Apollo & Aphrodite would be able too have actual small talk? x3 Would have thought that Gene would be totally enamoured by both MM's parents and would prolly ruin his chances with any creater and all. x3 lol

And also: You got a point there. xD  Greek gods and goddesses & their myths are usually pretty insane/uncaring. But still too bad they didn't knkw anything about the Skeleton Lord. ^^;;

I wonder who the Skeleton Lord used to be. ^w^ and what his actual plans are. And if there is a way to give him pirpose again and all. 

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1 hour ago, Hanugumo said:

Well: They did say that the Greek Gods could change into humans if they wished to be (it is part of why Zeus was able to impregnate so many women and father a LOT of demi-gods). x3 So wouldn't be too strange for MM too get fascinated by humans (even if they are more like super humans in MM current world), and want to spend some time in that world and actually experience what it is to be human. I mean: Would be a good reason for why MM isn't a full god right now, right? Even if he is partly human he can still experience what it is like after all. ^^

 

Hahaha, I think Ares should never really have much contactvwith people MM would dat, not until the relationship would be set in stone and would be too strong to ever break apart (unless the Skeleton Lord would kill that boyfriend or anything like that). ^^;;

And really? Gene and Apollo & Aphrodite would be able too have actual small talk? x3 Would have thought that Gene would be totally enamoured by both MM's parents and would prolly ruin his chances with any creater and all. x3 lol

And also: You got a point there. xD  Greek gods and goddesses & their myths are usually pretty insane/uncaring. But still too bad they didn't knkw anything about the Skeleton Lord. ^^;;

I wonder who the Skeleton Lord used to be. ^w^ and what his actual plans are. And if there is a way to give him pirpose again and all. 

I mean, I'm not ruling out that Gene and Apollo would have sex after a few seconds of small talks XD

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7 hours ago, EcchiMultiverse said:

I mean, I'm not ruling out that Gene and Apollo would have sex after a few seconds of small talks XD

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BTW, I'm about 1/4 done. So hopefully, I'll have Chapter 15 done soon

Lol, I knew it. xD

It would be inevitable. And i do think it would kind hurt MM's feelings a lot if Gene did. ^^;; Wouldn't it?

 

I wish i could but i can not afford to be a Patron of anyone. ;n; *cries*

 

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1 hour ago, Hanugumo said:

Lol, I knew it. xD

It would be inevitable. And i do think it would kind hurt MM's feelings a lot if Gene did. ^^;; Wouldn't it?

 

I wish i could but i can not afford to be a Patron of anyone. ;n; *cries*

 

And yay!! I can hardly wait. 83 <3

It would weird out MM, that's for sure XD But MM realizes that Gene is an openly sexual being, and has grown used to such antics. After all, sex isn't really a sign of intimacy in Gene's culture, it's moreso a fun group activity to pass the time lol So while he was disappointed Gene left him to get fucked, it wasn't the sex that upset MM. Cause after the naughty stuff, MM found it funny to watch cum stream down Gene's ass lol

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