Guest Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 Nice read and inspiring, as always Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lloyd Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 Great opening salvo. Eager, as ever, for more. Thanks, Xyggurat! 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadeDragon Posted February 3, 2017 Share Posted February 3, 2017 Nice job! Glad to see you haven't lost the muscle-theft bug, yet 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xyggurat Posted February 6, 2017 Author Share Posted February 6, 2017 On 2/3/2017 at 10:34 AM, JadeDragon said: Nice job! Glad to see you haven't lost the muscle-theft bug, yet Nawp. I do want to write more, but my work-life balance has been firmly on the side of 'work' lately. -X- 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mdlftr Posted June 1, 2017 Share Posted June 1, 2017 Xyggurat, I just came across this. Well written - great details, good insights in to the minds of the characters, and excellent treatment of the foreshadowing at the end. I'm almost wistful, since I always think of muscle theft stories are partially documenting the destruction of one person (who may or may not deserve it) to the gain of another. Here, the trainer Noah seems like a decent, hard working guy. I hate to see him lose his hard work. Too bad they can't BOTH gain, but then it wouldn't be a muscle theft story, would it? Mdlftr 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mamey Posted December 6, 2017 Share Posted December 6, 2017 Es muy creativa tu historia y muy buena, pero ya no va a haber continuación? Nos dejaste con ganas de más estaremos esperando la continuación 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xyggurat Posted December 6, 2017 Author Share Posted December 6, 2017 13 hours ago, Mamey said: Es muy creativa tu historia y muy buena, pero ya no va a haber continuación? Nos dejaste con ganas de más estaremos esperando la continuación I get extremely busy and then lose focus on stories. This has been a pretty trying year for work. Some day, though! -X- 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 7, 2017 Share Posted December 7, 2017 Fingers crossed for 2018! Not just that we survive that long but also that we see a Part 2. :-) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kymuscleboy Posted December 7, 2017 Share Posted December 7, 2017 1 hour ago, skumbum said: Fingers crossed for 2018! Not just that we survive that long but also that we see a Part 2. :-) Or a Christmas present! Yes, and no nuclear war would be nice. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xyggurat Posted December 7, 2017 Author Share Posted December 7, 2017 The next installment is all about how Trump killed anyone's desire to ever have sex again. 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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