Jump to content

garrix

Recommended Posts

This is a great story. I love the set-up and the character of the outraged top, repeatedly humiliated as he is outgrown by a series of musculating bottoms. Thanks for a hot scenario.

 

  • Like 1
  • Upvote 2
Link to comment
Share on other sites

What a well written, well structured story!  The narrator tailors the perfect revenge against Aaron, targeting everything that Aaron dislikes:

-profuse body hair

-Massive, hulking, bulging muscle

-Hispanic heritage, including speaking Spanish

-total indifference to his orders to "stay small and skinny and subservient"!

 

 

Garrix, An "A" to you for concept and execution!   I especially like the context of the story universe in that the Narrator has to cast his spell of revenge in a subtle way that "won't tip off the authorities" (Wizard overseers?)  Well thought out and well executed story and concept!  Kudos to you!

I'll have to seek out more of your stories.  The themes (extreme muscle growth from a mysterious source, and oblivious to the hot sexiness of it all) are very much up my alley!  Great job!!

 

Mdlftr

  • Like 1
  • Upvote 3
Link to comment
Share on other sites

On 12/28/2016 at 3:03 AM, musclejackjuice said:

This is a great story. I love the set-up and the character of the outraged top, repeatedly humiliated as he is outgrown by a series of musculating bottoms. Thanks for a hot scenario.

 

"musculating" bottoms!

LOVE that word!   I never heard it before, and neither has Websters, but the Free Dictionary has a definition:   http://www.thefreedictionary.com/musculation 

  • Upvote 2
Link to comment
Share on other sites

On 29 décembre 2016 at 10:24 AM, Mdlftr said:

What a well written, well structured story!  The narrator tailors the perfect revenge against Aaron, targeting everything that Aaron dislikes:

-profuse body hair

-Massive, hulking, bulging muscle

-Hispanic heritage, including speaking Spanish

-total indifference to his orders to "stay small and skinny and subservient"!

 

 

Garrix, An "A" to you for concept and execution!   I especially like the context of the story universe in that the Narrator has to cast his spell of revenge in a subtle way that "won't tip off the authorities" (Wizard overseers?)  Well thought out and well executed story and concept!  Kudos to you!

I'll have to seek out more of your stories.  The themes (extreme muscle growth from a mysterious source, and oblivious to the hot sexiness of it all) are very much up my alley!  Great job!!

 

Mdlftr

Thank you so much mdlftr. I'm glad you so enjoyed it. It's really nice to see that someone really *got* what I was doing. Thank you again for your kind words. 

  • Like 1
  • Upvote 1
Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • 4 weeks later...

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

By using this site, you agree to our Guidelines, Terms of Use, & Privacy Policy.
We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue..