MrMuscleWorship Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 Hi guys, so I've just posted this intro / scene setter on my tumblr of a story I'm thinking of writing, I know it's thin on the ground right now, but as a concept what do you guys think My live-in Bodybuilder: Introduction Just shy of two years ago I answered an ad online that changed my life. It was from an 18 year old bodybuilder looking for a sponsor. Back then, Brad was a well built 18 year old. He was blonde, broad and tight, studying at college. His ad said that he was looking for a serious sponsor, who can help him fulfil his dream of becoming huge. We chatted online for months and he even flexed on cam for me a few times, in exchange for a donation to his growth fund, of course. It wasn’t long before we met in person and with little persuasion I agreed to make it a regular payment. He’d grown pretty well over only a few months. It wasn’t long before Brad had ditched college, friends and family. He’d become totally obsessed with his own mass, growing and, increasingly, in showing it off. He was spending all day, every day at the gym. He was on a constant cycle of some heavy roids and eventually ended up living in my flat after falling out with his parents over his growing steroid addiction. He’d turned into a monster of a 19 year old, and every evening now looked the same: him coming home pumped and desperate to be get off on his own mass. 19 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ro20316 Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 it is a gppd start- Short but good. Keep it coming 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TroyHunk10 Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 Sounds hot af. A lot more detail and stats though 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obsessionfodder Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 My dream life 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perados Posted December 11, 2016 Share Posted December 11, 2016 The idea sounds great. Keep it coming But yes, more details would be good. How do the characters feel, what do they think, why do they do what the do. Some conversation... and yes, you can describe the body and how it changes 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muscleinatl Posted December 12, 2016 Share Posted December 12, 2016 This sounds like the genesis of a hot story. A good many members of this forum dream of either being the sponsor or sponsee. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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