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londonboy

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I echo the sentiments from this continuation.   You and I have talked and I swear you were reading my mind.  Thank you again for the story and tumbler updates you make it look easy.  Oh for goodness sake, don't stop.

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16 hours ago, londonboy said:

When the readers are smarter than the writer is it time to quit?  Love all of your insights - they're the same that have been in my head.

 

Wait? Really? 83 You had the same thoughts in your head as me? ^^

And HELL NO!! Dun stop!! Try to add mystery to the story to make it less easy to guess what will happen next. ^w^ When readers can guess what might come next, try to put them on a false path and give us an unexpected plot twist. For example: Soon after the transference of the Sorenson bloodline's gift, Herc dies. Having served his purpose of cultivating the gift and passing it on to the next worthy generation. ^^ Or make it that even though the chosen person is worthy, that person can not control his strength and has difficulty learning it. Or stuff like that. ^^

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  • 3 weeks later...

I really want all three to wind up with this gift. also I don't think you should stop.... Do make sure to do what you feel is right because it is your story and a suprise is always nice, yet for me there have been subtle hints that all three crave that power. So it could indeed be new territory! 

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Londonboy please don't stop writing or morphing.  Speaking for myself I get so enthralled with your stories you have an awesome ability and it would be a shame to have them end.  I beg you to reconsider and thank you so much for ALL you do for us.

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  • 1 year later...

It's  been almost 3 years since this story was written and I still fully remember what ideas I wanted to draw and recreate from this. Still great ❤️

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