JadeDragon Posted October 16, 2016 Share Posted October 16, 2016 -- 8 1 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
an0n12 Posted October 16, 2016 Share Posted October 16, 2016 Thanks for posting it JadeDragon, I know looking back on old works or on life in general can be cringe worth if not painful at times but I'm sure you made a fair amount of people happy by posting it. I admit this story was one of the two that actually got me to enjoy muscle theft stories, for the most part at least, as I initially just did not like the idea of someone's hard work being stolen from them for sometimes little to no real reason; that said your work and this story are very well done and very descriptive to the point I was able to ignore my feelings and enjoy the story for what it is. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JadeDragon Posted October 16, 2016 Author Share Posted October 16, 2016 1 hour ago, an0n12 said: Thanks for posting it JadeDragon, I know looking back on old works or on life in general can be cringe worth if not painful at times but I'm sure you made a fair amount of people happy by posting it. I admit this story was one of the two that actually got me to enjoy muscle theft stories, for the most part at least, as I initially just did not like the idea of someone's hard work being stolen from them for sometimes little to no real reason; that said your work and this story are very well done and very descriptive to the point I was able to ignore my feelings and enjoy the story for what it is. Well I'm glad it's made people happy. I suppose liking muscle-theft as a genre requires some level of schadenfreude in the reader but at the same time, every smaller guy has been at the butt-end of daily micro-aggressions from buffer, taller guys. It might not sound like much, but if you can imagine each one as a mosquito bite, you'd get the idea of what it's like to be on the receiving end of them all day every day. I try to capture that, that feeling of finally winning for once and getting the upper-hand on the kind of guy who has tormented you and made you feel inadequate your entire life. It's well, not everyone's fantasy, but certainly it is a tangible, erotic fantasy for many. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esshar Posted October 16, 2016 Share Posted October 16, 2016 Well, Jade it's not always about revenge, just desserts or pay back. Sometimes one just wants to cheer for the villain. Cheers, love the story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mamey Posted October 17, 2016 Share Posted October 17, 2016 Good history, more please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esshar Posted August 18, 2017 Share Posted August 18, 2017 I want more please. Some one anyone please finish this story I want more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mamey Posted August 11, 2018 Share Posted August 11, 2018 No hay continuación? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.