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Marquis

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Cool story!  It is like a kind of thinking porn since the reader has to imagine the scenes. Amazing transformations! The writing is as good as your visual art! Would love to see more!

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Awww man, why did you choose Jude Vieber? I just hope he wasn't similar to Justin Bieber cause that singer is a suler idiot who is insane as frick. xD lol

 

Anywau: I do wonder what a 100% would grow into. ;3 <3 <3 Gosh I am so looking forwards to the next 2 parts. <3 <3 Thx for writing this awesome story man!! 8D

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6 hours ago, Hanugumo said:

Awww man, why did you choose Jude Vieber? I just hope he wasn't similar to Justin Bieber cause that singer is a suler idiot who is insane as frick. xD lol

Well that was just a silly joke. I'm not a bieber fan (or enthusiast or anything... I actually don't care for that poor sod). I just wanted the name to be sort of a ringabell thing.

6 hours ago, Hanugumo said:

Anywau: I do wonder what a 100% would grow into. ;3 <3 <3 Gosh I am so looking forwards to the next 2 parts. <3 <3 Thx for writing this awesome story man!! 8D

We'll get to that for the grand finale. :)

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17 minutes ago, Marquis said:

Well that was just a silly joke. I'm not a bieber fan (or enthusiast or anything... I actually don't care for that poor sod). I just wanted the name to be sort of a ringabell thing.

We'll get to that for the grand finale. :)

 i understand don't worry. x3 

And whohoo!!! 8D <3 <3 <3 Gosh darn it, we need to wait a while till you would be able to upload part 4 & 5. ;n; *cries*

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Firstly, thank you for posting Parts 1 and 2 along with this installment; somehow I completely missed them when you first uploaded them to the forum.

Secondly...wow. Your craft of language is exquisite. From your references to a 'fleshmancer' in Part 2 to the 'vertiginous speed of [Strebel's] speech' in the text above, your lexical panache is enviable. You have elevated a muscle growth story to the realm of literature.

And thirdly, you have created an original, fascinating and wholly believable futuristic world, one that I am thoroughly enjoying discovering. Your characterisation is rich and colourful, and even the vassals, who are very much tertiary characters, seem to have a depth to them that evokes, yes, lust, of course, but also pathos.  

I am very much looking forward to the next part!

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