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  1. wolfram456new

    The Price of Milk Part 4

    Great chapter. Cant wait for the next.
  2. wolfram456new

    AJ & Noah

    Loved how you take it slow...cant wait for the next chapter.
  3. wolfram456new

    Full Moon Rising Part 2

    Sizzling hot! More!
  4. wolfram456new

    Second Chances

    Promising start. Im excited to read the next parts. Keep going.
  5. wolfram456new

    Gus and Tyler

    You got me laughing my head off with this line. But, seriously, you cliffhangers are making me relate to Tyler. Keep them 'cummin.
  6. wolfram456new

    Gus and Tyler

    For Gus, I like that he is able to distance himself from his past and his urges. I see him as a natural intellectual. Goos job on the consistency. For Tyler, I'd like to know more about him. Im sure he is more than a dumb vain shallow jock. The interaction of the 2: so far expected from 2 complete strangers getting to know each other. The sexual tension from Gus has yet to be shown to Tyler. We know Gus is attracted. But Tyler does not. We already know Tyler's sexual need for Gus. Making the connection between the two without Gus surrendering to lust or Tyler becoming bullied would be nice. Personally, I like both to grow into muscle beasts. Keep going. No pressure. Take your story where you want to take it. Will be waiting for the next part.
  7. wolfram456new

    Gus and Tyler

    Just carry on with your character development of both Gus and Tyler. Curious to where you are taking them both...hopefully somewhere "hot".
  8. wolfram456new

    Gus and Tyler

    Wow. Gus has a dark side and not just driven by mindless vengence. He skillfully drives each of Tyler's crimes home. Interesting direction for the story. Let see where this rabbit hole goes...
  9. wolfram456new

    Gus and Tyler

    Great work on building the anticipation...but damn that cliffhanger.
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