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Sedoriku

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About Sedoriku

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  • Location
    The western edge of the land of clear waters in the land of the rising sun.
  • This profile is a...
    real profile.
  • Gender
    Male
  • Orientation
    Gay
  • What are your interests?
    Variety of things, feel free to ask.
  • What are your stats?
    I am 6'2" about 205 pounds and working on losing body fat.
  • What are your dream stats?
    Staying 6'2" and going to about 220-230 and lowering body fat.
  • Got Any Fetishes?
    Plenty, feel free to ask.

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  1. ^What he said. *┯* (It really was hot. The notion of men giving birth to muscle men seems to be becoming more and more popular and I am not complaining. I also enjoy how you nestled most of the exposition in the narrative, allowing you to go straight into the story. Though, personally, it might be a little too fast of a start. I would have loved to see some set up of what the room was like, something that allows you the writer to develop the main character's personality. However, if you were trying to make any 'every-man' type character where the reader can readily place themselves, then you do it perfectly and adding too much exposition about him would ruin the effect... ramble ramble ramble....... Long story short: good and please continue writing )
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