Aronymous

This story and its chapters are all over the place. Might want to do some proper introduction so we know a bit more about the characters and what's going on.

Posted back in May? Dang time flies.

Outdoing yourself yet again.

I love you.

Stunning visuals.

Thank god. And scarlectic.

Still it seems like massive overkill to start three topics with no stories in the story section, when there's not even a story yet. Keep it compact and easily browsable, y'all.

Call me a negative Nancy, but this doesn't belong in the story section. It's barely a story now is it. The roleplay thread.. the story thread.. on a user blog.. in a picture gallery.. all would be more fitting than in a story format, when there's no story attatched.

Since you asked for comments and suggestions, here's one: the story really needs an intro. There's no introduction of the characters, location or situation. It leaves the readers with too many questions. You can even do that by adding in a flash back, but now it feels random and rushed. It reads like it should be the 3rd chapter instead.

The black on white text is quite unneccessary.

Am loving the upload speed as well.

https://muscle-growth.org/topic/8405-the-pump-room-2-by-frklvr/

Gymnasium = high school

Riveting.